The frozen crystals came closer
Dense deep cloud kept darkening
A tiny drop came thundering down
Fell in the ocean and screamed in silence
Overjoyed at the union, it smiled in circles
Dissolved its state and became great
We happily swam
In the ocean of friendship
A threat came on one day
Followed with a shocking news
No more drops in the ocean
Made me cry until I dry
Realized that true friendship
Can never end even one die
Dedicating this verse as
An ode to Friendship
I swam to reveal
That you are a Perfect Poet
Accept me with smile
I love to accept the "Perfect Poet Award", Week 30 with an Haiku, "Accept me with smile"
Published as a part of
Thursday Poets Rally, Week 31
"A place where poetry is cherished and poets are recognized for their talents"
Ji, If you like the above quote then you can use this as a tag line for Thursday Poets Rally
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I love to nominate the following poets from week 30...
Pink Lady
Shashi
Leo
Riika
Trisha
Sillyfrog
Have a Poetic Week
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"முகமறியா நண்பர்களின் கருத்துக்களே எனக்கு படிகற்கள்"
perfect poet for a perfect award,
ReplyDeleteyour nomination shall go to week 32, right?
Thanks for the beautiful poetry...
love the pink poem.
@ Jingle
ReplyDeleteGlad to know that you loved it.. Thank you so much.. "Perfect Poet for a Perfect Award.." Happy Ji..
As you wish Ji, it goes for week 32..
--Someone Is Special--
i love the verses here SiS...a beautiful ode to friendship!
ReplyDeletei like your poems! ;-)
@ Amity
ReplyDeleteGlad you liked it Amity.. Thank you so much for your sweet words..
--Someone Is Special--
Your ode to friendship is simply beautiful.
ReplyDeletesimply beautiful...
ReplyDeleteBeautiful and amazing! Lovely ode!=D
ReplyDeleteA lovely poem. Thank you for sharing, and congrats on the award.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful one- long live friendships and all the friends together.. :)
ReplyDeleteThis is such a sweet ode.. well done!!
http://oliviasmindlymatters.wordpress.com/2010/05/14/a-book-is-an-open-window/
@ angelacohan321
ReplyDeleteGlad you felt it beautiful... Thank you so much..
--Someone Is Special--
@ angelacohan321
ReplyDeleteonce again thank you so much..
--Someone Is Special--
@ RiikaInfinityy
ReplyDeleteGlad you felt it beautiful Riika.. Thank you so much.. I loved your poem but couldn't comment due to security restrictions of domains..
--Someone Is Special--
@ morganna
ReplyDeleteGlad you loved it.. Thank you so much for the wishes and sweet words morganna..
--Someone Is Special--
@ Olivia
ReplyDeleteHappy to hear those words olivia dear.. Thank you so much for the wishes and I too wish the same..
--Someone Is Special--
If a friendship have died then it wasn't really a friendship ... and sometimes being sad over that was not true is not worth! I like your poem, gives a food for a thought or a two! Thank you for visiting my blog! It was a pleasure to have you there!
ReplyDeleteWow, your poem is very beautiful, and I really like the approach on the topic. The whole drops in the ocean concept. Beautifully written! One of the best odes to friendship I've read.
ReplyDeleteawesome poem!
ReplyDeleteCongratulations for the award!
:)
Your words touched my heart, amazing job!
ReplyDeleteYour words here were very touching and sad for the loss of a friend but whose love will stay in your heart even though they have passed on.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful...
Gayle xoxo
very touching.. I loved the analogy.. the little smiling drop..
ReplyDeletetc,
A bittersweet poem. Lovely.
ReplyDeleteSIS, there's just something very charming about how you put your posts together and what you say.
ReplyDeleteCongratulations on your award and on a fine poem. (Love the photo!)
That's a very nice thought, sir.
ReplyDeleteCute picture, too. Nice to meet you!
Peace, UT
A fantastic write - thanks for the enjoyable read!
ReplyDeletelife without friends is plain boring. ;)
ReplyDeletekeep up the good work dear. ;)
lovely thought to share!
ReplyDeleteBeautiful :)
ReplyDeleteMy entry for week 31
http://hindawy.wordpress.com/2010/10/20/the-other-side-of-the-sun/
what a touching piece, SiS! death does not spell the end of love shared with another. that love remains in the heart of the one who survived. friendship- true friendship- is one such love. simply beautiful!
ReplyDeletethanks so much for the nomination. i really appreciate it. :)
A Tranquil Soul
A beautiful ode to friendship. Not too many people write about that. And congratulations on your award too.
ReplyDeleteAh, friendship is such a beautiful sentiment. :]
ReplyDeleteKeep it up love!
ReplyDeleteThis made me miss my friends.
=(
Luvluv,
B
A lovely poem with a lovely sentiment. I will strive to write a friendship poem of my own thanks to this.
ReplyDeleteAmazing, heartfelt and raw. That was quite the epic journey with such few words. I am glad I had a chance to read this and will toast to the fallen in honor.
ReplyDeleteA beautiful and wonderfully written dedication - to friendships and to those both giver and receiver of such beauties, a treasure. Great sentiments.
ReplyDeletePerfectly lovely and perfectly true. Thank you for a sweet and touching poem, SIS.
ReplyDeleteHappy Rally and Happy Potluck days ...
Poem on ...
P.S.: Congratulations on the award and fine choices to pass to ...
ReplyDeleteCongrats!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ReplyDeleteAwww... I think we two well know what true friendship is... Awesome : thanks for sharing this and also for reading my blog.
Nice poem(: It's cute.
ReplyDelete@ scentofmyheart
ReplyDeleteThank you so much for your sweet words.. Happy to have here too and also for the sweet comment..
--Someone Is Special--
@ deadpoet88
ReplyDeleteOMG deadpoet88 I am flying to Cloud 9.. Glad you liked it and felt it beautiful.. Thank you so much for your lovely stay here.. Hope you enjoyed..
--Someone Is Special--
@ Gabriela Abalo
ReplyDeleteGlad you felt it awesome... Thank you for those sweet wishes..
--Someone Is Special--
@ Thoughts Not Lost
ReplyDeleteGlad it touched your heart.. Thank you so much Thoughts Not Lost...............
--Someone Is Special--
@ bodhirose
ReplyDeleteGlad it touched your heart.. Thank you so much bodhirose for those soothing words..
--Someone Is Special--
@ Alakaline
ReplyDeleteGlad it touched you.. Thank you so much and happy to hear that..
--Someone Is Special--
@ frayedges
ReplyDeleteThank you so much frayedges for those sweet words..
--Someone Is Special--
@ JamieDedes
ReplyDeleteJamie, glad to know that and happy to hear those.. Thank you so much for your wishes.. and also for liking the photo..
--Someone Is Special--
@ me2watson
ReplyDeleteGlad you loved that thought and a amateur writer, yet to travel many miles.. Call me SiS or Someone Is Special and no Sir.. please
Thank you so much for your wishes. and wish you the same..
--Someone Is Special--
@ abthomas
ReplyDeleteGlad you felt it fantastic and happy to know that you enjoyed it.. Thank you so much..
--Someone Is Special--
@ chamiechamz
ReplyDeleteOf course.. Thank you so much chamiechamz..
--Someone Is Special--
@ mairmusic
ReplyDeleteGladly, thank you so much mairmusic for those lovely words..
--Someone Is Special--
@ Hindawy
ReplyDeleteGlad you felt it beautiful... Thank you so much for those lovely words..
--Someone Is Special--
@ Bing (PinkLady)
ReplyDeleteGlad you felt it beautiful and it do touched your heart.. Thank you so much and friendship is friendship, the most precious relationship in the world and it never ends or dies..
--Someone Is Special--
@ likewine
ReplyDeleteGladly and happy that you felt it beautiful.. Hmm I love to write more on that.. Thank you so much for your wishes..
--Someone Is Special--
@ pandaheroes
ReplyDeleteOf course it is.. Thank you so much for your wonderful stay here...
--Someone Is Special--
@ thisisbrixx
ReplyDeleteThank you so much for your wonderful words... I wish you lots of love..
--Someone Is Special--
@ daddywasastreetcorner
ReplyDeleteThank you so much daddywasastreetcorner.. Glad to know that..
--Someone Is Special--
@ LeiffyV
ReplyDeleteYou made my day dear.. Thank you so much for those wonderful encouraging words.. Gladly I loved your stay here..
--Someone Is Special--
@ Chris G
ReplyDeleteOnce again to Colud 9.. Thank for those sweet words..
--Someone Is Special--
@ JamieDedes
ReplyDeleteGladly Jamie.. Happy to hear those encouraging words.. Thanks a billion...
--Someone Is Special--
@ JamieDedes
ReplyDeleteThanks a Billion for those encouraging words that will inspire me to write more and explore more..
--Someone Is Special--
@ Lu Ann
ReplyDeleteThanks a ton Lu Ann .. Gladly frendship is the most precious and purest relationship in this world...
--Someone Is Special--
@ ChildofaGodUnseen
ReplyDeleteHappy to know that.. Thank you so much ChildofaGodUnseen.........
--Someone Is Special--
Swimming in the ocean of friendship. May it ever be so. Beautiful ode to friendship.
ReplyDelete@ dan roberson
ReplyDeleteGlad to know that.. Thank you so much for your wonderful words..
--Someone Is Special--