A ray of hope
Came through her eyes, the window
Enlightened my life
Published as a part of
Magic Pie, 36
recuerda mi corazon - Haiku My Heart
FROM THE AUTHOR's DESK
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"முகமறியா நண்பர்களின் கருத்துக்களே எனக்கு படிகற்கள்"
love it,
ReplyDeletevery lovely said.
@ Jingle
ReplyDeleteHappy to hear those words Ji.. Thank you so much..
--Someone Is Special--
Lovely. Are these your eyes?
ReplyDeleteVery lovely eyes and wonderful haiku!
ReplyDelete@ willow
ReplyDeletethank you so much .. No it is not mine.. I got them from google..
--Someone Is Special--
@ Kristen Haskell
ReplyDeleteThank you so much for your sweet words..
--Someone Is Special--
Thanks for this. I found the use of the piccture very clever too.
ReplyDeleteHave a nice day, Boonie
that's a brilliant haiku for magpie's image prompt. well done!
ReplyDeleteNice!
ReplyDeletefortune tellers
Gd one.
ReplyDeletei could feel the light from here. beautiful.
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nice. love the play on the eyes being the window...so much can be seen in them...nice magpie
ReplyDeletethis is beautiful! Everything on your blog is beautiful!
ReplyDeleteTotally Delightful Magpie...
ReplyDeleteLoved it!
Very nice!
ReplyDelete@ Boonie S
ReplyDeleteGlad to know that.. Thank you so much and wish you the same.
--Someone Is Special--
@ Bing (PinkLady)
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Bing.. Glad to know that you felt it brilliant..
--Someone Is Special--
@ gautami tripathy
ReplyDeleteThank you so much gautami...
--Someone Is Special--
@ kathi harris
ReplyDeleteThank you so much kathi harris...
--Someone Is Special--
@ Trisha
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Trisha.. Happy to know that you felt it beautiful
--Someone Is Special--
@ Brian Miller
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Brian.. Happy to know that you loved the play.. Thanks once again..
--Someone Is Special--
@ Riette
ReplyDeleteGlad to know that you felt the haiku beautiful and also the Blog.. Thanks a Billion..
--Someone Is Special--
@ Erratic Thoughts
ReplyDeleteGlad to know that you felt it delightul.. thanks a lot..
--Someone Is Special--
@ Tumblewords
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Tumblewords
--Someone Is Special--
yes...eyes, the window to the soul.
ReplyDeleteperfect!
so glad to have you here on haiku my heart.
But the eyes may be the window to my soul, yet look upon your gaze and feel welcomed.
ReplyDeleteNice write.
@ rebecca
ReplyDeleteIt is my pleasure rebecca.. Thank you so much and happy to hear those words..
--Someone Is Special--
@ Reflections
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Marshall. Glad you felt it nice.. Thanks..
--Someone Is Special--
Delightful, peaceful -- beautiful thoughts, beautiful mind, nice take on the magpie.
ReplyDeletecheers,
joanny
http://thedowsersdaughter.blogspot.com/
@ joanny
ReplyDeleteGlad you felt it delightul, peaceful and beautiful.. Thank you so much joanny.. Cheers..
--Someone Is Special--