“Why he is not accepting my love? Am I not that beautiful? Am I not that sexy? Am I not that rich? Am I not a perfect match to him? Why I fell in love with him? Why this is killing me? I am confused totally, God, please save me, please from this unbearable pain”
PS: I read this in a paper found near her dead body written in blood. As a kind-hearted human being, I want to share this piece of info to everyone and request you to think twice before taking a decision that ends your life.
Six Word Saturday:- “Think twice before taking stupid decisions”
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That's a 55 that'll knock the socks off anyone who reads it...but I can't help but notice the graphic you used,......the ledge is only inches off the ground?
ReplyDeleteMy 55 is a double whammy this week, two for the price of one. Of course, as always, you need to scroll down below my Friday's Show n Tell.
The link is HERE I'd love to have you stop by for a visit.
oh there is a twist in the pit of my stomach. and sometimes that is all the ledge you need...tight 55.
ReplyDeleteHuh ..thats sad , probably they should have talked to someone before taking such step , they would have understood how beautiful they are , to some , if not to the particular one ... Crisp and though provoking ! :)
ReplyDeleteMushy loves ends tragically...
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when love hurts that much that someone would rather die...what a tragedy..and well written in your 55
ReplyDeleteI hope she steps down...it was an interesting juxtaposition - the height she's leaning over and the words. But no one is worth that kind of mental anguish.
ReplyDeleteThis is so so sad. A young life lost. I'm reading lately there's a real epidemic of completed suicides. Makes me cry.
ReplyDeleteThis was not easy to read but I'm glad you posted it, thank you.
It's hard to imagine the pain and desperation that lead to so final a solution.
ReplyDeleteSad. So sad.
ReplyDeleteYes...it is so very sad that this is often the only solution one can find to end the pain. I am so thankful that when I have been in the pit of despair that God calls to me and pulls me back out. I'm glad I stopped by.
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ReplyDeleteOnce again you have touched our heart.
Excellent 55 My Friend..
Thanks for playing, thanks for visiting, ande have a Kick Ass Week-End
@ Brian Miller
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Brian.. Thanks for liking it..
--Someone Is Special--
@ HOOTIN' ANN
ReplyDeleteyes it will.. Thank you so much.. Surely will stop by yours, thanks for the link..
--Someone Is Special--
@ adreamygal
ReplyDeleteI accept your point, she should have talked to someone.. Thanks for your thoughts..
--Someone Is Special--
@ gautami tripathy
ReplyDeleteSometime it happens.. Surely will stop by yours..
--Someone Is Special--
@ Claudia
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Claudia for your sweet words
--Someone Is Special--
@ TALON
ReplyDeleteEveryone hope for that.. Thanks for your words..
--Someone Is Special--
@ Jannie Funster
ReplyDeleteYes a soul that loved to live with lots of dreams is no more.. Everyone should consider this and act accordingly..
--Someone Is Special--
@ PattiKen
ReplyDeleteIt is hard to imagine and believe.. that is the reason for such decisions. Thank you so much for stopping by..
--Someone Is Special--
@ Monkey Man
ReplyDeleteYes hard to make it..
--Someone Is Special--
@ 5thsister
ReplyDeleteHappy to know that you the heartfelt thanks.. Yes it is a sad decision...
--Someone Is Special--
@ G-Man
ReplyDeleteThank you so much G-Man.. I am happy to hear those.. Thanks a lot for your wishes.. and I wish you the same..
--Someone Is Special--
this is very very thoughtprovoking and kind.
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@ trisha
ReplyDeleteglad to know that.. Thanks you so much for being regular on my blog and wishing me good luck..
--Someone Is Special--
Oh the point and position a person must be in the make that difficult decision. Sometimes I wonder if they mentally comprehend that it is forever. :o( Great 55. Sad truth.
ReplyDelete@ sheila said...
ReplyDeleteWelcome to Few Miles! Happy to know that you felt it great but yes it is sad.. Everyone should think twice before taking such stupid decisions..
--Someone Is Special--
oh, save the girl...
ReplyDeletethis is sad SiS! if it is true story, how sad it is, all because of love?
i like your short n crisps stories!:-)
@ Amity
ReplyDeleteI was not in a position to save the girl and she is no more.
of course it is sad and that is the reason for me to pen down this to make people aware..
Glad to know that you like my short stories Amity..
--Someone Is Special--
Very haunting words. Thanks for playing 6WS!
ReplyDelete@ Call Me Cate
ReplyDeleteLoved it.. Happy Six Words..
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