First Heatbeat
The first heartbeat heard
of the awaited gift, her
Rejoicing Moments
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Prompt: Rejoice
Submitted to Monday Poetry Train Revisited

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Waiting with abated breath and then exultation!! Nice take on the prompt.
ReplyDeletelove it!
ReplyDeleteTruly a time to rejoice this. :)
ReplyDelete@ Nanka
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Nanka for your sweet encouraging words..
--Someone Is Special--
@ Jingle
ReplyDeleteI am very happy to know that you loved it.. Thank you so much Ji..
--Someone Is Special--
@ Rumya
ReplyDeleteYes Rumya... I have to say girls are very lucky, first heartbeat heard, first time when baby touches the walls, first kick, first roll, first everything.. Girls are lucky and proud to be a MOM...
--Someone Is Special--
a growing life within is one of God's greatest blessings. it is the start of a new season in life. truly the best time to rejoice.
ReplyDeletei am truly impressed, sis :)
Rejoice (Haiku)
hearing that first heartbeat...it's a forever feeling that can never be erased....
ReplyDeleteBeautiful!
ReplyDeletePamela
@ Bing (PinkLady)
ReplyDeleteHappy to hear those sweet encouraging words from you Bing.. Thank you so much..
--Someone Is Special--
@ ms pie
ReplyDeleteyes it is... Thank you so much for stopping by..
--Someone Is Special--
@ flaubert
ReplyDeleteThank you so much for your encouraging words..
--Someone Is Special--