"Please, I hope you will understand, lets part" said she and left the place. Those words made me tremor, left me in a state of rampant and caused unbearable pain to my fragile heart. If I think of this then I should die this moment. But, but, I love to live with those sweet memories.
Info:- 55-Fiction refers to fictional writings bounded to a maximum of 55 words.
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Prompt: #76 - "If I should die, think only this of me"
Prompt: Fragile, Rampant, Tremor
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Wow.. great use of using one short piece for so many prompts. 55 words... I'm impressed. Will have to check those out. Thanks and Happy Wednesday.
ReplyDeleteWOW... you got so much into this one piece. Love and Light, Sender
ReplyDeleteNice pic...and very well written.. :)
ReplyDeleteI relate so badly to these words...
ReplyDeletegreat one
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Very nice offering, the greatest thing about it is the few words carry so much power! Thanks for sharing!
ReplyDeleteSimply Superb, The Like The Image Most..Since It Has Everything It Has In The Sentences You Describe.
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Thanks For Sharing
Keep Posting More Good Ones :)
Wham, Bam thank you!
ReplyDeleteso sweet,
ReplyDeletevery moving when reading it.
I could not possibly CRITICIZE this!!! It's absolutely beautiful. Sad, true for so many, yet beautifully composed.
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Just scroll down below the 'artsy' part. hehehehehe
oh. parting is such painful sorrow...i hate to even think about these things really...makes me ache...
ReplyDeleteState of rampant? Is that near Ohio? (LOL!) Nice but sad 55.
ReplyDeletethis was sad - but beautifully done - even with the tears on the paper...nice 55
ReplyDeleteThis was a very sad 55. Parting is never fun.
ReplyDelete"Parting is such sweet sorrow" well penned, remedy for a broken heart is to love again.
ReplyDeleteNice 55er,
cheers,
joanny
Good one :)
ReplyDeletehope you well...Thanks for visiting...
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@ Sumit Sarkar
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@ Whitesnake
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@ Jingle
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@ HOOTIN' ANNI
ReplyDeleteGlad to know that.. Thank you so much for those wonderful words.. Sure will visit yours, i was unwell and that is the reason for the very late response..
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@ Brian Miller
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@ Eric Alder
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Glad you felt the essence.... Thank you so much for those wonderful words..
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@ PattiKen
ReplyDeleteof course it is aching.. Thank you for your thoughts..
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@ joanny
ReplyDeletesometimes that is the remedy, sometimes not.. Thank you so much for your thoughts..
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@ Sh@s
ReplyDeleteGladly.. Thank you so much..
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@ Jingle
ReplyDeleteI am feeling better.. Thanks for the wishes ji..
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