Haiku Heights meme is hosting a Haiku Challenge for the second time in the same year and third time overall, "The September Heights", simply write Haiku a day for a month based on the theme given. The theme for the day is 'Drawbridge', thank you Nanka! If you wish to join the challenge stop by here.
After a long time, I'm writing Haiku and I hope you will enjoy it. I'm determined to complete the challenge despite my return trip to India and trips to Chennai, Kerala, Mumbai and Goa. Please wish me luck! and here you go! PS: Dear Leo this is not a haibun :P
a drawbridge
binds two souls within
magical
unfading first l♥ve
magical
binds two souls within
a drawbridge
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"முகமறியா நண்பர்களின் கருத்துக்களே எனக்கு படிகற்கள்"
I can't exactly say why, but I love this! Poetry is like that!
ReplyDeleteMagical Love and so your magical words :)
ReplyDelete''Unfading first love''
Beautiful! :)
I'm really enchanted with the word: Magical.
ReplyDeleteUnfading I'd say =)
I'm all for magical drawbridges!
ReplyDeleteVery nice. Thanks for sharing!
ReplyDeletewow ! this is lovely!!
ReplyDeleteI loved the words play in this poem!!!
Indeed love is lovely :)
Magical indeed..
ReplyDeleteand thanks a lot Saravana for your help.It worked,,hopefully I shall be participating in BAT this time..Thanks again
magical
ReplyDeletebinds two souls within
a drawbridge
Lovely .. truly magical words ~~
beautiful 'magical' words....nice work
ReplyDeleteI like reading haiku and especially the romantic kind. Glad I stopped by :)
ReplyDeleteMagical drawbridges are the gateway to love, no question.
ReplyDeleteGood day SiS, I am glad to see you here again in a new September Heights Challenge. So good to see so much familiar faces on this new Challenge for haiku poets.
ReplyDeleteI love the way you have written and have given that special lay-out to this haiku. Wonderfully done. You told me once you're a romantic writier/poet ... well with this one you touch the romance.
SIS -- I forgot the exact name of the style of Haiku --- but I enjoyed it. Nice to see you as a participant :)
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@ Barbara
ReplyDeletePoetry is like that! Thanks!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Someone is Special
@ Little One,
ReplyDeleteThank you Magical Little One!
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@ Hopeless Romantic
ReplyDeleteWelcome abroad HR!
I'm glad to enchant you with my words.. Unfading, it is....
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@ Magical Mystical Teacher
ReplyDeleteYou too MMT! I'm always!
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@ Kathy Donlan
ReplyDeleteThank you so much for stopping by! Happy!
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@ ashzzes,
ReplyDeleteThank you so much.. Glad you loved it :)
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@ odyzz
ReplyDeleteGlad it worked.. and glad to read your BAT post!
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@ Anu ~*~
ReplyDeleteThank you so much sister :)
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@ joanne
ReplyDeleteGlad joanne.. Happy Man you know!
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@ Ghazala Hossain
ReplyDeleteI'm so glad you stopped by! Pleasure to have you here..
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@ PattiKen
ReplyDeleteGlad to have you here after a very long gap! Happy Man..
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@ Kristjaan Panneman
ReplyDeleteWelcome Mr. Chevrefeuille.. :)
I'm glad to see you in this challenge.. Happy you know :) Glad you still remember what I told you months ago.. Happy!!!!!!!!!!!!
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@ beccagivens,
ReplyDeleteYou are back here.. Happy!!!!!!! It is Nasaiku becca.. Happy to meet you :)
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