~ a dewdrop ~
The third day of the challenge, "The September Heights" begins; The theme for the day is 'loneliness', thank you Piphi for the suggestion!
a lonely heart tale
amidst thy aliens
a helpless dewdrop
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So, you started writing Haiku. Good..challenge is more cracking now. Leo and I have already touched the theme of raindrop, and here you are, presenting dewdrop with a new angle! Fallen leaves are always trodden my friend; and with them, these poor dewdrops.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful!
ReplyDeleteI guess we worked on the same line of thought...
ReplyDeletebut of course yours is a real gem ..
Nice :)
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Village Girl
There are many lonely-heart tales in this world. You have told one of them in a handful of words.
ReplyDeleteA Long Loneliness
A helpless dewdrop!!...So sad!!...beautiful haiku :)
ReplyDeleteLonely girl
This is so fragile ... a dewdrop to show how deep loneliness can be. Well done SiS.
ReplyDeletevery beautiful, I loved the phrase 'helpless dewdrop' :)
ReplyDelete"a helpless dewdrop" indeed a person in loneliness feels it... so well defined loved your haiku!
ReplyDeleteThis is a lovely haiku. And gently shows us how loneliness can be.
ReplyDelete@ Diwakar Narayan,
ReplyDeleteI'm back writing Haiku after a long time and pleasure to write Haiku :) Glad you too started writing.. Keep writing bro!
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@ Paper heart
ReplyDeleteBeautiful!
Welcome abroad Paper heart! Thanks!
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@ odyzz
ReplyDeleteGlad we wrote on the same line of thought.. I bet yours will be a gem too! Thanks!
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@ roopz,
ReplyDeleteHappy to have you here.. Thanks! I shall visit soon :)
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@ Magical Mystical Teacher,
ReplyDeleteAbsolutely right. There are so many MMT.. Thanks for visiting!
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@ Sri Valli
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Valli.. Glad to have you in the challenge and to see you here.. Keep visiting!
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@ Kristjaan Panneman
ReplyDeleteGlad,glad and glad to read your encouraging words.. Thanks and Happy to have you here.. :)
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@ Saru Singhal
ReplyDeleteGlad to have you here Saru. Thanks! :) :)
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@ MAHARUKH
ReplyDeleteThank you so much for the comment and for following my blog Maharukh. Happy!
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@ Ellecee
ReplyDeleteGlad to have you here after a long gao Ellecee! Keep visiting! :)
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Touching!
ReplyDeleteIt happens when we have so many people around but still they fails to fill the space in life that needs to filled!
Yes, you are right little one!!
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