The day twelve of the challenge, "The September Heights" is on. The theme for the day is 'Rain', thank you P.Mist!
clouds shed tears
as my tears dried out
is it rain?
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"முகமறியா நண்பர்களின் கருத்துக்களே எனக்கு படிகற்கள்"
The season the atmosphere feels your pain and is responding... wow how beautiful that will be... :)
ReplyDeleteamazing composition
Thank you so much Maharukh!!!
DeleteWell written :)
ReplyDeleteVirgin happiness!
Thank you so much Pranita!!
DeleteStrong feelings below the surface. I love the question at the end!
ReplyDeleteThank you Barbara... Glad you loved the question :)
DeleteWonderfully composed. Really a nice take on rain. Tears dried up ... than rain comes ... heavenly tears ... awesome.
ReplyDeleteYes.. :)
DeleteAh.. maybe its a rain of joy, celebrating the end of your tears?
ReplyDeleteCan be? What you think Leo?
DeleteI like this haiku. The heart asking the question that may not have an answer.
ReplyDeleteThank you Elecee and glad you like it :)
DeleteI like the contradiction in this... the coming of the rain just as the tears end. Lovely.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Pattiken :)
DeleteYes, SiS, it's rain..as said by others too , rain of joy...
ReplyDeleteRS:)
Rain of joy!! It is!!!
Deleteyeah, it is rain... nicely-worked.
ReplyDeleteMariya Koleva
http://phoenix-em.com/mariyakoleva
Thank you :)
DeleteSimple and lovely
ReplyDeleteThank you so much :)
DeleteIts like after the sorrowful tears the showering of rain is subsiding the pain and violent emotions.
ReplyDeleteAwesome! :)
Glad to know :) Thank you :)
DeleteI like poems that leave me with unanswered questions.
ReplyDeleteSeven Rains
Glad to know that MMT!
DeleteToo goood...
ReplyDeletehttp://locomente.blogspot.in/2012/09/and-i-fell-in-love.html
Thank you so much :)
DeleteAh! I could feel those words. I shall appoint you and Vinay as my Haiku teachers....
ReplyDeleteSure Saru!! Happy to help you!!
Deletejust beautiful.. :)
ReplyDeleteThank you so much deepak!!
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