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The day twelve of the challenge, "The September Heights" is on. The theme for the day is 'Rain', thank you P.Mist!


clouds shed tears
as my tears dried out
is it rain?


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  1. NAWALSeptember 12, 2012 at 12:16 AM

    The season the atmosphere feels your pain and is responding... wow how beautiful that will be... :)

    amazing composition

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  2. PranitaSeptember 12, 2012 at 12:20 AM

    Well written :)
    Virgin happiness!

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  3. BarbaraSeptember 12, 2012 at 12:29 AM

    Strong feelings below the surface. I love the question at the end!

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    1. Someone is SpecialAugust 17, 2013 at 2:49 AM

      Thank you Barbara... Glad you loved the question :)

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  4. ChèvrefeuilleSeptember 12, 2012 at 1:57 AM

    Wonderfully composed. Really a nice take on rain. Tears dried up ... than rain comes ... heavenly tears ... awesome.

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  5. Vinay Leo R.September 12, 2012 at 3:12 AM

    Ah.. maybe its a rain of joy, celebrating the end of your tears?

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  6. ElleceeSeptember 12, 2012 at 4:57 AM

    I like this haiku. The heart asking the question that may not have an answer.

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  7. PattiKenSeptember 12, 2012 at 8:34 AM

    I like the contradiction in this... the coming of the rain just as the tears end. Lovely.

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  8. Ramesh SoodSeptember 12, 2012 at 10:15 AM

    Yes, SiS, it's rain..as said by others too , rain of joy...

    RS:)

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  9. Mariya KolevaSeptember 12, 2012 at 2:22 PM

    yeah, it is rain... nicely-worked.

    Mariya Koleva
    http://phoenix-em.com/mariyakoleva

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  10. AnonymousSeptember 12, 2012 at 4:40 PM

    Simple and lovely

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  11. SimranSeptember 12, 2012 at 5:17 PM

    Its like after the sorrowful tears the showering of rain is subsiding the pain and violent emotions.
    Awesome! :)

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  12. Magical Mystical TeacherSeptember 12, 2012 at 5:49 PM

    I like poems that leave me with unanswered questions.

    Seven Rains

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  13. LocomenteSeptember 12, 2012 at 5:56 PM

    Too goood...

    http://locomente.blogspot.in/2012/09/and-i-fell-in-love.html

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  14. Saru SinghalSeptember 15, 2012 at 3:16 AM

    Ah! I could feel those words. I shall appoint you and Vinay as my Haiku teachers....

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  15. Deepak KripalDecember 5, 2012 at 5:36 AM

    just beautiful.. :)

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