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The footprints on the beach sand were very vivid and illustrative of the path Ajay had travelled to “see” them on the photo that he once took when he and Neha were at the beach. Neha’s heart is now beating for him as her eyes pictured for him the scenes of her last times. He drank a sip of her favourite capuchino and he closed his eyes, that silently reassured him that true love never dies and the last word uttered by her kept on ringing in his mind, “Goodbye”
PS:
- I had penned down this story based on a real life experience that happened to my friend Ajay and Neha. The image in this post is not the original one. I am dedicating this post to Neha as she still lives in our heart. Not everyone can be Neha and Ajay. “True Love Never Dies”
- Leo, PS I had considered your suggestion and spelled Friend as Friend.
- This post has been published by me as a part of Blog-a-ton, Thursday Tales (Image: Footsteps), Three Word Wednesday (drink, feeble, predict).
- Special Thanks to Debosmita for suggesting a topic that gave me an opportunity to pen down this and for “What If” as that was the topic that I first penned down for Blog-a-ton.
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"முகமறியா நண்பர்களின் கருத்துக்களே எனக்கு படிகற்கள்"
Poignant! Ajay was blind? That was not clear in the beginning
ReplyDelete@Ritu
ReplyDeleteHmmm.. Yeah he was Blind from his birth.. Thanks for stopping by Few Miles..
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Someone Is Special
Hmmm.. I am at loss of words now
ReplyDeleteVery touching and heartfelt.
ReplyDelete@Guddu
ReplyDeleteI am happy that you felt the pain.. Thanks for stopping by Few Miles..
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@Vivek
ReplyDeleteI am happy that felt it touchy... Thanks a ton for stopping by Few Miles..
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Someone Is Special
Nice narration,but the end left me craving for more details.
ReplyDeleteAll the best! :)
@Rinaya
ReplyDeleteHmm I promised him not to reveal any of his personal things. Thanks a ton for visiting my blog and do keep visiting..
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very touchy narration Saravana, a poignant tale..!
ReplyDeleteATB for Blog-a-Ton 13 dude! :)
@Leo
ReplyDeleteI am glad you loved it, thanks a ton.. Wish you the same..
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really nice tale,touching one.heard first of this kind.
ReplyDeleteI wish they had lived together.
@Anurag
ReplyDeleteThanks for your wonderful words of encouragement, your wishes and also for stopping by Few Miles Frequently, thanks a ton..
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Love the idea of Neha donating her eyes to the blind Ajay.
ReplyDeleteVery touching...
@Rumya
ReplyDeleteI am happy that the story touched your heart, thanks a ton for stopping by Few Miles, do be regular on my updates.
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This is sooo gud!!
ReplyDeleteGud luck :)
Shruti
@Shruthi
ReplyDeleteI am happy that you like it a lot. Thanks a ton for the wishes, for stopping for Few Miles and do keep coming..
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That was a heart felt story, man. Well written. All the best!
ReplyDeleteThis story is so touching especially since it is a true story of the presence of mind of a friend to donate her eyes to the person she loved the most...all the best :))
ReplyDelete@Karthik
ReplyDeleteI am happy that you felt the story.. Thanks for your wishes and also for stopping by Few Miles. do keep coming..
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@pushpee
ReplyDeleteI am very happy that you like Neha's wish. Thanks a ton for your wishes and also for stopping by Few Miles. Do keep coming..
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thank u for the search & link Saravana, but i've my posts and comments with me still, at Wordpress.. :)
ReplyDeletei'll try to settle in over there..! Do keep visiting..!
@Leo
ReplyDeleteSure I will, but my frequency will be less as I don't have access to Wordpress blogs from my company.
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What a beautiful story...it is certainly a testament of love. Lovely writing here.
ReplyDelete@The Write Girl
ReplyDeleteI am happy that you loved the story, Thanks a ton for coming back to Few Miles, do keep coming..
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Someone Is Special
Very touching and what was more moving about it is that you said it was a true story :(
ReplyDeleteGood luck for BATOM! :)
short and well narrated!
ReplyDeletebest wishes for BAT!
@evanescentthoughts
ReplyDeleteI am happy that you felt it, thanks a ton for stopping by Few Miles and also for your wishes. Do keep coming.
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@magiceye
ReplyDeleteThanks for your wishes and also for stopping by Few Miles, do keep coming..
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Thank you for stopping by my blog and showing me a way to your wonderful blog :D
ReplyDeleteIt was a wonderfully written beautiful story that brought out the warmth of true love in a very different perspective :)
The fact that it is a true story adds all the more charm to this touching tale :)
Keep up the good work and best wishes for BAT :)
Cheers!!
Nowadays I don't blog much so don't read regularly but will try to keep up as much as possible.
ReplyDeleteBy the way, nice story. :)
hi! quite a touching story. nice and simple narration. i like it. all the best for BAT.
ReplyDelete@dialoguewithyou
ReplyDeleteI am happy after reading your comment. Thanks for stopping by Few Miles, for your wishes and also for wonderful and encouraging words. Do keep coming..
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@Nethra
ReplyDeleteThanks for visiting, for your few words of encouragement and do keep coming..
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@A Restless Mind With A Sensitive Heart!
ReplyDeleteThanks for stopping by Few Miles and also for your wonderful words of encouragement and wishes. Do keep coming and enjoy my travel in the world of blog...
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Quite touchy... a lovely read...
ReplyDeleteOh my god. This is really unbelievable. Seeing the life through the eyes of someone he loved and living this life through her heartbeats. Truely there is no goodbyes for true love. I feel for that guy. May god bless him.
ReplyDelete@Jayanta Deka
ReplyDeleteThanks for stopping by Few Miles, I hope you enjoyed the stay do keep coming...
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@Nithin R S
ReplyDeleteThanks a ton for stopping by Few Miles, for your wishes to Ajay and also for your encouraging words..
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Beautifully narrated touchy story. It's like two lovers mingle into one physically and spiritually. Awesome stuff !!
ReplyDelete@binzy
ReplyDeleteI am happy that liked it a lot. Thanks a ton for stopping by Few Miles, do keep coming to feed me with your thoughts..
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It was beautiful....i am sorry for your friend...honestly i am touched and pray that ajay lives a gr8 life
ReplyDelete@Shahid Mukadam a.k.a Shady West Side
ReplyDeleteThanks a ton for stopping by Few Miles, for the wishes to Ajay and also I am happy that the story touched your heart.
Do keep coming.
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Touched the heart..
ReplyDelete@Nitty
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wow dis ws tru eh...gud to knoe tht such gud pple exist even 2day...nice post der
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@devilzangel
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Liked it very much...especially, since u did justice to it!
ReplyDeleteAll the best for BAT!!!
A very well written story. The notion that its a true story makes it more heart touching. I wanted to read more of it as I liked it a lot.
ReplyDeleteBest of luck! =)
Heartfelt true story.
ReplyDeleteATB for BAT13
Gkam - Goodbye
@mayur
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@R Zaib
ReplyDeleteI am happy to know that you felt heart touching..Welcome to Few Miles, thanks a ton do keep coming...
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@gkam
ReplyDeleteI am happy to know that you felt the story... Thanks a ton for stopping by Few Miles, do keep coming...
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drama in real life... best of luck to you and to ajay
ReplyDelete@Worthless Rantings
ReplyDeleteWelcome to Few Miles. Thanks for stopping by and also for your wonderful words on my blog. Do keep visiting..
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Simple and touching
ReplyDelete@ Saravana
ReplyDeleteI loved the whole narration...but more than that I'm so touched with your sincere efforts behind the post!
The love the affections defintely reflects back so well in those simple lines!
I loved the simplicity of emotion and dare to beleive in Goodbye is never forever!
Bow to U great work/word
~Keep the Spark ALive..
thats a touching story narrated not only with words but with emotions. excellent piece of writing. Not every Ajay is lucky enough to have a Neha like this!!
ReplyDelete~Vee...
Really moving. To see the world through the eyes of the one you love, that's what happened to Ajay, except it happened quite literally. Good luck.
ReplyDelete@Nitty
ReplyDeleteI am happy that it touched your heart. Thanks a ton
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@Rachana
ReplyDeleteYou made my day with your wonderful words. I am blessed with frends like you in blogging network.
I am happy that it touched your heart and you felt the reflection and the affection between them.
Do keep coming..
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@Vee
ReplyDeleteWelcome to Few Miles. I am happy to know that you felt the story and more than that, "Not every Ajay is lucky enough to have a Neha like this", Billion percent true..
Do keep coming and enjoy your stay here..
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@Dreamer
ReplyDeleteWelcome to Few Miles, I am happy that you loved the story.. Do keep coming..
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Hi,
ReplyDeleteThat was very well narrated ..story ..really hats off to you ..
It heart touching..keep it up ..
sometime things do happens ..it not in our hands..
ATB for BAT
Take care.
Ks:)
@vivek
ReplyDeleteWelcome Back to Few Miles. I am very glad to know that you loved the story, narration and it touched your heart.
Thanks a ton for stopping by Few Miles, do keep coming..
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I liked the part about her favourite cappuccino. I just felt you could have made clear to the reader that Ajay was blind in the first place.
ReplyDeleteAll the best!
@ Keerthi P
ReplyDeleteWelcome to Few Miles, I don't wanna reveal at first, actually i thought of telling at the last line but later felt it is not a great idea so revealed it in the accident phase.
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Hi Saravana.. tht was a poignant post.. keep participating in BAT!!!
ReplyDelete@ Vipul Grover
ReplyDeleteWelcome back to Few Miles !
I am happy that you felt it touched. Will do my best in participating BAT, and atleast once I should win in BAT, waiting for that day...
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A moving tale from real life. Good one!
ReplyDeleteAll the best for BAT-13!
Cheers :)
@ Shilpa Garg
ReplyDeleteWelcome back to Few Miles!
I am glad to know that you felt it touched and moving.. Thanks a ton for stopping by. Cheers :-)
Happy Independence Day !
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This story reminded me of "the Gift of the Magi" though I think this one has its uniqueness. Faith is all that is needed, once we begin to love.
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@ Hiyaa
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Hiyaa for your kind and encouraging words. Do keep coming..
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Sad. Lovely. Heart-warming and heart-rending. Completely engaging, SIS. Thank you! And a fine homage to a friends.
ReplyDelete@ Jamie
ReplyDeleteSmileS, he is one of my best friend.. With wishes from people like you he will do better..
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I will surely come back For more.
ReplyDelete@ Rajendra Raikwar
ReplyDeleteI will surely come back For more.
Glad to know that.. Thanks..!