அவள் கண்களை
பார்த்த நொடியில் ரசித்தேன்
ரசித்த பொழுதில் தொலைந்தேன்
தொலைந்த தருணத்தில் விழுந்தேன்
காதலில் அவளிடம்
Equivalent English
Her eyes
The moment I saw, started admiring it !
When I was admiring, I lost myself !
When I lost myself, I fell in Love!
With her!
PS:
- To enjoy the poem, read in tamil as it Rhymmes. In English it won't as it is just a literal translation.
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"முகமறியா நண்பர்களின் கருத்துக்களே எனக்கு படிகற்கள்"
this was so sweet ... that special someone is lucky indeed :)
ReplyDeleteJust so sweet :)
ReplyDeleteLucky she :)
@ ladynimue
ReplyDeleteWelcome Back to Few Miles. I am happy to know that you tasted it as sweet. By the way do you know tamil? In that case you would have felt my feel.. Do Keep coming..
Yours Frendly,
Someone Is Special
@ Scribbling Girl
ReplyDeleteSo you know tamil? Great... I am happy...
That Lucky she is a celebrity, not a special girl in my life..
Yours Frendly,
Someone Is Special
passionate
ReplyDeleteBeautifully written.
ReplyDelete@ magiceye
ReplyDeleteWelcome Back To Few Miles.. Thanks a ton.. do keep coming..
Yours Frendly,
Someone Is Special
@ Titaxy
ReplyDeleteWelcome to Few Miles..
Thanks for your beautiful words.. Do keep coming..
Yours Frendly,
Someone Is Special
This eye certainly does capture something special. She looks as if she is dreaming, right?
ReplyDeleteNice poem.
@K
ReplyDeleteWelcome Back to Few Miles !
Thanks for your encouraging words, this eyes were clicked when she was mesmerized by her destiny.
Yours Frendly,
Saravana Kumar M
Beautiful Lines.
ReplyDelete@ Creativity
ReplyDeleteThanks a ton for your beautiful words on my blog. Do keep coming..
--Someone Is Special--
Very nice. Well your Beloved certainly has beautiful eyes. No wonder you are smitten!
ReplyDelete@ rebecca
ReplyDeleteWelcome to Few Miles!
Thanks a lot for your encouraging words..
Do keep coming...
Yours Frendly,
Someone Is Special