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அவள் கண்களை

பார்த்த நொடியில் ரசித்தேன்

ரசித்த பொழுதில் தொலைந்தேன்

தொலைந்த தருணத்தில் விழுந்தேன்

காதலில் அவளிடம்

Equivalent English

Her eyes

The moment I saw, started admiring it !

When I was admiring, I lost myself !

When I lost myself, I fell in Love!

With her!

இந்த கவிதைக்கு சொந்தக்காரி
This poem is for the one


இந்த கண்களுக்கு சொந்தக்காரி
For the one, this eyes belongs too

PS:
  • To enjoy the poem, read in tamil as it Rhymmes. In English it won't as it is  just a literal translation.
Saravanakumar Murugan
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Saravanakumar Murugan

Author & Storyteller · Someone is Special

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Comments

  1. this was so sweet ... that special someone is lucky indeed :)

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  2. @ ladynimue
    Welcome Back to Few Miles. I am happy to know that you tasted it as sweet. By the way do you know tamil? In that case you would have felt my feel.. Do Keep coming..

    Yours Frendly,
    Someone Is Special

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  3. @ Scribbling Girl
    So you know tamil? Great... I am happy...

    That Lucky she is a celebrity, not a special girl in my life..

    Yours Frendly,
    Someone Is Special

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  4. @ magiceye
    Welcome Back To Few Miles.. Thanks a ton.. do keep coming..

    Yours Frendly,
    Someone Is Special

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  5. @ Titaxy
    Welcome to Few Miles..
    Thanks for your beautiful words.. Do keep coming..

    Yours Frendly,
    Someone Is Special

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  6. This eye certainly does capture something special. She looks as if she is dreaming, right?
    Nice poem.

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  7. @K
    Welcome Back to Few Miles !
    Thanks for your encouraging words, this eyes were clicked when she was mesmerized by her destiny.

    Yours Frendly,
    Saravana Kumar M

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  8. @ Creativity
    Thanks a ton for your beautiful words on my blog. Do keep coming..

    --Someone Is Special--

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  9. Very nice. Well your Beloved certainly has beautiful eyes. No wonder you are smitten!

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  10. @ rebecca
    Welcome to Few Miles!
    Thanks a lot for your encouraging words..
    Do keep coming...

    Yours Frendly,
    Someone Is Special

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