~ Haiku from my perspective ~
those sad eyes waiting
for her drunkard husband to
return home, will he?
~ Haiku from her perspective ~
neither he nor God
has time to worry or think
about us, hatred life
My son and I were
the victims of that drunkard
bastard, sinful life
Written for The Haiku Challenge 2012
Day 17 – February 17th – Theme or Word: Wait + Paint the Image
Inspirational Image Clicked by Anand of: Apple Blossom's Photography
Day 17 – February 17th – Theme or Word: Wait + Paint the Image
Inspirational Image Clicked by Anand of: Apple Blossom's Photography
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Are you ready for The Haiku Challenge 2012? The prompts are out, rules are set, for more details visit HERE, and the challenge enters Day 17 with this post.. The challenge begins at 12 AM or 00:00 IST and goes on until GMT-08:30AM (i.e., the next day 02:00 PM or 14:00 IST), so all the time zones can participate in this challenge,and three cheers to all the challengers! Write a Haibun for the Theme or Word - 'Sin' and share your Post Direct Link here in the linky tool or in comment section of this post, if Linky tool is not available. You can also tweet your Haiku as | Haiku | #FMHCD17 @FewMiles
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SiS..it's all in the flow.. how could we be thinking the same thoughts for our first haiku..here..and posted all most the same time...it's midnight here ..this is becoming interesting...don't know where would it take in next 12 days.. Amazing effort form you SiS...
ReplyDeleteA poignant profile of the image enhanced by allowing one figure become the haiku narrator! Beautiful!
ReplyDeleteThe demon drink!
ReplyDeleteWell stated case!
poignant and sad.
ReplyDeleteSo creative to write it from two perspectives...so much pain in alcohol abuse..you have captured it well
ReplyDeletePainted the reality very beautifully....Greatly penned
ReplyDeleteI like that you tackled it from the two perspectives ... very clever ... and poignant! Thank you for sharing, and hosting this month's challenge. More than 1/2 way ... Nice. Happy weekend to you!
ReplyDeleteI really like that first one!
ReplyDeletejust too sad... too painful for me, Sis! beautifully written.
ReplyDeleteI know hard times can be a test of faith but we should know and believe that God cares for every creation of His. :)
ReplyDelete@ Ramesh Sood
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Rameshji and I'm glad that you too wrote on the same lines and this makes you interesting.. Smiles..
@ Gemma Wiseman
ReplyDeleteGlad to read your encouraging words Gemma! Happy!
@ SweetTalkingGuy
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Andy!.. Glad to read your words..
@ Lolamouse
ReplyDeletepoignant and sad.
:-) yes it is..
@ Susie Clevenger
ReplyDeleteThanks for your encouraging words! So much of pain.. Should find a way to get out of it (for her)..
@ ⁂ܓVållῐ ⁂ܓ☺
ReplyDeleteThanks Valli.. Glad I did..
@ becca givens
ReplyDeleteThanks becca.. so sweet of you.. I am indeed happy to cross more than half way.. SmileS..
@ Mama Zen
ReplyDeleteI really like that first one!
thanks and I super glad to read your words..
@ myheartslovesongs
ReplyDeletejust too sad... too painful for me, Sis! beautifully written.
Thanks Dani.. yeah it is sad.....
@ Amber
ReplyDeleteI know hard times can be a test of faith but we should know and believe that God cares for every creation of His. :)
very true Amber.. Loved your words..