! The Haiku Challenge 2012 - 29 days – 29 Haiku - Day 4 !
Happy to hold you
as my life, but it hurts when
our parents shed tears
heart smiles to dream
a love journey with you, but
the reality hurts
Written for The Haiku Challenge 2012 - Day 4 – February 4th – Theme: Opposite Emotions
Image Credits - The image is taken from the movie Vinnaithandi Varuvaya
Image Credits - The image is taken from the movie Vinnaithandi Varuvaya
Here you go my dear twitter users...
! おはよう ございます 友人 ! - ARIGATO GOZAIMASU - GOOD MORNING
Are you ready for The Haiku Challenge 2012? The prompts are out, rules are set, for more details visit HERE, and the challenge enters Day 4 with this post.. The challenge begins at 12 AM or 00:00 IST and goes on until GMT-08:30AM (I.e., the next day 02:00 PM or 14:00 IST), so all the time zones can participate in this challenge, and three cheers to all the challengers! Write a Haiku for the Theme Opposite Emotions (Happy & Sad, Laugh & Tear, Hatred & Love or any) and share your Haiku Post Direct Link here in the linky tool or in comment section of this post, if Linky tool is not available. You can also tweet your Haiku as | Haiku | #FWHCD4 @FewMiles http://t.co/yMhhJpmL
PS: Please do not forget to include the Day 3 code provided here.
PS: Please do not forget to include the Day 3 code provided here.
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L O V E L Y!!!
ReplyDeleteIt's amazing how opposite and how close happiness and pain can be!
ReplyDeleteBeautiful words...It broke my heart when my parents cried...reality can break your heart.
ReplyDelete@ Amber
ReplyDeleteL O V E L Y!!!
T H A N K S - A M B E R
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@ Gemma Wiseman
ReplyDeleteIt's amazing how opposite and how close happiness and pain can be!
they are truly close.. :-) Thanks Gemma..
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@ Susie Clevenger
ReplyDeleteBeautiful words...It broke my heart when my parents cried...reality can break your heart.
of course right, reality can break Susie..
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It takes enormous courage to follow your heart. I know so many who have not because of cultural and parental pressures. There is no easy solution. A very interesting poem. Thank you.
ReplyDeleteJust Loved it...(:
ReplyDeleteIt sounds sad and with sacrifices, no doubt!
ReplyDeleteBeautiful to read you, your words flowed smoothly.
This is a tough one for me. My mind was a complete blank. Anyway, have to go for classes and managed to come up with the one I posted. Hopefully, it's fine.
i think this theme that you chose, "the opposite feelings", is a wonderful representation of the yin and yang of life co-existing - thank you for the challenge, for this theme in particular and for the beautiful examples you yourself posted above :)
ReplyDeleteBeautifully written.I really get unable to judge which one is the best of yours.All are speechless and worth filled with deep and different emotions! :)
ReplyDeleteI am really enjoying writing haiku.Thanks to you dear! :)
@ Cressida de Nova
ReplyDeleteThanks a billion for your words.. Happy Man..
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@ br!nDle
ReplyDeleteJust Loved it...(:
Glad you loved it.. Thank you so much br!nDle..
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@ Inspiring Always
ReplyDeleteAsni, I loved your take on the prompt and I am super glad to read your comment.. Happy Man..
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@ Lilly
ReplyDeleteLilly, it is my pleasure to hear those beautiful words from you.. HAppy Man..
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@ Simran
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Little one.. I am flying..
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beautiful and bittersweet haiku, Sis!
ReplyDeletei enjoyed the challenge of this prompt very much. thank you.
dani
@ myheartslovesongs
ReplyDeleteGlad you enjoyed the prompt dani.. Happy Man..
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