in tears, I
lost
my sweet angel
Pi-Ku - 3 - 1 - 4 Structure
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Nice one. But isn't tears 2 syllables making first line 4 syllables?
ReplyDeleteIn three lines you broke my heart.
ReplyDeleteWhat an emotional, painful, and beautiful piece. Lovely pi-ku
ReplyDeleteEmotional, touching.
ReplyDeletebeautiful and so sad! And No tears is one syllable :-)
ReplyDeleteso touching:( awwwwwww...you mademy day gooey....sniff sniff...
ReplyDelete@ The Fool
ReplyDeleteThanks Fool, but tears is 1 syllable and first line is 3 syllables. I hope you got little confused in counting it.
Hmm thanks for being my best critic.. Very happy to have you here.. SmileS... and come back for more..
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@ Kim Nelson
ReplyDeleteSmileS Kim, "Happy Man". I am touch your heart with 8 syllables, SmileS...
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@ The Write Girl
ReplyDeleteGlad you loved it Write Girl, SmileS and "Happy Man"
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@ Harshad mehta
ReplyDeleteThanks Harshad, SmileS and Welcome to Few Miles !
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@ Amanda Moore
ReplyDeleteAmanda, thanks for the smiles and yeah yeah it is one syllable only.. Hmm, Happy to have you here..
SmileS, "Happy Man"
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@ cloud nine
ReplyDeleteWhat else I would expect other than such sweet emotions from you people like you.. I feel like I won this contest..
SmileS Cloud nine, thanks for the encouraging words and comments..
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Feeling of something lost is the worst pain..feels like nothing is there to live!
ReplyDeleteNice post ..
Thats just too sad and touching....hope u fine?
ReplyDelete@ Simran
ReplyDeleteYeah yeah, well said, Happy to have you here. SmileS...
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@ Scribbling Girl
ReplyDeleteYeah SG, I am always fine.. Hmm it is for the contest.. Hmmm, happy to have you here.. SmileS...
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we know only after the lose
ReplyDeleteBikram's
She is sure to return in your Smiles...
ReplyDelete@ Bikramjit
ReplyDeleteYou are right.. SmileS..
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@ PremI
ReplyDelete! Welcome to Few Miles !, Thanks for the blessings..
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are we doing a piku week event SIS? :) It looks like fun, thanks for the visit and I had already come to visit you for potluck :p
ReplyDelete@ lynnaima
ReplyDeleteare we doing a piku week event SIS? :) It looks like fun, thanks for the visit and I had already come to visit you for potluck :p
Well.. That would be fun.. Let's se.. Happy Man..
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