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Tears....

bySomeone is Special


She met him in a lonely place
Fell in love with him deeply

She has free boundaries
Without knowing the real fear

She never knew it is lust
As days went so fast and so him

She believed him truly
But her belief went in deception

She now think of his silky touches
Whenever cool breeze kissed her

She realised it a little late
That is a beginning of a sad story

Tears….


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  1. Jae RoseMarch 20, 2011 at 10:11 PM

    wonderful opening line..Jae

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  2. NankaMarch 20, 2011 at 11:10 PM

    I think freedom has to follow certain norms ...or it can all end sadly :(

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  3. Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis HallMarch 21, 2011 at 7:01 AM

    awesome lines...

    love the flow and sentiments...
    A++

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  4. MaggieMarch 21, 2011 at 7:47 AM

    Terrific, especially the first line, that is so important.

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  5. bendedspoonMarch 21, 2011 at 8:47 AM

    sad but true...
    life has tears to wipe :)

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  6. ReggieMarch 21, 2011 at 9:58 AM

    A sadly touching piece.

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  7. JamieDedesMarch 21, 2011 at 10:05 AM

    Sad piece, but a good reminder that boundries have their place in our lives. I believe it would be called "discretion."

    Nice work, SiS. Poem on ...

    Happy Potluck days ...

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  8. ererMarch 21, 2011 at 12:23 PM

    A sad but touching piece. Lovely!

    Dropping by from SS!
    Happy Monday :)

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  9. Cynthia MMarch 21, 2011 at 12:57 PM

    You've caught the journey from love to disappointment...so sad :(

    I wrote my entry a bit late, it's at http://cynthiamarstonwritingstuff.blogspot.com/

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  10. Cloud NineMarch 21, 2011 at 2:55 PM

    Tears....the epitome of true love:( Touching one yaar!

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  11. AnonymousMarch 21, 2011 at 7:32 PM

    ahhh, Alfred Lord Tennyson ...
    "'Tis better to have loved and lost than never to have loved at all." ... but it doesn't make it hurt any less ... becca

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  12. GloriaMarch 21, 2011 at 7:33 PM

    Love lost, so sad...but much can be learned through the tears, so I shall give this a happy ending in my own imagination. ;) Well done!

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  13. Marlee-I MysticMarch 21, 2011 at 7:37 PM

    I love the story line of this peace and the emotion behind it. Great job!
    Here's my potluck entry: http://mysticmarleei.wordpress.com/2011/03/21/misrepresentation/

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  14. UnknownMarch 21, 2011 at 9:22 PM

    I was struck by "free boundaries" and how they led to the bottom line...
    Here's mine:
    http://www.kimnelsonwrites.com/2011/01/31/you-me-and-fibonacci/

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  15. AnonymousMarch 21, 2011 at 9:55 PM

    that is nice.. here's mine.. http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/01/25/paper-scribbles/

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  16. K. Shawn EdgarMarch 22, 2011 at 9:53 AM

    Sad, but I had to keep reading. Well done.

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  17. AnonymousMarch 22, 2011 at 12:50 PM

    The route that is much travelled...
    Sad but true...

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  18. Chim's World of LiteratureMarch 22, 2011 at 5:56 PM

    wow this was a sad but oh so true read...well written..

    heres my link: http://mypoetrywriting.blogspot.com/2011/03/secret.html

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  19. The twenties girlMarch 22, 2011 at 8:01 PM

    touching, but true! well written...

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  20. Amanda MooreMarch 23, 2011 at 1:38 AM

    days went so fast and so him" what a yummy line I really like this one!

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  21. AnonymousMarch 23, 2011 at 11:24 AM

    Lovely poem, sad - but that's how we learn. This was straight from the heart and has a tinge of experience, maybe?

    Mine is more gritty:
    http://sharplittlepencil.wordpress.com/2011/03/23/gimme-shelter-carry-on-tuesday/

    Peace, and keep 'em coming! Amy

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  22. Prateek BagriMarch 24, 2011 at 5:38 AM

    Reality Bites.

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  23. WhitesnakeMarch 28, 2011 at 4:02 AM

    ARRR Yes nothing like lust and love being swirled around like napalm first thing in the morning!

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  24. Someone is SpecialApril 2, 2011 at 12:18 PM

    @ jaerose

    Glad to know that.. Thanks & SmileS...

    Someone is Special

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  25. Someone is SpecialApril 2, 2011 at 12:19 PM

    @ Nanka

    Of course Nanka you are right.. there should be some norms.. SmileS..

    Someone is Special

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  26. Someone is SpecialApril 2, 2011 at 12:20 PM

    @ Jingle

    Glad to know that.. Thanks you so much Ji.. SmileS...

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  27. Someone is SpecialApril 2, 2011 at 12:20 PM

    @ thingy

    Glad you felt it terrific. SmileS and happy to have you here..

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  28. Someone is SpecialApril 2, 2011 at 12:21 PM

    @ bendedspoon

    you got it.. SmileS.. and of course life has tears to wipe..

    Someone is Special

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  29. Someone is SpecialApril 2, 2011 at 12:21 PM

    @ Reggie

    SmileS.. Happy man Reggie, really.....

    Someone is Special

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  30. Someone is SpecialApril 2, 2011 at 12:22 PM

    @ JamieDedes

    Thanks Jamie and I agree with you.. it should be in one's life.. SmileS..

    Someone is Special

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  31. Someone is SpecialApril 2, 2011 at 12:23 PM

    @ WarmSunshine

    Glad you loved it Warm Sunshine.... Happy to have you here.

    Someone is Special

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  32. Someone is SpecialApril 2, 2011 at 12:24 PM

    @ Cynthia M

    sad.. na... hmm sure will stop by your entry too.. SmileS..

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  33. Someone is SpecialApril 2, 2011 at 12:24 PM

    @ cloud nine

    Glad it touched your heart and of course tears...

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  34. Someone is SpecialApril 2, 2011 at 12:25 PM

    @ beccagivens

    You are 100% right becca.. SmileS..

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  35. Someone is SpecialApril 2, 2011 at 12:26 PM

    @ Gloria

    SmileS Gloria and thanks for your wishes..

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  36. Someone is SpecialApril 2, 2011 at 12:27 PM

    @ Marlee-I Mystic

    SmileS Marlee and glad you loved it.. Sure will stop by yours too..

    Someone is Special

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  37. Someone is SpecialApril 2, 2011 at 12:27 PM

    @ Kim Nelson

    of course they are, Kim and they wil lead to... hmm..

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  38. Someone is SpecialApril 2, 2011 at 12:28 PM

    @ fiveloaf

    Great to have you here. SmileS..

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  39. Someone is SpecialApril 2, 2011 at 12:29 PM

    @ kshawnedgar

    Sad na.. hmmm, hope everything ends well.. Happy to have you here..

    Someone is Special

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  40. Someone is SpecialApril 2, 2011 at 12:29 PM

    @ sam

    you got it Sam.. SmileS..

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  41. Someone is SpecialApril 2, 2011 at 12:30 PM

    @ Chim's World of Literature

    Glad to know that Chim's and smiles to have you here..

    Someone is Special

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  42. Someone is SpecialApril 2, 2011 at 12:30 PM

    @ The twenties girl

    Glad it touched your heart and welcome to Few Miles..

    Someone is Special

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  43. Someone is SpecialApril 2, 2011 at 12:31 PM

    @ Amanda Moore

    Thanks Amanda, and Happy to have you here...

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  44. Someone is SpecialApril 2, 2011 at 12:31 PM

    @ sharplittlepencil

    Glad you loved it and yeah it was based on experience but not from my side..

    Someone is Special

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  45. Someone is SpecialApril 2, 2011 at 12:32 PM

    @ Prateek

    well said, SmileS..

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  46. Someone is SpecialApril 2, 2011 at 12:32 PM

    @ Whitesnake

    yeah you are absolutely right.. SmileS..

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  47. shwetaNovember 30, 2011 at 4:48 PM

    She now think of his silky touches
    Whenever cool breeze kissed her



    loved these lines

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  48. Someone is SpecialNovember 30, 2011 at 5:56 PM

    @ shweta

    She now think of his silky touches
    Whenever cool breeze kissed her



    loved these lines

    Glad you loved those lines.. any specific reasons??? LOL...

    Someone is Special

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