Oh my sweet girl
I love you so much
No words can tell how much
I miss you dear
Oh my sweet girl
I stay awake at night
Thinking of you all night
Searching for true love in us
Oh my sweet girl
I pray for you all night
That you will look me back
To wipe out my tears
Oh my sweet girl
I write your name
With blood to show
True love is never serene
Oh my sweet girl
I miss your smiles
The secret of my happiness
Is now lost somewhere
Oh my sweet girl
To have love and lost
Hurts me more than anything
Tears are my friend
Oh my sweet girl
Just come back to me
And sit right beside me
Say, I miss you too
This Post has been Published as a part of
You can read my other entries for this contest as well, 'the cry of a mother - the lost world', 'lost' and tears If you wish me to win then you can 'FAV IT' here
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"முகமறியா நண்பர்களின் கருத்துக்களே எனக்கு படிகற்கள்"
lucky girl to be missed so much.
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Touching poem !well written for blogjunta
ReplyDeleteSo beautifully written:) Its better to have loved and lost than to have never loved at all.....
ReplyDelete@ Lolamouse
ReplyDelete'yes missing hurts a lot', smiles lolamouse, Happy Man..
and thanks for the awards..... I will happily accept the same..
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@ Umamaheswari.A
ReplyDeleteUma, Glad, thanks a lot, happy man..
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@ cloud nine
ReplyDeleteglad you felt the beauty of it.. Smiles, happy man.. and yes Its better to have loved and lost than to have never loved at all.....
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oho! i think ur sweet girl should return now! touching work as always :)
ReplyDeletesarah
touching i guess we know when we lose
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@ sarah
ReplyDeletesmiles... "Happy man"..
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@ Bikram
ReplyDeleteof course it do..
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you touched my heart. I wish you to win this contest.. I know you will..
ReplyDeleteNice and simple bringing out raw emotions right out of the heart.
ReplyDelete@ bala
ReplyDeleteAww, thanks for the encouraging words.. People like you make me write more and better.. Thanks..SmileS
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@ The Fool
ReplyDeleteThanks Fool, happy to see your wonderful encouraging words.. So sweet of you and SmileS..
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Very sweet poem ;) I like this - 'The secret of my happiness'...
ReplyDeleteThanks for your visit...:)
Oh my sweet girl
ReplyDeleteI write your name
With blood to show
True love is never serene
This surprised me!!
Nice verses :)
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Tender and emotional...pulls a heart string....lovely ode...thanks for visiting...
ReplyDeletevery well written.. it's really touching..
ReplyDeletemoving words...
ReplyDeletewell done.
Happy Writing.
A++
From Alfred Lord Tennyson's poem In Memoriam:27, 1850 (http://www.phrases.org.uk/meanings/62650.html)
ReplyDeleteI hold it true, whate'er befall;
I feel it, when I sorrow most;
'Tis better to have loved and lost
Than never to have loved at all.
Lovely, sweet poem, Sis! Touches the heart. Thanks for this Potluck selection.
ReplyDeleteHi Saravana! First of all thanks for giving link on my blog. As from some days I am not visiting friends' blogs coz of some reasons. So I would have missed this special one.
ReplyDeleteYour blog is very beautiful. And this poem is very very touching. Really nobody can understand the tears of a mother. A totally different poem on the concept of contest. Thanks for sharing. Wish you luck. I guess I have faved it already but it not gonna fav it. :)
@ magdalenahermanstories
ReplyDelete! Welcome to Few Miles !
Happy Man you know and Glad you like it.. SmileS...
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@ GvSparx
ReplyDelete! Welcome to Few Miles !
SmileS.. Happy you got surprised.. SmileS...
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@ Rekha
ReplyDelete! Welcome to Few Miles !
Glad you loved it Rekha... Happy Man...and SmileS..
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@ The twenties girl
ReplyDelete! Welcome to Few Miles !
Glad it do touched your heart... Happy Man...and SmileS..
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@ Jingle
ReplyDeleteJi, Happy Man, with your blessing I love to write more and more.. SmileS..
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@ Jaan Pehchaan
ReplyDelete! Welcome to Few Miles ! Absolutely.. SmileS..
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@ JamieDedes
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Jamie, Happy Man you know..
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@ Mohinee
ReplyDelete! Welcome to Few Miles ! Glad the poem touched your heart and of course no one can understand the tears of a Mother or a person referred here. SmileS.. and Thanks for the FAV IT..
No Issues on missing this blog, hope you won't from today.. SmileS..
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U r literally special.........
ReplyDelete@ Niks
ReplyDelete! Welcome to Few Miles ! what more can I expect? Thanks and SmileS..
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why care about someone when that someone doesn't care about you
ReplyDelete@ shweta
ReplyDeletewhy care about someone when that someone doesn't care about you
true, why to care but why? Hmm confusing.. is it..
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