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in tears, I
lost
my sweet angel

Pi-Ku - 3 - 1 - 4 Structure


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Comments

  1. T F CarthickMarch 15, 2011 at 12:34 AM

    Nice one. But isn't tears 2 syllables making first line 4 syllables?

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  2. UnknownMarch 15, 2011 at 2:02 AM

    In three lines you broke my heart.

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  3. The Write GirlMarch 15, 2011 at 6:51 AM

    What an emotional, painful, and beautiful piece. Lovely pi-ku

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  4. Harshad MehtaMarch 15, 2011 at 8:28 AM

    Emotional, touching.

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  5. Amanda MooreMarch 15, 2011 at 9:53 AM

    beautiful and so sad! And No tears is one syllable :-)

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  6. Cloud NineMarch 15, 2011 at 12:02 PM

    so touching:( awwwwwww...you mademy day gooey....sniff sniff...

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  7. Someone is SpecialMarch 15, 2011 at 12:14 PM

    @ The Fool

    Thanks Fool, but tears is 1 syllable and first line is 3 syllables. I hope you got little confused in counting it.
    Hmm thanks for being my best critic.. Very happy to have you here.. SmileS... and come back for more..

    Someone is Special

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  8. Someone is SpecialMarch 15, 2011 at 12:14 PM

    @ Kim Nelson

    SmileS Kim, "Happy Man". I am touch your heart with 8 syllables, SmileS...

    Someone is Special

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  9. Someone is SpecialMarch 15, 2011 at 12:16 PM

    @ The Write Girl

    Glad you loved it Write Girl, SmileS and "Happy Man"

    Someone is Special

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  10. Someone is SpecialMarch 15, 2011 at 12:16 PM

    @ Harshad mehta

    Thanks Harshad, SmileS and Welcome to Few Miles !

    Someone is Special

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  11. Someone is SpecialMarch 15, 2011 at 12:18 PM

    @ Amanda Moore

    Amanda, thanks for the smiles and yeah yeah it is one syllable only.. Hmm, Happy to have you here..
    SmileS, "Happy Man"

    Someone is Special

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  12. Someone is SpecialMarch 15, 2011 at 12:19 PM

    @ cloud nine

    What else I would expect other than such sweet emotions from you people like you.. I feel like I won this contest..
    SmileS Cloud nine, thanks for the encouraging words and comments..

    Someone is Special

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  13. SimranMarch 15, 2011 at 12:57 PM

    Feeling of something lost is the worst pain..feels like nothing is there to live!

    Nice post ..

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  14. Lady WhispersMarch 15, 2011 at 1:06 PM

    Thats just too sad and touching....hope u fine?

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  15. Someone is SpecialMarch 15, 2011 at 2:00 PM

    @ Simran

    Yeah yeah, well said, Happy to have you here. SmileS...

    Someone is Special

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  16. Someone is SpecialMarch 15, 2011 at 2:01 PM

    @ Scribbling Girl

    Yeah SG, I am always fine.. Hmm it is for the contest.. Hmmm, happy to have you here.. SmileS...

    Someone is Special

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  17. BikramMarch 15, 2011 at 5:08 PM

    we know only after the lose

    Bikram's

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  18. PremIMarch 16, 2011 at 1:14 AM

    She is sure to return in your Smiles...

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  19. Someone is SpecialMarch 20, 2011 at 12:44 PM

    @ Bikramjit

    You are right.. SmileS..

    Someone is Special

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  20. Someone is SpecialMarch 20, 2011 at 12:44 PM

    @ PremI

    ! Welcome to Few Miles !, Thanks for the blessings..

    Someone is Special

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  21. AnonymousJune 10, 2011 at 5:25 AM

    are we doing a piku week event SIS? :) It looks like fun, thanks for the visit and I had already come to visit you for potluck :p

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  22. Someone is SpecialJanuary 21, 2012 at 5:54 AM

    @ lynnaima

    are we doing a piku week event SIS? :) It looks like fun, thanks for the visit and I had already come to visit you for potluck :p

    Well.. That would be fun.. Let's se.. Happy Man..

    Someone is Special

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