Man Proposes God Disposes
A Perfect Sunday is a composition of a visit to God’s Place, lunch at restaurant and a few hours in the park with Kim, my sweetheart. I love those sweet moments but July 4th was not the same, when we were sitting in the park with hands clutched in love harmony, we heard people screaming. In no time around 20 terrorists surrounded the park with weapons and started firing at us. Some jumped into the water, some hid behind the trees, but I and Kim were the victims for their bait. I said in agony, “I wish to marry you"
Info:- Drabble refers to fictional writings bounded to a maximum of 100 words.
PS: This post has been published as a part of Thursday Tales, Theme Thursday, Three Word Wednesday - Words - bait, jump, victim.
loving wish in agony. nice work
ReplyDelete@Saravana,
ReplyDeleteyes, this was indeed a wish in agony... good one.
please do link to the artists page as well. :) thank u.
strange and a bit frighten when I hear about the 20 terrorists, I suppose if I would to write this, I wouldn't have thought choose such method
ReplyDeleteI wonder if people only declare their true feelings in times of stress or near death
Amazing u have a power with words indeed!
ReplyDelete@ Deepak
ReplyDeleteThanks man...
@ Leo
Sure will do :-) Thanks for the lovely words..
Haiki Heights - a very good initiative..
@ lissa
First of all thanks for visiting my blog and for your sweet comments, do keep visiting.
@ Scribbling Girl
Within 7 words you made my day once again. I am happy..
Between my IndiBlogger rank jumped from 54 to 74 :-)
Yours Frendly,
Saravana Kumar M
intriguing tale...did not see that coming, but a semi happy ending...one last wish before...
ReplyDeletehapy theme thursday!
wow,
ReplyDeleteyou are brave,
love is powerful...
exciting tale.
Wow!
ReplyDelete@ Brian,
ReplyDeleteI am happy for your feedback.
@ jingle
I am glad that you loved it.. Thanks for visiting again.
@ Mama Zen
Thanks man.. Be regular on my blog..
Yours Frendly,
Sarvana Kumar M
Not the best setting for a proposal, but certainly a memorable one.
ReplyDeleteA very sad tale, I knew their love did not materialize as they were victims of terrorists...!
ReplyDeleteNice but poignant take this tale of yours!
Keep joining TT!
@ Matty
ReplyDeleteThanks for visiting my blog, do be regular to enjoy the updates
@ Amity
I am happy that you liked the way it was written. Thanks for your encouraging words.
Yours Frendly,
Saravana Kumar M
i m short on words!
ReplyDeleteNo More A Victim
@ Amercianising
ReplyDeleteThanks for visiting my blog and for your feedback. Do be regular on my blog.
Yours Frendly,
Saravana Kumar M
@ Saravana
ReplyDeleteFirstly, this was a beautiful attempt...using the apt best words and binding the emotions so well in 100 words.
I had no idea that fiction written in 100 words was known as drabble! SO definitely i leanrt somthing coming to your page!
Saravana,Thank you so so much for leaving beautiful comments one each part of the love story. It truly made me so happy that You like it. Plus it gave me a confidence that I pretending to write the emotions of the guy were with quite right intentions!!
So thanks a lot!!!
I sure look forward to your more frequent visits to Humming Today and more of your wonderful works in Few Miles. And also wanna thank you for going through the interview...I'm all made up the tiny bits of those wonderful inspiring comments I get!
FOr now folloing yoru blog...need some more time to actually go through the page more in future :))
~ Keep the Spark ALive..
@ Rachana
ReplyDeleteYou made my day with the beautiful words, thanks a lot for visiting me.
I am damn sure that I will visit Humming today frequently as your blog impressed me a lot.
It been a great pleasure to receive a thought from Rachana, thanks a lot for that, do keep visiting and enjoy the updates and moreover read my best thoughts listed here..
Yours Frendly,
Saravana Kumar M
That was beautiful. What vivid emotions you created. Sad but fulfilled. Well done.
ReplyDelete.......dhole
@ Donna Hole
ReplyDeleteThanks for your beautiful and encouraging thoughts. Thanks for visiting and do be regular on my blog
Yours Frendly,
Saravana Kumar M
Oh Saravana, I so wished they could be together forever. A sweet sentiment, but at the last hour!
ReplyDelete@ K
ReplyDeleteThanks for visiting my blog and for the feedback, do keep visiting..
Yours Frendly,
Saravana Kumar M
You surely have crossed lots of miles, using few words.
ReplyDeleteFirstly thanks for introducing me to Drabbling, surely would be a new world. (I hope I dint misspell it.)
I would also like to thank you for your nice words on my blog. completely agree with you that appreciation is the best fodder for a blogger.
@ p00ja
ReplyDeleteYou made my day p00ja.. Thanks a lot for your wonderful words of appreciation. Thanks for visiting my blog and do be regular..
Yours Frendly,
Saravana Kumar M