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“Please... I hope you will understand... I love my Mom more than anyone else in this world... I can’t say no to this marriage arranged by her... Please... Please let’s breakup...” was the last few words uttered by her but those are the words kept on ringing in my mind. I can’t get over this pain caused by the wound of her words. Come-on! Come-on, do something I queried my mind and in no time it ordered me to do these and I followed it...
I searched for sweet poison which will kill me minute by minute as I want to die with her thoughts but I never know which was sweetest and the slowest. I searched, searched and searched in pain and found some sleeping pills in my First Aid Box. I consumed two and sat on the table to think about the sweetest moments that happened in our life sorry in my life.
I decided to pen down a letter to her so took the special paper which I used to pen down usually and wrote, “I still love you with each and every broken pieces of my heart” and followed with.
Woof! Woof! I searched for water but couldn’t find it. Oh God!!!!!!!!!! I cried for water but everything became dark as I couldn’t see the letter I wrote. My last wish was that someday somehow this letter should be read by you and fell down on my desk with my head hitting the letter pad. With your thoughts I breathe my last..........................
This post is a part of "Sleepy Sunday! Contest - I" contest under the category, "1. Life/Love/Relationship/Personal" organized by WeBlog.
The original image used to create this letter are taken from this source, labelled reuse with modifications.
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nice post man... especially love the effort you've taken in making the images in the form of "the last letter"
ReplyDelete@ Dr Roshan R
ReplyDeleteI am happy for those words of appreciation and for those encouraging thoughts. Thanks for visiting and do be regular on my blog...
Yours Frendly,
Saravana Kumar M
Very interestingly put.
ReplyDeleteThanks for the visit to my blog and the wishes for the contest. Same to you...nice story and great graphics.
ReplyDelete@ purba
ReplyDeleteThanks for visiting my blog and for the feedback.
@ Corrinne
Thanks for the visit and the wishes. Do keep visiting..
Yours Frendly,
Saravana Kumar M
hmmm..what can I say? I have such conflicting views about this, I'd probably have a debate with myself!
ReplyDeleteOkay, I understand the love, care, and also the pain and hurt..I feel the worthlessness of life without the person he trusted so much..But I cannot accept death..and it happened..
I liked it..well put..
@ TrubluentMind
ReplyDeleteI am glad that you liked the "LAST WISH", Its been a great pleasure to see all comments. Thanks for visiting and do be regular on my updtes.
Yours Frendly,
Saravana Kumar M
good work!~! u extracted the feelings from the letter.
ReplyDeleteIt is quite a different type of a post!..Liked the letter and the graphics a lot!All the best!
ReplyDelete@ Restless poet
ReplyDeleteThanks for your encouraging words.
@ Jaspreet
Thanks a lot Jaspreet for your wonderful comments and wishes.
@ both
Thanks for visitng my blog, do keep visiting...
Yours Frendly,
Saravana Kumar M
very interesting!! a different touch to this! niceee!! :)
ReplyDelete@ adorablesashu
ReplyDeleteI am glad that you liked it and felt interesting.. Thanks for visiting my blog and do keep visiting..
Yours Frendly,
Saravana Kumar M
Was able to grasp the feel.But death as a solution is unacceptable.Nicely put :) Thanks for the visit to my page
ReplyDelete@ Vignesh
ReplyDeleteThanks man for grasping the feel of it but that happens almost all the times.. Thanks for visiting and do be regular..
Yours Frenly,
Saravana Kumar M
It was a very emotional read.. felt it inside... and that's what matters.
ReplyDeleteAppreciate the effort you put in here.!
@ sadhgopal
ReplyDeleteThanks for the encouraging words and do keep visiting..
Yours Frendly,
Saravana Kumar M
Emotion-filled! That is the first impact.
ReplyDeleteAll the best for the contest!
Cheers
Hiyaa
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@ Hiyaa
ReplyDeleteThanks for the wonderful words and for visiting my blog, do keep visiting my blog..
Yours Frendly,
Saravana Kumar M
hey Saravana , thanx for te lovely comment n te gr8 wishes...
ReplyDeleteliked ur post a lot...nicely done...n nice graphics too....gr8 presentation...keep up the good work n al te best for te contest !
Cheers !
@ just a pen in the hand.
ReplyDeleteI am happy to know that you liked it a lot. Thanks for appreciating my effort and for your wishes. do keep visiting my blog..
Yours Frendly,
Saravana Kumar M
Dear Saravana,
ReplyDeleteApologies for coming in very late to your blog. First of all, many thanks for visiting my blog, reading my post and commenting on, promptly.
Though we have not yet met, I see a very positive, sportive, spirited persona in you. Because, I found that you have visited almost all the WeBlog contest entries and wished almost all the contestants universally. There you go, you are ONE of that kind.
As regards this post, you were able to put it across in such a way, that visualization was pretty easy for the reader. But, personally, I do not like to read tragic stories :(
Wish you all the best in this contest and also looking forward to more of your writings.
Best Regards,
Renjith
Please do read http://renjithps.blogspot.com/2009/11/009-whats-in-name.html and tell me whether there is something interesting!!
@ Renjith Sarada
ReplyDeleteYou made my day!.. Thanks for your wonderful comment and am happy that you liked the story and felt it. Thanks once again for visiting and do keep coming..
Yours Frendly,
Saravana Kumar M
amazing....
ReplyDeletedo you really exist !!!
such passionate love story !!!!
@ nikita
ReplyDeleteThanks yaar, your feedbacks makes me happy and inspires me to write more with good quality.. Thanks once again.. do keep coming..
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