Worst Hour
At last, after 10 days of Half Yearly Holidays we were back to school. The first hour was mathematics, she yelled out my name to scold me for losing two marks, and I replied to her, “If you can’t be gentle in praising me for scoring 98, at least don’t scold me with vulgar words”.
Info:- 55-Fiction refers to fictional writings bounded to a maximum of 55
Oh, Scoring 98 marks and getting scolding from the teacher is really bad.. Very different approach and expressed within 55 words is a very appreciable act.
ReplyDeletewow that was good.....getting scolding for scoring 98 :O gosh :P
ReplyDeleteNice 55 fiction!
@ Saraswathi
ReplyDeleteI am happy that for the few words of appreciation and also for you to be regular on my blog.
@ Scribbling Girl
Thank you so much for the encouraging words.
Yours Frendly,
Saravana Kumar M
great use of the prompt words in such a small space.
ReplyDeleteSaravana:
ReplyDeleteI am so glad you came to G- Man's to post a 55. It's fun and a good writing challenge.
I am a children's writer, poet and will hopefully get that novel published. The 55 fiction has helped hone my skills.
Looking forward to getting to know you.
I am moondustwriter at http://moondustwriter.com
would love for you to follow on twitter
ReplyDeleteI'm @moondustwriter
@ ThomG
ReplyDeleteThanks for your kind words.
@ moondustwriter
I am happy to know that you like my post and great to know about your skills. Surely will visit :-)
@ all
I hope you all will be regular on my blog
wow you got fussed at for a 98? And that lady in the picture - she is scaring me just a little :)
ReplyDeleteGreat Job Saravana...
ReplyDeleteFlash 55 is an excellent challenge and a Fun exercise. Thanks for visiting, thanks for playing, and have a Kick Ass Week-End...G
@ Dee Martin
ReplyDeleteI am happy as you felt the worst hour.
@ g-man
Thanks for your kinds words, surely I will try to take the challenge and do my best.
@all
Thanks for visiting the blog and don't forget to be regular.
Yours Frendly,
Saravana Kumar M
hmmm....what a humble achievement but still scolded in a vulgar way?
ReplyDeleteyou made me smile...:-)
thanks for being always in my blog, I appreciate it, but you have a new follower in me...;-)
have a great weekend...:-)
That is quite a challenge to write in only 55 words. You did a great job here!
ReplyDelete@ Amity
ReplyDeleteThanks for visiting my blog. I was updating my blog xml content and I hope because of that i missed by new follower :-(
@ Jay Thurston
Thanks man
@ all
Thanks for visiting my blog
Yours Frendly,
Saravana Kumar M