Published as a part of
Thursday Poets Rally, Week 40
I nominate Vinay and Rhyme me a Smile for Perfect Poet Award.
PS: Sorry due to some tight schedule last week I am not able to read and comment but now this time I will read as many poets as possible.. SmileS..
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"முகமறியா நண்பர்களின் கருத்துக்களே எனக்கு படிகற்கள்"
very lovely words.
ReplyDeleteenjoyed your new creation,
Cheers.
Happy Rally.
Wow! I love this poem, such powerful imagery. The picture adds another layer to the literary work.
ReplyDeleteThat is indeed one special poems I have read so far.. Inspiring and pic just added another beauty to your words.. :)
ReplyDeleteHere is mine http://www.tingtasy.com/2011/03/collections-of-tings-poetry-tp20-that.html
See you and nice meeting you through the rally..
That is such a great thought, poem.
ReplyDelete:) I loved it!
Short and sweet SiS!
ReplyDeleteI only learned now...:)
Good morning!!!
here's to being human -- not always easy huh? :)
ReplyDeleteThanks for the nomination! Very kind. :)
ReplyDeleteI loved your poem. Beautiful imagery! I feel like going to buy some flowers just so I can squash them. LOL. :)
Happy Rally!
aww!! this is really beautiful SiS
ReplyDeleteWonderful words on forgiveness.
ReplyDeleteLovely. I agree, "forgive all and become human".
ReplyDeleteVery true and wise, loved how you made the poem in a image. Stunning!
ReplyDeletethe most truest words that ever existed......and i love how cute this poem is..
ReplyDeleteOne of the best words I ever read... Amazing.
ReplyDeleteWow that is probably the best description of forgivness that I've ever heard....smell of a flower when it's being crushed.
ReplyDeleteKhushboo woh mafi hai jo lag jati hai phool se
ReplyDeleteJise masal dete hain haath khelte khelte bhool se..
You liked the transaltion by me SiS..didn't you!!! well..God bless!!! and forgive me if its not right..
I like It!
ReplyDeleteThe crushing of a rose-- such a strong image yet a lovely smell.
ReplyDeleteVery nice...so much said in a short time.
ReplyDeletewell done !
ReplyDeleteHappy Rally
JL&B
Short, sweet, effective... lovely ;D
ReplyDeleteLovely Poetry
ReplyDeleteHere's Mine STUFF
I've read this somewhere before, SiS.. nice words for sure..
ReplyDeleteWonderful post! :)
ReplyDeleteVery effective one this...hard to remember when need arises though.
ReplyDeleteFantastic write - I shall remember this one!
ReplyDeleteAwesomely said!
ReplyDeleteLoved this.. hugs xxx
wonderful analogy
ReplyDeleteWell done, SiS. Gentle, sweet, and wise.
ReplyDeleteHappy Rally days ...
Poem on! :-)
Fine nominations for Perfect Poet and congratulations to you.
@ Jingle Poetry
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Ji for the blessings.. So sweet of you..
Someone is Special
@ argentpoet
ReplyDeleteGlad you loved it, thank you so much for the sweet encouraging words..
Someone is Special
@ Krislin Neo, Ting (Syracuse Pike)
ReplyDeleteThank you so much for your special words.. Glad to have you here.. Thanks..
Someone is Special
@ inaweblogisback
ReplyDeleteGlad you love it.. Thank you so so much..
Someone is Special
@ Amity
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Amity.. Happy Man..
Someone is Special
@ bendedspoon
ReplyDeletedefinitely not easy but one can try to be so..
Someone is Special
@ Rachel Hoyt
ReplyDeleteHmm, hope you won't do that.. Thank you so much.. Happy Man..
Someone is Special
@ Dishilicious
ReplyDeletethank you so much Dishi.. Happy Man..
Someone is Special
@ Jaan Pehchaan
ReplyDeletethank you so much and Welcome to Few Miles
Someone is Special
@ bodhirose
ReplyDeleteGlad you love it Gayle.. Thanks thanks thanks..
Someone is Special
@ Blaga
ReplyDeletethank you so much blaga.. Happy Man..
Someone is Special
@ Chim's World of Literature
ReplyDeleteGlad you love this cute poem.. thanks..
Someone is Special
@ sam
ReplyDeleteAww.. thanks a lot for your sweet words..
Someone is Special
@ Alethea
ReplyDeleteAww.. thank you so much.. very much happy...
Someone is Special
@ Ramesh Sood
ReplyDeletePerfect RS... Thank you so much..
Someone is Special
@ booguloo
ReplyDeleteGlad you like it and Welcome to Few Miles..
Someone is Special
@ mairmusic
ReplyDeletethank you so much mairmusic, glad to read your encouraging words..
Someone is Special
@ Reggie
ReplyDeletethank you so much for your sweet encouraging comment..
Someone is Special
@ JL Dodge
ReplyDeletethank you JL Dodge.. So sweet of you
Someone is Special
@ richardbradleywilks
ReplyDeleteGlad you love it.. and thanks a lot..
Someone is Special
@ ASHISH BARDHAN
ReplyDeletethank you so much Ashish..
Someone is Special
@ Vinay
ReplyDeletethank you so much Vinay..
Someone is Special
@ Simran
ReplyDeleteSimran, so sweet of you.. Happy Man..
Someone is Special
@ Rekha
ReplyDeleteyou are absolutely right.. hard to remeber when need arises though.. thanks
Someone is Special
@ abthomas
ReplyDeletethank you so much abthomas.. SmileS..
Someone is Special
@ Olivia
ReplyDeleteSo sweet of you Olivia..
Someone is Special
@ Jillian
ReplyDeleteanalogy... Happy Man and Welcome to Few Miles.....
Someone is Special
@ JamieDedes
ReplyDeleteJamie so sweet of you.. Thank you so much for your blessings..
Someone is Special
i may forgive but won't forget ever ........................................
ReplyDelete@ shweta
ReplyDeletei may forgive but won't forget ever ........................................
oh oh.. Good.. but try to forget things..
Someone is Special