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On a rainy day when she was gazing through window, he mesmerized her with his touches on her sensuous skin making her feel awe. She fell in love with him. Time slipped, turned and fluttered away. Now she keeps looking through window waiting for him but it is just her own reflection on the windowpane.


This post is a part of Write Over the Weekend, an initiative for Indian Bloggers by BlogAdda. What you feel about this love? WoW or not? Do let me know :) And BlogAdda says.....


Also submitted to G-Man's Friday Flash 55.


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  1. the factfictionJune 28, 2013 at 5:03 PM

    beautiful again

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  2. Diwakar NarayanJune 28, 2013 at 10:59 PM

    Nice one, happens a lot.

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  3. G-ManJune 28, 2013 at 11:18 PM

    Sarav...
    This is brilliantly sad.
    Great piece of writing
    Loved your Longing 55
    Thanks for playing, thanks for your support, and have a Kick Ass Week-End

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    1. Someone is SpecialAugust 16, 2013 at 11:52 PM

      Thank you so much G-Man.. :) Pleasure to have you here..

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  4. AishwaryaJune 28, 2013 at 11:22 PM

    lovely reflection :D

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  5. Confused SoulJune 29, 2013 at 4:51 PM

    this was beautiful :)

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    1. Someone is SpecialAugust 16, 2013 at 11:54 PM

      Thank you so much :) :) Glad you felt it beautiful!!!

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  6. Uma AnandaneJune 29, 2013 at 11:19 PM

    Yes!I second ash here
    Lovely reflection - can be revived thro' thoughts again and again

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  7. ManaJune 29, 2013 at 11:52 PM

    Lovely story.

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  8. SimranJuly 8, 2013 at 11:01 PM

    Touching...
    <3 it!

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  9. Vidhya SaravanakumarJuly 9, 2013 at 12:12 PM

    so nice one

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