On a rainy day when she was gazing through window, he mesmerized her with his touches on her sensuous skin making her feel awe. She fell in love with him. Time slipped, turned and fluttered away. Now she keeps looking through window waiting for him but it is just her own reflection on the windowpane.
This post is a part of Write Over the Weekend, an initiative for Indian Bloggers by BlogAdda. What you feel about this love? WoW or not? Do let me know :) And BlogAdda says.....
Also submitted to G-Man's Friday Flash 55.
Read Part 2 and Part 3 of the story, if you have missed it.
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beautiful again
ReplyDeletethank you so much :)
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ReplyDeleteThanks Diwa :)
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ReplyDeleteThis is brilliantly sad.
Great piece of writing
Loved your Longing 55
Thanks for playing, thanks for your support, and have a Kick Ass Week-End
Thank you so much G-Man.. :) Pleasure to have you here..
Deletelovely reflection :D
ReplyDeleteThanks Ash :) Good to have you back!
Deletethis was beautiful :)
ReplyDeleteThank you so much :) :) Glad you felt it beautiful!!!
DeleteYes!I second ash here
ReplyDeleteLovely reflection - can be revived thro' thoughts again and again
Thanks a lot Uma.. Happy to have you back !!!
DeleteLovely story.
ReplyDeleteThank yo Manasa :)
DeleteTouching...
ReplyDelete<3 it!
Little One.. Happy!!!!!!!!!!!!
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ReplyDeleteThank you pondati :)
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