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She writes on the windowpane.

When you say nothing at all…I simply listen to your silent words. Why cannot someone have a relationship with rain?
Smiling silently! I know our love is beyond what people could imagine.

She keeps looking through window waiting for him all day and night hoping he will come back soon.


This post is a part of Write Over the Weekend, an initiative for Indian Bloggers by BlogAdda. What do you feel about this love? WoW or not? And BlogAdda says...


Also submitted to G-Man's Friday Flash 55.

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Comments

  1. Brian MillerJuly 5, 2013 at 5:44 PM

    smiles. endearing and beautiful...why cant you have a relationship with the rain...i like the innocence of that question...and the longing is felt...

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    1. Someone is SpecialJuly 18, 2013 at 6:01 PM

      thanks. glad you felt it beautiful - "Why cannot someone have a relationship with rain?"

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  2. G-ManJuly 5, 2013 at 6:13 PM

    Saravana...
    You have such a compassionate soul
    Loved your very thoughtful 55
    Thanks for playing, thanks for visiting, and have a Kick Ass Week-End

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    1. Someone is SpecialJuly 18, 2013 at 6:01 PM

      G-Man,

      Thank you so much :) Sure I will continue to :)

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  3. AnonymousJuly 5, 2013 at 10:07 PM

    nice.
    keep inspiring.

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  4. PanchaliJuly 5, 2013 at 10:36 PM

    Beautiful...studded with emotions that warm the heart,SIS...:)Lovely!

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  5. Diwakar NarayanJuly 6, 2013 at 12:13 PM

    Very nice, SiS.

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  6. SimranJuly 8, 2013 at 10:59 PM

    Remarkable!!
    It made my day a complete bliss :) :)
    Thank you so much.

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  7. Vidhya SaravanakumarJuly 9, 2013 at 12:13 PM

    great

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