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image courtesy : Rachana Shakyawar

alone in seashore
I admire the way birds play
time to sketch with words

words play within the
structure limit, still it can
please hearts to fly high

fly high to the sky
happy to roam around, yes,
it's summer season

I'm happy to write
although I missed the deadline
my lord, please forgive!


Published for April Heights, Prompts: Forgive, Play, Seashore and Summer. Do leave your footprints!

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Saravanakumar Murugan

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  1. VaisakhiApril 9, 2012 at 10:45 PM

    i so loved the pic...n wat u wrote goes so in sync wid it...amazin...love it...:)

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  2. ElleceeApril 10, 2012 at 1:55 AM

    Love your haiku and the picture fits so well. I like your lines "time to sketch with words" because as poets this is what we try to do.

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  3. ChevrefeuilleApril 10, 2012 at 4:38 AM

    Namaste SiS, what a nice series of haiku on all the last prompts. great! Lovely takes on it.
    Wonderfully crafted.

    Namaste

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  4. Ramesh SoodApril 10, 2012 at 11:29 AM

    Preying birds;
    ah, I hide quietly
    under sand...

    under sand
    takes me my own fear;
    playing birds..

    RS:)

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  5. Cloud NineApril 10, 2012 at 12:01 PM

    Wonderful! And what a picture, bro!

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  6. Ruchi JainApril 10, 2012 at 1:37 PM

    so corresponding pic...

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  7. Magical Mystical TeacherApril 10, 2012 at 5:31 PM

    Being alone on the seashore can provide plenteous inspiration--as your unfolding verses demonstrate!

    “Six Takes on ‘Seashore’”

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  8. SimranApril 10, 2012 at 9:07 PM

    Beautiful your words and Rachana's click :)

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  9. Saru SinghalApril 10, 2012 at 9:14 PM

    I loved these lines,

    "words play within the
    structure limit, still it can
    please hearts to fly high"

    These set of words are perfect piece of literature. Also I love the way you build the entire post around April heights and included the word 'summer' here.

    Beautiful writing...:)

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  10. smiling soulApril 12, 2012 at 12:47 PM

    u took to the shore with ur thoughts :) well expressed!:)

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  11. Rohit Singh JainApril 15, 2012 at 8:10 PM

    Awesome lines..and the image is totally with it,..Lovely post.

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  12. Someone is SpecialMay 30, 2012 at 5:56 PM

    @ vaisakhi

    i so loved the pic...n wat u wrote goes so in sync wid it...amazin...love it...:)

    Thanks vaisakhi.. :D

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  13. Someone is SpecialMay 30, 2012 at 6:02 PM

    @ Ellecee

    Love your haiku and the picture fits so well. I like your lines "time to sketch with words" because as poets this is what we try to do.

    Thank you Ellecee.. Yes, poets do that..

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  14. Someone is SpecialMay 30, 2012 at 6:03 PM

    @ Chevrefeuille

    Namaste SiS, what a nice series of haiku on all the last prompts. great! Lovely takes on it.
    Wonderfully crafted.

    Namaste

    Namaste Sir.. Thanks for your encouraging words..

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  15. Someone is SpecialMay 30, 2012 at 6:03 PM

    @ Ramesh Sood

    Preying birds;
    ah, I hide quietly
    under sand...

    under sand
    takes me my own fear;
    playing birds..

    RS:)

    Wow.. That was awesome RS...

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  16. Someone is SpecialMay 30, 2012 at 6:04 PM

    @ Cloud Nine

    Wonderful! And what a picture, bro!

    Thanks sister.. Credits goes to Rachana..

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  17. Someone is SpecialMay 30, 2012 at 6:04 PM

    @ Ruchi Jain

    so corresponding pic...

    Thanks.. and Welcome back to Few Miles..

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  18. Someone is SpecialMay 30, 2012 at 6:05 PM

    @ Magical Mystical Teacher

    Thanks MMT for your sweet encouraging words..

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  19. Someone is SpecialMay 30, 2012 at 6:05 PM

    @ Simran

    Beautiful your words and Rachana's click :)

    Thanks Little One..

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  20. Someone is SpecialMay 30, 2012 at 6:07 PM

    @ Saru Singhal

    Thank you so much Saru.. Happy Man...

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  21. Someone is SpecialMay 30, 2012 at 6:08 PM

    @ sowmya

    u took to the shore with ur thoughts :) well expressed!:)

    Aww Thanks sowmya..

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  22. Someone is SpecialMay 30, 2012 at 6:08 PM

    @ Rohit Singh Jain

    Awesome lines..and the image is totally with it,..Lovely post.

    Welcome to Few Miles.. Happy and glad you loved it.. SmileS..

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