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| image courtesy : Rachana Shakyawar |
alone in seashore
I admire the way birds play
time to sketch with words
words play within the
structure limit, still it can
please hearts to fly high
fly high to the sky
happy to roam around, yes,
it's summer season
I'm happy to write
although I missed the deadline
my lord, please forgive!
Published for April Heights, Prompts: Forgive, Play, Seashore and Summer. Do leave your footprints!
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"முகமறியா நண்பர்களின் கருத்துக்களே எனக்கு படிகற்கள்"
i so loved the pic...n wat u wrote goes so in sync wid it...amazin...love it...:)
ReplyDeleteLove your haiku and the picture fits so well. I like your lines "time to sketch with words" because as poets this is what we try to do.
ReplyDeleteNamaste SiS, what a nice series of haiku on all the last prompts. great! Lovely takes on it.
ReplyDeleteWonderfully crafted.
Namaste
Preying birds;
ReplyDeleteah, I hide quietly
under sand...
under sand
takes me my own fear;
playing birds..
RS:)
Wonderful! And what a picture, bro!
ReplyDeleteso corresponding pic...
ReplyDeleteBeing alone on the seashore can provide plenteous inspiration--as your unfolding verses demonstrate!
ReplyDelete“Six Takes on ‘Seashore’”
Beautiful your words and Rachana's click :)
ReplyDeleteI loved these lines,
ReplyDelete"words play within the
structure limit, still it can
please hearts to fly high"
These set of words are perfect piece of literature. Also I love the way you build the entire post around April heights and included the word 'summer' here.
Beautiful writing...:)
u took to the shore with ur thoughts :) well expressed!:)
ReplyDeleteAwesome lines..and the image is totally with it,..Lovely post.
ReplyDelete@ vaisakhi
ReplyDeletei so loved the pic...n wat u wrote goes so in sync wid it...amazin...love it...:)
Thanks vaisakhi.. :D
@ Ellecee
ReplyDeleteLove your haiku and the picture fits so well. I like your lines "time to sketch with words" because as poets this is what we try to do.
Thank you Ellecee.. Yes, poets do that..
@ Chevrefeuille
ReplyDeleteNamaste SiS, what a nice series of haiku on all the last prompts. great! Lovely takes on it.
Wonderfully crafted.
Namaste
Namaste Sir.. Thanks for your encouraging words..
@ Ramesh Sood
ReplyDeletePreying birds;
ah, I hide quietly
under sand...
under sand
takes me my own fear;
playing birds..
RS:)
Wow.. That was awesome RS...
@ Cloud Nine
ReplyDeleteWonderful! And what a picture, bro!
Thanks sister.. Credits goes to Rachana..
@ Ruchi Jain
ReplyDeleteso corresponding pic...
Thanks.. and Welcome back to Few Miles..
@ Magical Mystical Teacher
ReplyDeleteThanks MMT for your sweet encouraging words..
@ Simran
ReplyDeleteBeautiful your words and Rachana's click :)
Thanks Little One..
@ Saru Singhal
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Saru.. Happy Man...
@ sowmya
ReplyDeleteu took to the shore with ur thoughts :) well expressed!:)
Aww Thanks sowmya..
@ Rohit Singh Jain
ReplyDeleteAwesome lines..and the image is totally with it,..Lovely post.
Welcome to Few Miles.. Happy and glad you loved it.. SmileS..