Scarred by her words, the
heart debris cries for the life
once he dreamt with her
Theme: Debris
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Are you ready for The Haiku Challenge? The details are HERE, and the challenge enters Day 19 with this Haiku Post. Since I am in India, the challenge begins at 12 AM or 00:00 IST and goes on until GMT-08:30AM (i.e., the next day 02:00 PM or 14:00 IST), so all the time zones can participate in this challenge, three cheers to all the challengers! Write a Haiku with theme as Debris and share it in the comment section of this post or in the Linky if available.
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Oh, the sadness...
ReplyDeleteWell done, SIS!
I too got similar haiku today :) by the way nice one
ReplyDeletegot one for you.
ReplyDeleteCheers.
ouch! :(
ReplyDeletethis is a fresh and touching take on the prompt SIS.
ReplyDeletewell written.
trisha
http://sharmishthabasu.wordpress.com/2011/02/19/debris/
Very sad! Also and indictment for when I am cranky with my dear husband. I hope to not scar him with my words.
ReplyDeleteShalom.
http://cloakedmonk.com/2011/02/19/children/
a sad prompt. and a sad haiku but beautifully penned!
ReplyDeletesarah
nice!!
ReplyDeleteSo much sorrow, in such a pretty Haiku
ReplyDelete@ bodhirose
ReplyDelete:-( Thanks for the smiles bodhirose..
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@ Nobel N
ReplyDeleteoh is it. Thanks and yours was good...
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@ Morning
ReplyDeleteThanks Ji, smiles..
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@ lynnaima
ReplyDelete:-( :-( :-(
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@ trisha
ReplyDeletethanks trisha for the smiles..
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@ cloakedmonk.com
ReplyDeletethats good.. Hmm... :-)
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@ subtlescribbler
ReplyDeletethanks sarah for the smiles.. indeed a sad one...
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@ Dishilicious
ReplyDeletethanks dishi :-)
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@ Gerardine Baugh
ReplyDeletethanks Gerardine.. Smiles..
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