awful world I see
here, they need flesh but not the
little soul inside
tears is my friend
when pain in vein, neither God
nor humans I trust
Theme: Image5
Are you ready for The Haiku Challenge? The details are HERE, and the challenge enters Day 10 with this Haiku Post. Since I am in India, the challenge begins at 12AM or 00:00 IST and goes on until GMT-08:30AM (i.e., the next day 02:00 PM or 14:00 IST), so all the time zones can participate in this challenge, three cheers to all the challengers! Write a Haiku inspired by the image, Image5 and share it in the comment section of this post or in the Linky.
Happy Haiku Challenge to you all!
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"முகமறியா நண்பர்களின் கருத்துக்களே எனக்கு படிகற்கள்"
The ending is just heart wrenching. Well done!
ReplyDeletesad but true, every day we come across such stories of cruelty against women. heart breaking truth
ReplyDeleteSad one, SIS. Well done.
ReplyDeleteohh no.. i didn't realize the image was the theme today.. hmm.. newayss writing something is imp for me :)
ReplyDeleteSo sad. There is such poignancy in your words and in the picture.
ReplyDeleteYou can find mine here: http://cloakedmonk.com/2011/02/10/hiding/
P.S. to all...my daughter is sick with strep throat and I am behind on my visiting the haikus. Please be patient! I'll be there soon.
double standard people always spread pain around them. beautiful post SIS.
ReplyDeletetrisha
http://sharmishthabasu.wordpress.com/2011/02/10/blushing-in-dreams/
you write a sad tale .. :|
ReplyDeletetouched my heart, this haiku of urs was indeed a deep one!
ReplyDeleteand the image is so lovely...am eager to see what everybody else wrote :)
beautiful and touching! like this very much!
ReplyDeleteanother lovely poignant piece from you, SiS! it is truly sad when love is replaced by lust.
ReplyDeletehttp://pinklady-bing.blogspot.com/2011/02/longing-for-you.html
It is both sad and beautiful. She seems so alone, doesn't she?
ReplyDeleteYour words, as always, are evocative. THANK YOU
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I think you really got the essence of this one, SiS. Heartbreaking reality.
ReplyDeleteI'm glad to see so many participants! Congrats.
so sad I think we all feel this way once in a while!
ReplyDelete@ Mama Zen
ReplyDeleteThanks for the support and smiles, you are so sweeet...
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@ Noble N
ReplyDeleteof course they are.. :-)
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@ bodhirose
ReplyDeletesmiles, they are true, hopefully one day it stops..
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@ RaNiiiiii
ReplyDeleteNo issues, RaNiii, thanks for the smiles..
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@ cloakedmonk.com
ReplyDeleteHope your daughter is fine now.. Thanks for playing..
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@ trisha
ReplyDeletethanks trisha for the sweet words..
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@ ladynimue s
ReplyDelete:-) :-( what to do...
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@ subtlescribbler
ReplyDeletesarah, thanks for the encouraging words.. Even I wonder the same..
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@ Dishilicious
ReplyDeleteDishi, glad you liked it.. Thanks..
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@ Bing (PinkLady)
ReplyDeleteThanks Bing, and whatever you said is right..
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@ Julie Jordan Scott
ReplyDeleteof course she is.. thanks for all the smiles Julie..
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@ liv2write2day
ReplyDeleteVictoria, thanks for all the smiles, it is my pleasure to see many poets linking.. Smiles...
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@ Amanda Moore
ReplyDeleteI too feel the same..
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tears is my friend
ReplyDeletewhen pain in vein, neither God
nor humans I trust
awesome lines
@ shweta
ReplyDeletetears is my friend
when pain in vein, neither God
nor humans I trust
awesome lines
Very true lines.. Smiles..
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