Strangest of the minds that alighted on me
Attracted and influenced truly and completely
Reminiscent of My Maker and the Infinite Energy
Apposite to the life in this human body
Versatile genius, His veritable sweet child
Assiduous in life and advantageous to lives
Nature’s Greatest Asset with musical ears
Assertive and articulate in words
Kingdom of thoughts, pure and precious
Unexampled happiness with unexceptionable honesty
Master of unfeigned smile and ineffable joy
Appreciation of her ten-month wait
Rendered the finest of souls to earth
As someone special to me
Father I thank you
For this cute &
Precious
Gift
They coloured my life
With beautiful flowers
Treat for perfect poet
I love to accept the "Perfect Poet Award", Week 32 with the Haiku, "Treat"
Published as a part of
Thursday Poets Rally, Week 33
"A place where poetry is cherished and poets are recognized for their talents"
I love to nominate the following poets for week 34...
Leo
Riika
Trisha
Have a Poetic Week
FROM THE AUTHOR's DESK
Thank you for visiting Few Miles. If you would like to contact me for advertisements, sponsorships, book reviews, product reviews, website reviews, giveaways, contests, or to provide feedback on my writing, please email me at sarav@iamsaravofficial.com. You can also fill out a form online or write to me anonymously on this site. Your support and encouragement as an inspiration is greatly appreciated. If you have a challenge for me, I would be happy to write about it. I believe that both constructive criticism and positive feedback can help a writer grow and improve. Please take a few minutes to leave your thoughts and feedback. Thank you for your sincere support.
"முகமறியா நண்பர்களின் கருத்துக்களே எனக்கு படிகற்கள்"
thoughtful post...
ReplyDeletelove the shape of your poem,
well done.
I linked you in.
Reads like a prayer in my opinion. Good job, SiS.
ReplyDeleteMine is here:
http://liv2write2day.wordpress.com/2010/11/17/jingles-poetry-rally-thanksgiving/
Very cool shape to that poem! Thanks for sharing.
ReplyDeleteCongratulations! Definitely something to be thankful for! Happy Rally!
ReplyDeleteI Thank you for sharing this.. what a nice way of saying it..
ReplyDeleteDear S, you have done a wonderful job here.. :)
All the very best.. xx
Thank for the nomination!=D~ And congrats on the wonderful award!^^~
ReplyDeleteThis is the best gift ever and I am sure it is precious than anything else =D
And lovely haiku! =D
Cheers and have a wonderful rally!
@ Jingle
ReplyDeleteJi, happy man, thanks a billion for linking in.. Glad you loved it..
With blessings from you I love to explore more Ji..
--Someone is Special--
@ liv2write2day
ReplyDeleteHmm this is a dedication for the sweetest soul in this earth, thanks to The Father for giving a wonderful soul to this world. Hope you people enjoyed it..
--Someone is Special--
@ Heather Grace Stewart
ReplyDeleteGlad to know that.. Nice to have you here.
--Someone is Special--
@ lynnaima
ReplyDeleteThank you so much, wish you the same. Nice to have you here. Hoping for more support..
--Someone is Special--
@ Olivia
ReplyDeleteThanks dear for the wonderful words, Glad to hear, I am blessed with blogging friends like you..
--Someone is Special--
@ RiikaInfinityy
ReplyDeleteRiika, I was mesmerized by your wonderful poem, you are a special writer, sure. Aww. Thanks you so much for those wonderful words.
Yes a precious one and a sweet dedication by me. Glad you liked the Haiku as well.. Thank you once again Riika for those wonderful words..
With love wishing you a very happy rally and week..
--Someone is Special--
Beautiful poem! Really lovely tribute to your father!
ReplyDeleteCongratulations for winning the award!
you know...i think it is a lovely tribute...and congrats on your awards....
ReplyDeletevery nice poem SIS
ReplyDeleteI like the way you have chosen your words and phrases so carefully, it is full of images and has to be reread!
ReplyDeletehttp://jessicasjapes.wordpress.com/2010/11/18/dark-severance/
Thank you for sharing the gift of your words with us! And thank you for the invite at "Room for Romance", will stop by for sure!
ReplyDeleteVery beautiful :)
ReplyDeleteYou shaped your words and shaped your poem. They match perfectly! A wonderful tribute.
ReplyDeleteA very heartfelt piece for someone very special. Thanks for sharing!
ReplyDeleteMy first time to see this kind of poem...that was nice....and the message aswell
ReplyDeletewhat kind of poem is this SiS?
ReplyDeleteits very beautiful...is it of a baby?
'father i thank you for this cute and precious gift'...
Lovely poem!
ReplyDeleteA fantastic write, the words cleverly arranged that to me I interpretted it as the point of an arrow, set upon penetrating to bring the meaning to the heart.
ReplyDeletewhat a lovely, touching tribute to your precious gift. very well written as always, SiS. congrats on your well-deserved award. :)
ReplyDeleteSwept Away
Beautiful shape poem.
ReplyDeletePamela
What a beautifull, pretty page to visit! and lovlier the post! Bless U :)
ReplyDeleteGreat structure to it!! reads really well.
ReplyDeletemorning is Jingle,
ReplyDeleteJingle is Morning,
I have read your three knots yesterday.
Happy Sunday!
beautiful entry for poets rally,
read a dozen new entries if you are free.
Thanks for the support.
beautifully done... are you speaking to God?
ReplyDelete~Drew
http://ukeepwalkingforward.wordpress.com/2010/11/17/see-me/
Great thoughts and a very powerful poem :)
ReplyDelete@ deadpoet88
ReplyDeleteGlad you felt the beauty of the poem, and yes a lovely tribute to the father of this world. (The God)
--Someone is Special--
@ Brian Miller
ReplyDeleteGlad to know that Brian.. Thanks for your wishes..
--Someone is Special--
@ words4afriend
ReplyDeleteGlad to know that words4afriend.. Thanks for your wonderful words..
--Someone is Special--
@ jessicasjapes
ReplyDeleteGlad to know that jessicasjapes.. Thanks a ton..
--Someone is Special--
@ scentofmyheart
ReplyDeleteHappy to know that scentofmyheart... Thanks for accepting the invite.. Thanks a ton..
--Someone is Special--
@ ina
ReplyDeleteGlad you felt the beauty of it.. Thank you so much..
--Someone is Special--
@ dan roberson
ReplyDeleteHappy to hear that dan roberson.. Thanks for the wonderful words..
--Someone is Special--
@ LeiffyV
ReplyDeleteOf course it is for someone very special.. Thanks for reading..
--Someone is Special--
@ haisley
ReplyDeleteGlad to know that haisley.. Happy man... Thanks for reading..
--Someone is Special--
@ Amity
ReplyDeleteDear Amity,
Glad to know that you felt the beauty of this piece.
This is a tribute to God for blessing a wonderful child to this world as someone special to me. Hope you enjoyed reading it as i did while writing..
--Someone is Special--
@ ocdbloggergirl
ReplyDeleteGlad you loved it ocdbloggergirl.. Thanks for reading..
--Someone is Special--
@ abthomas
ReplyDeleteHappy to read your feedback abthomas.. Glad you felt the feel of the poem..
--Someone is Special--
@ Bing (PinkLady)
ReplyDeleteBing thank you so much for your wonderful awards.. Glad you loved it.. Wish you lots of smiles Bing..
--Someone is Special--
@ flaubert
ReplyDeleteGlad to know that.. Thanks a ton.,.,
--Someone is Special--
@ Purvi
ReplyDeleteThanks for the wishes and blessing.. Glad you loved the poem.. Thanks once again..
--Someone is Special--
@ me_duress
ReplyDeleteGlad to know that.. Thank you so much..
--Someone is Special--
@ Jingle Poetry
ReplyDeleteMorning is Jingle, Jingle is Morning.. I read all your feedback, happy to know that Ji.. Thank you so much..
I had no net connectivity until this morning. I couldn't read more.. Will try to do that today.. Thanks for the wonderful support Ji..
--Someone is Special--
@ ukeepwalkingforward
ReplyDeleteGlad you felt the beauty of it.. yes of course I am speaking to God and thanking him for the precious gift..
--Someone is Special--
@ Sumit Sarkar
ReplyDeleteGlad to know that Sumit.. Thank you so much..
--Someone is Special--
someone special is precious gift. thanking the God for the gift make this more cute. love, bala
ReplyDelete@ Bala
ReplyDeleteof course everyone have someone special in their life.. blessed gift or precious gift they are special
--Someone is Sepcial--