On a gloomy day
As a stranger he came in
Stole my little heart
Pandered me, myself
Made me fall in love with him
Surprise gifts to add
No Inhibitions
Just advanced to taste the feast
Call them as divine
He shuffled..
Published as a part of
Image @ Room for Romance #7
Haiku Heights - Prompt: #18 - Stranger
Sensational Haiku Wednesday - Prompt: Inhibition(s)
Carry on Tuesday - Prompt: A gloomy and a windy day
Three Word Wednesday - advance, pander, shuffle
One Shot Wednesday at One Stop Poetry
recuerda mi corazon - Haiku My Heart
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I love 'he shuffled' as an ending..made it feel slightly awkward and much more intriguing and passionate..Jae
ReplyDeleteI .......LOVED IT!
ReplyDeleteVery sweet vignettes. Nice One Shot!
ReplyDeletei also liked the shuffle at the end..and the pic is just sooooo cute
ReplyDeleteTo the girl with long
ReplyDeleteHair - no inhibition - he
Freely gave his heart.
Cheers!
Jzb
Nicely done! Slick and "he shuffled" was magnificent!
ReplyDeleteHello...it seems that u are in love....
ReplyDeleteSweet and innocent! Lovely.
ReplyDeletevery cute...and the image was perfect..thanks for sharing with osw...pete
ReplyDeleteGreat haiku - the last line makes it perfect!
ReplyDeletecute...
ReplyDeleteThis is well done.. nice haikus..
ReplyDeletewndered about nice gifts that must have been added..
Awh so sweet! :O)
ReplyDeleteso cute photo there SiS!!!
ReplyDeleteloved the verses you penned...:-)
Nice rendering of the photo prompt, SiS. And well-written haiku.
ReplyDeleteDear SIS
ReplyDeleteA great collection of Haiku's I enjoyed all of them...
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Sweet, spare, with a natural end-line lesson.
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supercute post to go with the image. love, bala
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