Ignorance
Last Few Words Uttered
Kills me without a weapon
Pains of Ignorance
Published as a part of
ABC Wednesday, Prompt: I is for Ignorance
One Shot Wednesday at One Stop Poetry
Last Few Words Uttered
Kills me without a weapon
Pains of Ignorance
Published as a part of
ABC Wednesday, Prompt: I is for Ignorance
One Shot Wednesday at One Stop Poetry
Words as a weapon -- words spoken from ignorance. Good poem.
ReplyDelete@ Glynn
ReplyDeleteWelcome to Few Miles!
Thank you so much for your encouraging words..
--Someone Is Special--
Good one!
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nice...our words have the power to bring life or kill it...nice one shot!
ReplyDeleteI have always loved words that painted pictures... and this one does it so vividly... my favorite form of haiku - free from rules.
ReplyDeleteI like it so much.
ॐ नमः शिवाय
Om Namah Shivaya
I've noticed quite a few people lately are 'double-dipping' their works for separate challenges.
ReplyDelete(I'm gonna have to get on the ball - work smarter, not harder!)
Nice One Shot!
That's the worst feeling—being on the recieving end of hurtful words like that. Cool that you channel that into a haiku stanza. Happy One Shot!
ReplyDeleteOh, this says so much in a few perfectly chosen words. Words - ignorant, hurtful ones - can definitely be fatal wounds to the heart.
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ReplyDeleteSTICKS AND STONES was a LIE perpetrated by children. Words have power, they live forever in your heart. Each time we speak we can praise, rejoice or denigrate and hurt. It's a choice. This is longer than your poem. Also, not as good.
ReplyDeleteBravo. Thanks. Gay (@beachanny)
Once spoken can never be erased --
ReplyDeleteInteresting how a profound truth can be penned in such few words.
Thought provoking, Nice One Shot.
Joanny
http://thedowsersdaughter.blogspot.com/
apt words from you.
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@ gautami tripathy
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@ Brian Miller
ReplyDeleteFirst of all thanks for being regular on my blog... I am very happy to hear those from you..
HAppy One Shot!
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@ Shashi
ReplyDeleteWelcome To Few Miles!
Thank you so so much and happy to know that you liked it so much... Do keep coming..
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@ Eric Alder
ReplyDeleteThank you so so much and happy to know that you liked the work.....
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@ dustus
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HAppy One Shot!
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@ TALON
ReplyDeleteThank you so so much for your wonderful words.....
Happy One Shot!
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@ Monkey Man
ReplyDeleteThank you so so much for your encouraging words.....
Happy One Shot!
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@ Beachanny
ReplyDeleteThank you so so much.....
Happy One Shot!
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@ joanny
ReplyDeleteThank you so so much and I am happy to know that you loved the truth.....
Happy One Shot!
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@ Jingle
ReplyDeleteThank you so so much Ji....
Happy One Shot!
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SiS
ReplyDeleteSurreal seventeen syllables on a very real situation especially among children.
Brilliant!
SiS
ReplyDeleteSurreal seventeen syllables on a very real situation especially among children.
Brilliant!
SiS
ReplyDeleteSurreal seventeen syllables on a very real situation especially among children.
Brilliant!
@ ninotaziz
ReplyDeleteWelcome to Few Miles!
Thank you so much for those special words..
--Someone Is Special--
Lovely Haiku, words can either build us or destroy us..such truthfulness. Nice oneshot and i love haikus :)
ReplyDelete@ Wild Rose
ReplyDeleteWelcome to Few Miles!
Ignorance is the worst thing that anyone to bear..
Thank you so much for your encouraging words..I too love Haiku's inspired by Leo..
--Someone Is Special--
very nice put....and the pen IS mightier than the sword....thanks for sharing with one shot..cheers pete
ReplyDelete@ Pete Marshall
ReplyDeleteWelcome Pete!
Thank you so much for your encouraging words..
--Someone Is Special--
Ouch! So true! Once uttered, some words just linger on forever.. even if the intent was never to hurt.
ReplyDeleteA very stark haiku! Nice!!
@ Kavita
ReplyDeleteI accept that.. Thank you so much..
--Someone Is Specail--