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Let she stay in peace

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Scenario: This is a conversation between  a father and a doctor about the child’s incurable condition.

Doctor: How cute she is?

Father: She is the cutest child, demure, one can see in this volatile world. But..., why God offended me.

Doctor: Fate... that’s how we have to compromise. I will try to operate her.

Father: I don’t wish to give her pain in the eleventh hour. Let she stay in peace.


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  1. Thom GabrukiewiczSeptember 16, 2010 at 7:36 PM

    very heartfelt.

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  2. Someone is SpecialSeptember 16, 2010 at 7:43 PM

    @ ThomG

    Thank you so much, it is a real story, only the image is different!

    --Someone Is Special--

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  3. Julie Jordan ScottSeptember 16, 2010 at 11:45 PM

    Sorrowful, soulful, vivid.

    THANK YOU.

    Read my 3WW here.

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  4. PattiKenSeptember 17, 2010 at 10:02 AM

    This is so sad and caring.

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  5. Someone is SpecialSeptember 17, 2010 at 10:21 AM

    @ Julie Jordan Scott

    Welcome To Few Miles!
    Thank you so much for your wonderful encouraging words.. Do keep coming..

    --Someone Is Special--

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  6. Someone is SpecialSeptember 17, 2010 at 10:22 AM

    @ PattiKen

    Welcome back!
    Thank you so much and yes it is sad..

    --Someone Is Special--

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  7. TALONSeptember 17, 2010 at 10:52 AM

    Oh, no! This is breaking my heart! That poor sweet child!

    Touching 55, Someone is Special!

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  8. G-ManSeptember 17, 2010 at 11:16 AM

    SIS...
    You wrote this one from the heart. what a caring person.
    Thanks for playing, and have a Kick Ass Week-End...G

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  9. maglomaniacSeptember 17, 2010 at 11:16 AM

    This is the most painful decision that one could take.

    ~Harsha

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  10. StrangerSeptember 17, 2010 at 12:31 PM

    So heartbreaking and humane. Lovely 55.

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  11. joannaSeptember 17, 2010 at 2:46 PM

    I grieve for the childhood she will never experience,,,, what ever the dear one's day is like in the 11th hour, I hope it is filled with love and joy before her return home to the creator.

    Heartfelt 55er,

    Joanny
    http://thedowsersdaughter.blogspot.com/

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  12. Brian MillerSeptember 17, 2010 at 3:51 PM

    you have described a very tough place to be, in making a decision in the life of a hurt little one...i like the choice of peace in the end...nice 55.

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  13. Someone is SpecialSeptember 17, 2010 at 6:44 PM

    @ TALON

    Welcome back !
    Yes it is painful...

    --Someone Is Specail--

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  14. Someone is SpecialSeptember 17, 2010 at 6:45 PM

    @ G-Man

    Welcome back !
    I had seen it through my eyes and I penned down from my heart. Thank you so much G-Man...

    --Someone Is Specail--

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  15. Someone is SpecialSeptember 17, 2010 at 6:46 PM

    @ maglomaniac

    Welcome back !
    I accept that... Thanks for stopping by..

    --Someone Is Specail--

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  16. Someone is SpecialSeptember 17, 2010 at 6:47 PM

    @ Stranger

    Welcome back !
    I accept that... Thanks for stopping by..

    --Someone Is Specail--

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  17. Someone is SpecialSeptember 17, 2010 at 6:48 PM

    @ joanny

    Thanks for the blessings.. She will have them..

    --Someone Is Specail--

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  18. Someone is SpecialSeptember 17, 2010 at 6:49 PM

    @ Brian Miller

    I accept that.. Thank you so much Brian..

    --Someone Is Specail--

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  19. magiceyeSeptember 17, 2010 at 7:27 PM

    beautifully done.. touching

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  20. Monkey ManSeptember 17, 2010 at 9:32 PM

    This is so sad. A tough decision for a parent to make.

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  21. limeSeptember 17, 2010 at 10:28 PM

    heartbreaking. not a decision any parent should have to make.

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  22. AnonymousSeptember 18, 2010 at 3:32 AM

    am touched ! good one .

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  23. Lulda CasadagaSeptember 18, 2010 at 5:17 AM

    We wonder why these things happen...Heartfelt 55!

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  24. Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis HallSeptember 18, 2010 at 5:49 AM

    that super sad but a wise decision perhaps.
    beautiful 55.

    my 55 is here

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  25. AmitySeptember 18, 2010 at 9:33 AM

    beautiful 55 F...:)

    the pic speaks more...:)

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  26. KBSeptember 19, 2010 at 4:08 AM

    Heartbreaking. Thank you for sharing this story with us.

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  27. ms pieSeptember 19, 2010 at 9:20 AM

    children are wonderfully made....

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  28. Someone is SpecialSeptember 19, 2010 at 3:04 PM

    @ magiceye

    Thanks you so much for your encouraging words and happy to know that it touched..

    --Someone Is Special--

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  29. Someone is SpecialSeptember 19, 2010 at 3:05 PM

    @ Monkey Man

    It is a tough decision but sometimes help you better.. Thanks you so much for your encouraging words.

    --Someone Is Special--

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  30. Someone is SpecialSeptember 19, 2010 at 3:06 PM

    @ lime

    Welcome to few Miles !
    I wish the same..

    --Someone Is Special--

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  31. Someone is SpecialSeptember 19, 2010 at 3:06 PM

    @ ladynimue

    Thank you so much for your encouraging words...

    --Someone Is Special--

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  32. Someone is SpecialSeptember 19, 2010 at 3:07 PM

    @ Lulda Casadaga

    That's the reality.. Thank you so much for your encouraging words...

    --Someone Is Special--

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  33. Someone is SpecialSeptember 19, 2010 at 3:08 PM

    @ Jingle

    Thank you so much Jingle.. It is your blessing which makes me write more and some real life stories too..

    --Someone Is Special--

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  34. Someone is SpecialSeptember 19, 2010 at 3:10 PM

    @ Amity

    Thank you so much Amity..

    --Someone Is Special--

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  35. Someone is SpecialSeptember 19, 2010 at 3:11 PM

    @ KB

    I am happy to share and will share more real life stories with all your support.. Thanks..

    --Someone Is Special--

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  36. Someone is SpecialSeptember 19, 2010 at 3:11 PM

    @ ms pie

    Welcome to Few Miles !
    I accept that....

    --Someone Is Special--

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  37. The Write GirlSeptember 20, 2010 at 7:29 AM

    What beautiful words...certainly it is sad to see such a beautiful girl suffer. However, it is wonderful to know that there is peace.

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  38. Someone is SpecialSeptember 20, 2010 at 5:24 PM

    @ The Write Girl

    Thank you so so much for those encouraging words. I am glad to know that you loved the decision made by their parents.. Do keep coming...

    --Someone Is Special--

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