Silently, I waited; I searched for the signs.
I looked all around for myself different from me.
The lavender rays glittering in the air,
Of which the dandelion sun had no share!
The sweetness of time, gone without notice.
All because of the treasure I cannot miss!
The senses submitted themselves to a superior sense,
That rose above and name itself 'Love'.
But the waters are new and the feet are weak.
What if I slipped and got myself drowned?
The light of hope accompanied the thirst;
The fear became an imagination, forgotten first.
Will the light lead me to the sun?
Or blind me with its overpowering force?
I step into the waters trusting the light,
That broke the silence of my searching eyes.
To read the next two parts of this poem, please visit the following posts, Thirsty Waters & Sweetened Waters.
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"முகமறியா நண்பர்களின் கருத்துக்களே எனக்கு படிகற்கள்"
Love can definitely be scary to fall into....
ReplyDeleteLovely poem!
great....
ReplyDeleteThanks for tagging properly..
your work is always enjoyable...
unbeatable flow.
@ TALON
ReplyDeleteThank you so much, this was my first thought in Few Miles..
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@ Jingle
ReplyDeleteThanks for providing a platform.. Thank you so much Ji..
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This is beautiful. Nice write. Love and Light, Sender
ReplyDelete@ Sender
ReplyDeleteThank you so much.. It continues..
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I'm sure your work will garner you plenty of readers.
ReplyDelete(Here's a tip: If you read and comment on other blogs, you'll find most of them return the favor)
ah i feel the fear yet know it continues so i will follow the stream...smiles.
ReplyDeletethis is beautiful and I love the last two lines! So nice!
ReplyDeletePamela
Powerful. Love, loved, loved the last two lines of this poem.
ReplyDeleteAwesome!! I always like reading poems and stories that end with positivity and hope...
ReplyDeleteExcellent poem,Someone!!
Thank you for participating in the poetry potluck, and for linking this poem to it! It's lovely !! A real treat to the reader's senses!
And you are right about Jingle!! Many of us unread poets have gained recognition cuz of her...she rocks!!
"The senses submitted themselves to a superior sense"
ReplyDeletebeautiful....
loved the use of metaphors..
And I totally agree with you about Jingle. She is one amazing lady :)
@ Eric Alder
ReplyDeleteWelcome back.
Thank you so much for your encouraging words and wishes.. This is my first post in this blog.
I am following this technique for the past three months and now I am able to get good readership.. Thanks once again Eric..
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@ Brain Miller
ReplyDeleteThank you so much for your encouraging words..
Happy Poetry Potluck..
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@ flaubert
ReplyDeleteThank you so much for your sweet encouraging words..
Happy Poetry Potluck..
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@ Thoughts Not Lost
ReplyDeleteWelcome to Few Miles!
Thank you so much for your wonderful encouraging words..
Happy Poetry Potluck..
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@ Kavita
ReplyDeleteThank you so much for those sweet encouraging words..
You made my day with so sweet words...
Happy Poetry Potluck..
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@ Alethea
ReplyDeleteWelcome to Few Miles!
Thank you so much for those sweet encouraging words..
Yeah yeah, Jingl is great lady :-)
Happy Poetry Potluck..
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you are doing well my friend..
ReplyDelete@ fiveloaf
ReplyDeleteThank you so much for your encouraging words..
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nice..... and keep going and i am also a person in your friends list
ReplyDelete@ sikandhar ali
ReplyDeletenice..... and keep going and i am also a person in your friends list
Welcome to Few Miles! and thanks for your comment...
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Kool!!
ReplyDelete@ Zainab Urooj
ReplyDeleteKool!!
:-)
Now my words are also in silence !
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