and this is for my dream one, it continues ! ! ! 'Thirsty Waters'
My hands told me I’m shivering with fear,
When I only thought of saying it to my dear!
Heart became restless and sounded louder,
Seconds before, it was as silent as falling powder.
Thoughts crept into the mind with great force,
Confused, and stopped it from thinking, of course!
I would imagine that future, a few hours away;
That would burden it with my past straightaway.
Carrying an untold love is heavy, indeed;
Courage, real courage is what I need!
Hiding my fear, or hiding myself in fear,
I came to you and looked at you, my dear.
That very sight quenched the restless senses,
Which were thirsty for that real courage!
I became my natural self, totally myself;
And realized you were surely my real self.
No words said, I saw the ‘heavy’ love,
Getting dissolved in us as it reached you!
To read the first and third part of this poem, please visit the following posts, First Waters & Sweetened Waters.
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"முகமறியா நண்பர்களின் கருத்துக்களே எனக்கு படிகற்கள்"
Love is the only relationship which makes you feel so..
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Saras
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very tense poem,
the image is sharp and fun.
excellent job!
Happy Monday!
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Amazing :3 ^^~You are making me thirsty:P
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Happy Poetry Potluck<3
I agree with Riika, awesome post my friend...so happy to see you in!!
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I am glad to know that you loved it and found it excellent..
Thanks Ji..
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@ Jingle
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@ RiikaInfinityy
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Happy Poetry Potluck
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@ buttercup
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Always happy to be a part of this..
Happy Poetry Potluck
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What a wonderful piece. I too am thirsty...Love and Light, Sender
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Thank you for your sweet thirsty words.. This is the second part of my poetry series, till now three I have posted will post many.. It has a life behind it..
--Someone Is Special--
This has a very 'in the moment' feel to it. You're lucky to find such inspirtion.
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untold love is heavy indeed...nice write
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Thank you so much for those wonderful encouraging words..
Happy Poetry Potluck..
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@ Brian Miller
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Brain, for those wonderful encouraging sweet words..
Happy Poetry Potluck..
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Nice Blog and a wonderful poem! And I like this :
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@ umamaheswari
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I am glad to know that you loved the blog and the poem.. Thank you..
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when ever to express love with our dear ones,words always be silence,heart will be restless,fear plays a main role.. eyes are the only one to express complete feel!!!
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