Abstained from the fear of heavy love,
I prayed God for the real courage!
Realized that you were my real self
I came to my love by myself!
Sensed the halo future in your eyes,
I dissolved in the love within us!
North or South, East or West,
I say our love is the Sweetest!
Tasted the sweetest sweet in you, and
I emptied the butterflies from my stomach!
Sweetened soul watered with the heavy love,
I treasured these moments as, “Sweetened Waters”
To read the first two parts of this poem, please visit the following posts, First Waters & Thirsty Waters
PS: This post has been published as a part of
- Thursday Poets Rally, Week 27
- Three Word Wednesday (Halo, Prayer, Abstain)
- One Single Impression (Empty)
It's time to say thanks to Jingle and the fellow "Thursday Poets Rally", Poets for giving me for this wonderful award, "The Perfect Poet Award". Thank you so much poets for the sweet welcome for my poem, "Sweetened Waters".
The Most Considerate Poet Award
The Most Stylish Poet Award
The Most Mindful Poet Award
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"முகமறியா நண்பர்களின் கருத்துக்களே எனக்கு படிகற்கள்"
very nice I have always admired people who can write such fluent poetry.. an that too in such words that it makes sense to dumb people like me ...
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@ Bikramjit
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--Someone Is Special--
very unique and special poem,
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@ Jingle
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I loved 'I emptied the butterflies from my stomach' well written :o)
ReplyDeletethis is so sweet and romantic! truly brilliant!
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loved the poem.. :D
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I enjoyed this!
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This was awesome,...romantic and touched my heart!! Love your blog. Hugs xx
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Very nice!
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@ Jingle
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@ Jingle
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This was sweet indeed!
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@ Kavisionz
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the words "halo future" and "sweetened soul" have grabbed the attention...
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i think u need to refill d butterflies,,
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wow, quite simply, this was beautiful. please keep writing x
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