Worst Hour

At last, after 10 days of Half Yearly Holidays we were back to school. The first hour was mathematics, she yelled out my name to scold me for losing two marks, and I replied to her, “If you can’t be gentle in praising me for scoring 98, at least don’t scold me with vulgar words”.

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Puzzle

I had been calling Riti’s mobile number right from the morning and that was my 48th time. I was really tensed; maybe what I had done the previous day was wrong! The answer would be, “I don’t know”. “Whether this try would be my fortune?” She answered the call and said, “Please come to the boat station”. I rushed to the beautiful place with a puzzle; she answered it by those three unheard words, “I Love You”

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Moments of Madness

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Hmmm a topic that everyone loves to participate in and I am not an exception to sleep on that! Let me pen down my top five moments of madness that I experienced in my life and I hope you will like it too...

I: A mischievous act with Isha, my girl.

I still cherish that moment of madness as it decided my destiny, my Isha – a sweet girl. This happened exactly 15 years before and I was 8. It was the melodious rainy season when we kids used to play in the waters. On one such fine day when Isha and I were playing, the mad girl pushed me into the water and sat on me. I in turn pushed her down, took some tadpoles from the water and slide it inside her tops. She started crying badly and shouted like anything!

She looked cute and this was my first moment of madness.

II: Definitely not my mistake.

The second one was not my mistake but God's. I used to teach her cycling on every evening and after about a week of practice this incident happened.

Isha: “Hey idiot, hold the cycle tightly because I shouldn't fall at any cost.”

Me: “Sure Dumbo, trust me.”

But for the previous two days I didn't hold the cycle as I realized that she had learnt cycling. I followed the same technique that day but unfortunately she went down and dashed on a wall. I rushed to her and noticed that her knees were injured and it was bleeding badly. I shouted for help and a kind-hearted auto rickshaw man took us to hospital. She was given treatment and injection to recover soon.

She looked damn cute in the hospital and this explains my second moment of madness.

III: I just love Mathematics but I feel sorry for her.

This incident took place in our Tenth Standard Public Examination. It was our mathematics exam, usually I used to pick her up in my bicycle during exams but on that day, I forgot to pick up her. I reached the examination hall on time and wrote my exam well, confident enough to score a centum. When I came out of the Examination Hall, I realized that I didn't pick her up and searched for her in and out of the campus but in vain. I rushed to her home and saw a cute angel sobbing for missing two marks, that too because of the ten minute delay to reach the examination centre. She shouted at me for not picking her up and hugged me crying for missing two marks. I had no words to say but felt bad about myself.

She looked like an angel with the tears on her eyelid and this sums up my third moment of madness.

IV: The Sweet Proposal

On feb14th 2004, I went to her home after the school hours. She was looking cute on her red colour half sari, with matching bangles and stubs. I felt butterflies flying in my stomach on seeing her but somehow gained courage, and sealed her lips with mine. It lasted long enough for three tasteful minutes after which I moved away from her and uttered those three beautiful words and came back to my home. That day night I received a message from her.

"அன்பே உன்னால் என்னை உணர்ந்தேன்
உன் கண்களிலே காதலை உணர்ந்தேன் "

In English:
"Hey my love, because of you I learnt who I am;
Because of your eyes I learnt what Love is"

I replied to her as,

"Welcome to my life sweet idiot"

The incident that took place in her home was my fourth moment of madness.

V: Marriage.

Just before two months I tied the auspicious thread on her neck with our parent’s will after that we played several games, one of them being the ring game. The game is to search for the ring inside the bowl of flowers and the one who wins the maximum can wear that ring. But I never searched for the ring instead was playing with her, pinching her fingers and.... It was very interesting as I looked into her eyes and said I LOVE YOU several times, it took twenty minutes for us complete the game and the winner was Mrs Sid

She looked very cute and she blushed like never before which meant, "I LOVE YOU" and this pretty much was my fifth moment of madness.

Adding to this, today she smiles for deserving the birth right, yes she is conceived now.

Out of these five moments of madness, I reaped smile, peace, joy and eternal love, and last but not the least, "I can call myself a responsible father and a lovable husband".

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Creator - 77 Fiction

"Oops! What the hell this bloody EB do? Power Cut", and this is the third time in past half an hour. "Oh My God please save me from this darkness as in another ten minutes my cab will be here". I lighted the candle, turned back and to my surprise I saw a seven feet creature standing on my bed, I screamed like a banshee but my voice was muted as it was the creator of earth.

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Wish

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Wish, the moment I heard this topic the first thought that came to my mind was, "What would be my wish if God grants me one?" or the Famous thriller, "Monkey's Paw - Jacobs", may be "Tiger's Paw"? Come-on Saravana! Think out of the box, this write up should impress many hearts and get me votes. Although a difficult task but let me try my best, with all your wishes I am penning down, "Wish".

This is a usual story about a girl’s wish, which is known to this world unusually.

A journey from her engagement to marriage.

Day 1:

Rachana, a cute mischievous girl dressed up to her best, was eagerly waiting for the moment. Each second passed by increased a butterfly in her stomach as she was eager to talk to Ajeesh, her perfect match. She was thinking about the beauty of arranged marriages - discovering each other’s turn-on(s) in short span of time and trying to fit in the available space. The moment her name was whispered – she wished to figure out Ajeesh in the allotted space.

Ajeesh: Hi.. Rachana... You have got a very Sweet name, I think it means, “Creation”. Hmmm, can I ask you a question?(grinning)

She was mesmerized by the way he made her comfortable, she said, “Yes”.

Ajeesh took a deep breath and questioned, “Whom you think is a selfless creature in the world?”

Rachana: Mother

Ajeesh got the answer which he was looking for and suddenly out of nowhere, he looked directly into her eyes and asked, “Will you be my lovely lawfully wedded wife?” and she blushed like she had never blushed before which meant the most beautiful words “Yes sweet heart”. Her wish was granted as she figured out Ajeesh and his sweet character.

As they both were comfortable with each other, the engagement began with a happy note, went on with no luxurious deal but with hearts and love all around. The most precious rings were exchanged between them.

* * * * * *

Day 3:

Rachana’s mobile rang few times but she couldn’t pick up the call as she was taking a bath but somewhere in her heart she could sense that it was someone special calling her. She decided not to miss the call anymore so assigned a special ring tone, “Kalaba Kadhala”, her favourite ringtone which she hasn’t assigned to anyone else.

Ajeesh: Hi.. Creator.. Good Morning..

Rachana: Hi.... Good Day, I apologize for not picking your call as I was taking a bath.

Ajeesh: So you do bath, that’s appreciated but I heard you never.

Rachana: Hey.....

They both spoke as hours went unnoticed, neither the stomach ached for food nor the pre-paid connection for account balance, they loved it.

* * * * * *

Day 5:

Rachana took off to office and later went for shopping which will be sponsored by the bridegroom’s family. She always loves to shop but this was a different experience, a big occasion, and moreover she is shopping for a sari which will remain as the best of the collection. She wished that the colour of the sari should be Lavender indigo as she is crazy about it; even her living room bears the same colour. They were browsing different varieties, different colours and at last she came out as the clear winner.

Ajeesh: So even the sari is of your favourite colour. Hmmm

Rachana was puzzled as she never mentioned about these small things to him, and puzzled she asked, “But how you know about it?”

Ajeesh: Simple, when I was eagerly waiting for you, i saw an angel coming out of an indigo shell and you know what, that’s my favourite color too..

The day was like a beautiful leaf to her diary, and she cherished it with Ajeesh.

* * * * * *

Day 10:

Rachana opened her cute eye lids around four in the morning, although it was a Sunday she didn’t sleep, her thoughts were occupied with Ajeesh. After complete four busy business days she couldn’t sleep or rest her mind either, it was because she was suffering from love and she didn’t have time to speak to him which was supposed to be a crucial medicine. She wished to call him once to check whether he is free that day or not, so took her phone searched for the name, “Koibitou” (Sweet Heart - Japanese) and called him. She was supposed to hear the usual ring but she heard, “Kalaba Kadhala” and it continued for 60 seconds.

Ajeesh: Hi.. Good Morning, Heard you favourite song? It is specially assigned for you.

Rachana, speechless don’t how to react, she said, “Morninggggggg! I am surprised, by the way how you know that I love this song”

Ajeesh: Simple, when we were shopping on that day I heard a common ring tone for everyone but when I called you to check where you were; I realized the specialness in it.

Rachana: You touched me Koibitou.

Ajeesh: Hey what does it mean?

Rachana: Find it my genius, “You are a silent show stealer right?”

Ajeesh: Got it, Sweet Heart right? So you have saved my name as Koibitou, I have found another secret of you.

She was totally immersed in love with him.

* * * * * *

Day 11:

As usual she was getting ready to go to home, busy in applying her lip gloss, she missed to hear the beep sound of her phone. She had a great day in office as she received a client appreciation mail and more over from the next day she will be on leave, she reached her home took out her phone and was surprised to see, “11 message received”. She opened, got shocked as all the messages are from, “Koibitou”

1: Hi Creator... Good Morning..
2: Hi still bathing?
3: waiting for a lovely SMS
4: I wish you a lovely day creator
5: Time is two but am not feeling hungry, still waiting
6: Hey Creator...
7: Happy News, “I am madly in love with you”
8: Happy News, “I am getting hike..”
9: :-)
10:
11: Hi Mam, this is a kind request from your sincere lover, as am I suffering from heavy love, I wish to get a SMS every hour from you which will keep me energized and short ‘n’ sweet call every night will add to glitters. ALSO I will be more than happy if I receive a ---- at the EOC (End Of Call). Yours, Koibitou

After reading all those sweet SMS(s), she couldn’t help herself from tears. She was scolding NOKIA for making phones with common message tones. She didn’t had the courage to call Ajeesh, so she threw her phone and slept sobbing. Suddenly her phone started ringing with the tone, “Kalaba Kadhala”; she stood up in astonishment, searched for the phone and answered the call.

Rachana: Sobbing

Ajeesh: Hi.... Is something wrong with you? Hey... what happened dear? Please na, speak something, please.

Rachana: I love to KISS you, “Ummmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmaaaaaaaaaaaaaa”

Ajeesh: That’s very energetic. So what happened?

Rachana: Sorry koibitou, I don’t have a habit of reading messages or replying to them, I had a very good day in office but made your day a bad one, really sorry.

Ajeesh: Hey... you made me discover how much I love you, and happy for getting such an opportunity.

Rachana: Bad Boyy..........

Ajeesh: Hmmmm Thanks for your compliment, three more days Sweety, 72 hours, 4320 minutes.

Rachana: Wait wait, I am doing the same right....

It was a never ending talk as they completely immersed themselves in love and they wished a happy life.

* * * * * *

Past two days was a dream come true for them as they lived virtually in their phones, even a smile was sent as a message, they shared their likes, dislikes, crush and everything.

Day 14:

Just 24 hours left to tie the knot, relatives were busy in performing the rituals and so the bride and bridegroom. If it is a marriage then the important part is friends and they played a major role in setting everything right. Reception happened in a grand way including stage shows and the last night before the first night went like seconds.

Big Day:

Rachana was the happiest girl as everything was set right to tie the knot and the happiest moment which she wished came true as Ajeesh tied the knot. Their wishes were fulfilled and with thousands of people blessing they were declared as Newly Wedded Couples.

What does a girl wish in her married life? Love, care & moreover she should be herself whenever she is with him and Rachana was not an exception in this case. Her wish was granted by God and she was a Happy Girl for rest of her life.

The best wish you can ever make is how you want to live your life and that’s what this WISH too.

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Sense Of Love

The day started with little drizzles, as Ashik started to his school wearing a black hat, over coat and his usual school dress. He started cycling slowly as if he was riding a slow cycling race. He was in low spirits that day and felt very sleepy due to the weather. When he was about to reach his school, he saw Akhil, his friend shouting "Hey dude! It's a Holiday! Enjoy your day".

Ashik replied, "Shit, I don’t have energy to enjoy, idiot. Thanks anyway and bye."

He went to the park to which he usually goes with Hassini, his love. He knew that Hassini would come there, and so, he waited. Ten minutes later, Hassini came and closed Ashik eyes with her hands, "Who is this?"; "Mera Love” said Ashik and pulled her to the front and made her to sit.

As usual, they both started to talk, talk and talk, and the whole world went off unnoticed. An hour or so would have gone by when a few drizzles started dancing down on them, which could also not stop their talk. After ten minutes of drizzling, rain started to pour heavier. They both were left with no other option other than to run to a nearby tree. It was very big and they both found shelter under it. They were totally drenched in the rain because of which Hassini started to shiver, Ashik gave his overcoat to her but that also didn’t help her.

Ashik had no clue how to stop her shivering, so he just hugged her gently. She started to calm down but he hugged her tightly with lots of love, and in turn, Hassini. Ashik slowly lifted her face, smiled and kissed on her forehead at first, then on the left & right cheeks, followed by chin and the most attractive neck. He held her hand tightly and at last, he reached the destiny, and kissed her with ease for a few minutes.

Rain too stopped and they both started walking, hands locked, no words uttered. They both sensed the true love behind the act and the world went unnoticed.

Sense Of Love

The day started with little drizzles, as Ashik started to his school wearing a black hat, over coat and his usual school dress. He started cycling slowly as if he was riding in a slow cycling race; he was in low spirits that day and felt very sleepy due to the climate. When he was about to reach his school, he saw Akhil, his friend shouting "Hey dude! They declared Holiday! Enjoy your day". Ashik replied, "Shit, I don’t have energy to enjoy you idiot, thanks anyway and bye" and went to the park to which he usually goes with Hassini, his love.

He knew that Hassini would come there, and so, he waited. Ten minutes later, Hassini came and closed Ashik eyes with her hands, "Who is this?"; "Mera Love” said Ashik and pulled her to the front and made her to sit.

As usual, they both started to talk, talk and talk, and the whole world went off unnoticed. An hour or so would have gone by when a few drizzles started dancing down on them, which could also not stop their talk. After ten minutes of drizzling, rain started to pour heavier. They both were left with no other option other than to run to a nearby tree. It was very big and they both found shelter under it. They were totally drenched in the rain because of which Hassini started to shiver, Ashik gave his overcoat to her but that also didn’t help her.

Ashik had no clue how to stop her shivering, so he just hugged her gently. Her shivering started to come down but he hugged her tightly with lots of love, in turn, Hassini. Ashik slowly lifted her face, smiled and kissed on her forehead at first, then left & right cheeks, then chin & then neck. He held her hand tightly & at last, he reached the destiny, kissed her with ease for a few minutes.

Rain too stopped and they both started walking, hands locked, no words uttered. They both sensed the truth of love behind it and the world went unnoticed.