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| image courtesy : eilidh's sketches |
the pain of deserted heart
though eager to shed
tears - her life, she is
harboring a grudge, waiting
for her turn, payback.
Published for April Heights, Prompts: Eager, Deserted and Harbor. I just realized I'm late but it is better to be late than never. I'm trying to write under different genre's other than romance and I hope it has come out well. Do leave your footprints!
Now that's truly a Masterpiece...Awesome Haiku SIS... :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Cynosure!
DeleteI enjoyed your haiku very much and this is a beautiful picture ;-)
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Ellecee!
DeleteNice weaving of prompts...the deserted heart will not heal if she is harbouring a grudge...
ReplyDeleteGreat to see you here SIS ~
Thank you Grace!
DeleteI think there is probably no greater pain than that of a deserted heart--which, as you point out, sometimes leads to the desire for revenge. What complicated beings we are!
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Yes MMT!
DeleteGood to see you again SiS in this Haiku heights April Challenge. It feels good to see other poets from the Few Miles Haiku Challenge again in this challenge.
ReplyDeleteYou wrote a wonderful set of haiku with all the prompts of the first three days .... wow .... you have catch up.
Namaste
Thanks a lot :) :)
DeleteYou did well using all 3 prompts!
ReplyDeleteThank you :)
Deletepain,indeed. Great one. :)
ReplyDeleteIt is!
DeleteThis is beautiful weaving of all the prompts.. SiS .. well done..
ReplyDeleteThank you RS!
DeleteThis is beautiful weaving of all the prompts.. SiS .. well done..
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DeleteGreat, no wonder for a creative person like you.
ReplyDelete:) :) :)
DeleteWow!...You took those 3 prompts and written haiku...That's gr8...I feel it's not that easy...We need to be creative to do that!
ReplyDeleteI loved both the haiku....the first reveals her pain and second vengeance!
Yes.. It is! Thanks Valli!!
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ReplyDelete:)
DeleteA beautiful and very true haiku!
ReplyDeleteBest, M.
Thank you M!
DeleteOutstanding haiku!
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Mama Zen!
DeleteGood one!
ReplyDeleteThank you :)
DeleteWonderfully woven imagery --- grudges though take a toll on the spirit and the heart! :)
ReplyDeleteThis is my Day 3 ~~ Harbor.
Thank you becca!
DeleteAs always...Awesome! :)
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot little one!
Deletethrilling!!and empowering!!!
ReplyDeletei can read your message in the girl's eyes!! :D
superb work SiS...worth an applause!
:) :) Thanks a lot Ash :) :)
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