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image courtesy : eilidh's sketches
words can never say
the pain of deserted heart
though eager to shed

tears - her life, she is
harboring a grudge, waiting
for her turn, payback.

Published for April Heights, Prompts: Eager, Deserted and Harbor. I just realized I'm late but it is better to be late than never. I'm trying to write under different genre's other than romance and I hope it has come out well. Do leave your footprints!
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Saravanakumar Murugan
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  1. CYNOSUREApril 3, 2012 at 1:54 AM

    Now that's truly a Masterpiece...Awesome Haiku SIS... :)

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  2. ElleceeApril 3, 2012 at 2:21 AM

    I enjoyed your haiku very much and this is a beautiful picture ;-)

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  3. GraceApril 3, 2012 at 3:14 AM

    Nice weaving of prompts...the deserted heart will not heal if she is harbouring a grudge...

    Great to see you here SIS ~

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  4. Magical Mystical TeacherApril 3, 2012 at 4:02 AM

    I think there is probably no greater pain than that of a deserted heart--which, as you point out, sometimes leads to the desire for revenge. What complicated beings we are!

    Deserted Branches

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  5. ChevrefeuilleApril 3, 2012 at 4:47 AM

    Good to see you again SiS in this Haiku heights April Challenge. It feels good to see other poets from the Few Miles Haiku Challenge again in this challenge.
    You wrote a wonderful set of haiku with all the prompts of the first three days .... wow .... you have catch up.

    Namaste

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  6. KarenApril 3, 2012 at 7:08 AM

    You did well using all 3 prompts!

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  7. AnonymousApril 3, 2012 at 9:03 AM

    pain,indeed. Great one. :)

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  8. Ramesh SoodApril 3, 2012 at 9:56 AM

    This is beautiful weaving of all the prompts.. SiS .. well done..

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  9. Ramesh SoodApril 3, 2012 at 9:56 AM

    This is beautiful weaving of all the prompts.. SiS .. well done..

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  10. Mohini PuranikApril 3, 2012 at 10:00 AM

    Great, no wonder for a creative person like you.

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  11. Sri ValliApril 3, 2012 at 2:09 PM

    Wow!...You took those 3 prompts and written haiku...That's gr8...I feel it's not that easy...We need to be creative to do that!
    I loved both the haiku....the first reveals her pain and second vengeance!

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  12. Sri ValliApril 3, 2012 at 2:10 PM

    Harbour

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  13. Mariya KolevaApril 3, 2012 at 4:51 PM

    A beautiful and very true haiku!
    Best, M.

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  14. Maude LynnApril 3, 2012 at 8:48 PM

    Outstanding haiku!

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  15. Cloud NineApril 3, 2012 at 11:39 PM

    Good one!

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  16. AnonymousApril 4, 2012 at 11:09 AM

    Wonderfully woven imagery --- grudges though take a toll on the spirit and the heart! :)

    This is my Day 3 ~~ Harbor.

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  17. SimranApril 5, 2012 at 12:27 PM

    As always...Awesome! :)

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  18. AishwaryaApril 6, 2012 at 2:54 AM

    thrilling!!and empowering!!!
    i can read your message in the girl's eyes!! :D

    superb work SiS...worth an applause!

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