I hate to leave this place blank without my poems… but… I l… hmmm, a special thanks to JP for this week prompt, ‘Inspired by a Song’, that prompted me to pen this verse...
I chose, “Somebody’s me...” of Enrique..., I tried my best to alter the lyrics without disturbing the tune, and I do hope it came out well... Enjoy “Someone is Special’s version of Somebody’s Me”...
'U', do you remember me?
Like, I remember you...
Do you remember the time?
I looked into your eyes...
And you captured my heart ~ sweet heart ~ I...
Today, I walk the streets alone,
I hate to endure on my own,
My heart so empty,
I really feel I'm through hell,
My world so lonely ~ without you here.
Somebody wants you badly,
Somebody loves you madly.
Somebody dreams about you every tear-filled second...
Somebody can't live without your warmth and hug,
Somebody hopes that someday you will be me...
...Somebody’s me
That someone special is for me...
...yeah
That someone special is for me...
...yeah
You, how did you leave me?
But... Our love will not fade...
Now will it die?
And I pray to God, that we will meet someday,
Until then I keep my fingers cross...
Today, I live in your memory,
I love to live in the world,
When we lived together
Just you and I
in those romantic nights...
Somebody wants you badly,
Somebody loves you madly.
Somebody dreams about you every tear-filled second...
Somebody can't live without your warmth and hug,
Somebody hopes that someday you will be me...
...Somebody’s me
That someone special is for me...
...Oh yeah
That someone special is for me...
...Oh yeah
Feeling your lips so moist and sweet on mine..
in the night..
You, when you remember me?
and the last time we made love...
oh, please be mine...
Somebody wants you badly,
Somebody loves you madly.
Somebody dreams about you every tear-filled second...
Somebody can't live without your warmth and hug,
Somebody hopes that someday you will be me...
...Somebody’s me
That someone special is for me...
oh...yeah
That someone special is for me...
oh...yeah
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"முகமறியா நண்பர்களின் கருத்துக்களே எனக்கு படிகற்கள்"
i love this song and i love your poem:)
ReplyDeleteexpressive is the word:)
Beautiful!
SiS -- amazing ... how do you accomplish so many prompts with such seamless flow? Nicely done!!
ReplyDeleteFantastic write! your style just enfolded into the song!
ReplyDeletethis is a lovely play off the song...and i enjoy the inclusion of you in there SIS
ReplyDeletePerfect song for a perfect poem.
ReplyDeleteLove Enrique's music!
Nicely done!
we all need someone special, and we hope, we all are.
ReplyDeleteROG, ABC Wednesday team
Such a sad beautiful song. Such longing in your words
ReplyDeleteWow SiS...I love the song...and I loved your poem even more...
ReplyDeleteU did well!
ReplyDeleteeye for an eye
Excellent shot! Your picture is amazing!
ReplyDeleteYour words made me feel the hurt of losing someone.
ReplyDeleteIt seems to me YOU are a special person.
ReplyDeleteawesome work and quite the romantic. I like your heart :)
ReplyDeleteenjoy the potluck!
http://lynnaima.wordpress.com/2011/05/26/these-fine-lines/
Superb work SiS! Your version is just wonderful...
ReplyDeleteSuch a very nice poem!
ReplyDelete"U" are invited to see the "U" at my page. Have a great evening.
Wow you really played off the song quite well
ReplyDeleteI had to stop and tell
Enjoyed the interpretation you gave
Making it a one shot fave
That was indeed beautiful, longing for love, very expressive.
ReplyDeletethis was suppper sweet !! ttally awww post !! nice log look too :)
ReplyDeleteSiS--have you thought about becoming a songwriter?? Honestly!
ReplyDelete"What a post Romantic Verser" I am impressed with your song. I wish you should become a film maker. Btw, how are you managing to write such different genre. Write on romantic verser..
ReplyDeleteHats off, love, bala
I agree with Victoria. Romantic Verser at his best.
ReplyDeletelove, bala.
Excellent job, SIS! A good interpretation of the song you chose--well done.
ReplyDeleteGayle xoxo
Beautiful song! Love is such an inspiration and you express it so well!
ReplyDeleteI love your poem the feeling of want and need and hoping for that someone longing that they'd know they'll be loved as they should, amazing inspiration that came from this poem.
ReplyDeletetruly enjoyed the piece.
ReplyDeleteit is sad, but very stunning expressed lose.
So beautiful :)
ReplyDeleteFeelings are so true and with rhythm..This is the first time I've read a post like this ..
Truly Amazing!:)
Beautiful, Sis!!! the emotions in your words went right into my heart!
ReplyDeletedani *hugs*
romantic and lovely!
ReplyDeleteThis is amazing!!!
ReplyDeleteWell done.. xox
@ tarunima
ReplyDeletei love this song and i love your poem:)
expressive is the word:) Beautiful!
tarunima, you made my day.... Thank you so much..
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@ beccagivens
ReplyDeleteSiS -- amazing ... how do you accomplish so many prompts with such
seamless flow? Nicely done!!
Thank you becca.. I would say "Passion".. Hmm.. Happy Man..
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@ abthomas
ReplyDeleteFantastic write! your style just enfolded into the song!
Thank you so much AB.. Happy..
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@ Brian Miller
ReplyDeleteThank you thank you thank you so much Brian.. SmileS..
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@ Andy
ReplyDeletePerfect song for a perfect poem. Love Enrique's music!
Thank you Andy.. Glad you stopped by here..
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@ Roger Owen Green
ReplyDeletewe all need someone special, and we hope, we all are.
true Roger.. I love your sweet words..
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@ mindlovemisery
ReplyDeletethank you so much.. Happy Man..
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@ Tweety
ReplyDeleteWow SiS...I love the song...and I loved your poem even more...
Awww, what more do I need.. Happy Man..
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@ gautami tripathy
ReplyDeleteThank you so much gautami.. I just read your post and it was awesome..
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@ LivingSoAbundantly
ReplyDeleteThank you thank you thank you..
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@ teric
ReplyDeleteYour words made me feel the hurt of losing someone.
Glad to read your words.. Thank you so much..
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@ Wanda
ReplyDeleteIt seems to me YOU are a special person.
Thank you so much for your sweet words. Happy Man..
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@ lynnaima
ReplyDeleteawesome work and quite the romantic. I like your heart :)
Thank you so much lynnaima.. Pleasure to read your comment.
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@ Cloud Nine
ReplyDeleteSuperb work SiS! Your version is just wonderful...
Aww.. thank you so much Cloud Nine.. Happy Man..
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@ chubskulit
ReplyDeleteThank you so much for your invite and words..
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@ Pat Hatt
ReplyDeleteWow you really played off the song quite well
I had to stop and tell Enjoyed the interpretation you gave
aww.. thank you so much Pat.. Indeed Pleasure to read your comments..
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@ alivealways
ReplyDeleteglad you love the longing.. Thank you so much..
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@ ladynimue
ReplyDeletethis was suppper sweet !! ttally awww post !! nice blog look too :)
nimue, so sweet of you.. thank you so much..
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@ Victoria
ReplyDeleteSiS--have you thought about becoming a songwriter?? Honestly!
Victoria, first of all thank you so much for appreciating my work.. Aww. am
in sky.. SiS, come down.. hm... and I have written some songs in my mother
tongue for my friends..
and thanks for sending me the mail.. I will go through it and will try
to make it in the big crowd.. Thanks for the inspiring words..
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@ bala
ReplyDelete"What a post Romantic Verser" I am impressed with your song. I wish you
should become a film maker. Btw, how are you managing to write such
different genre. Write on romantic verser..
Thank you so much Sir.. Pleasure and happy to read your comment..
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@ bala
ReplyDeleteI agree with Victoria. Romantic Verser at his best.
Thank you. thank you so much...
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@ bodhirose
ReplyDeleteExcellent job, SIS! A good interpretation of the song you chose--well done.
Thank you so much Gayle.. Happy Man..
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@ Ina
ReplyDeleteBeautiful song! Love is such an inspiration and you express it so well!
Thank you so much Ina.. Happy Man..
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@ Chim's World of Literature
ReplyDeleteI love your poem the feeling of want and need and hoping for that someone longing that they'd know they'll be loved as they should, amazing inspiration that came from this poem.
aww.. flying to cloud 9.. Feeling Aww.. Chim.. Thank you so so much..
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@ Jingle
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Ji.. and it is lose..
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@ Simran
ReplyDeleteSo beautiful :) Feelings are so true and with rhythm..This is the first time I've read a post like this .. Truly Amazing!:)
awwwwwww................. flying Simran................ Wordless SiS..
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@ haikulovesongs
ReplyDeleteBeautiful, Sis!!! the emotions in your words went right into my heart!
dani *hugs*
Thanks for the hug dani.. HAppy man..
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@ Lolamouse
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Lolamouse.. Happy Man..
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@ Olivia..
ReplyDeleteThank you so much dear.. Pleasure to read your encouraging words..
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Lovely...the way you've worked on the prompt is beautiful!
ReplyDeleteThough it was a sad one, it was nice !
Take Care
@ Fatima
ReplyDeleteLovely...the way you've worked on the prompt is beautiful! Though it was a sad one, it was nice ! Take
Care
Fatima, welcome back... Thank you so much for your beautiful comment.. Happy Man..
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