her hypnotic eyes
puts me into trance state, is
this love at first sight...
Six Word Saturday: I see life in her eyes..
Published as a part of
Haiku Heights, Prompt 45: Trance
recuerda mi corazon - Haiku My Heart
Six Word Saturday
Image Credits: Google
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"முகமறியா நண்பர்களின் கருத்துக்களே எனக்கு படிகற்கள்"
I wrote my haiku a few days ago, inspired by a customer that comes in to the bank I work, haven't posted it yet although it begins almost as yours. Very dreamy!
ReplyDeleteIs really happened with you something like this or just a imagination? ...Short but sweet :)
ReplyDeleteHoping to see you at my blog :)
Take care
Nice 6 word Saturday!
ReplyDeleteSiS,
ReplyDeleteI marvel at your talent !!
Nicely done !
JL&B
Lovely :)
ReplyDeleteI like that feel.
very sweet.
free flowing words...seems as if they are straight from your heart..
ReplyDeletelovely lines!
I just tried for the first time..
wish to listen from you..
Hope u'll take time to visit..
http://myblogmyviews-gowthami.blogspot.com/2011/05/my-first-attempt.html
Sweet as usual:) Lovely haiku SiS:)
ReplyDeletebeautiful,
ReplyDeleteit could be love at first glance.
wishing you good luck.
Beautiful. I'm a big fan of haikus. This one is especially lovely.
ReplyDeleteThanks for playing 6WS!
Lovd the haiku. It's amazing all th different POVs from one prompt and uch few word.
ReplyDeleteI like the way this ends with a question. Lovely haiku.
ReplyDeleteSiS....
ReplyDeleteThis is what ppl call "short and sweet"
The way you swing your pen to paint certain words of poetic romance is awe-inspiring..
ReplyDeleteLoved the six word saturday..how do you end up with such vibrant themes??
Brilliant!
At the heartbeat lies the depth of the oceans and a desire to do the unthinkable....nice lines:)
ReplyDeleteThe word imagery and photo match well together, SiS! Very well done!!
ReplyDeleteabsolutely beautiful as usual
ReplyDeleteShort and sweet.
ReplyDeleteNicely done SiS.
Congratulations on being featured in Review Tuesdays over at Jingle Poetry!
It must be love SiS! If it doesn't fade...the feelings I mean.. :)
ReplyDeleteAmity
Lovely romantic haiku =)
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ReplyDeleteBeautiful romantic haiku, love it :)
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@ Christine
ReplyDeleteI wrote my haiku a few days ago, inspired by a customer that comes in to
the bank I work, haven't posted it yet although it begins almost as yours.
Very dreamy!
Awww thank you so much Christine.. Pleasure is mine.. and glad it was
dreamy..
Someone is Special
@ Simran
ReplyDeleteSsshhhhh............ Secret.. Thanks for your constant support and
encouragement.. I will stop by our blog as soon as possible....
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@ Susan in SC
ReplyDeleteGlad to know that.. Thank you so much...
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@ JL Dodge
ReplyDeleteSiS, I marvel at your talent !!
Dodge.. You made my day.. Thank you so much.. Happy Man..
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@ Isha Ethera Tirawa
ReplyDeleteGlad you like the feel.. and loved it.. Thanks much..
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@ Gowthami
ReplyDeleteof course they are.. Thank you so much for your sweet words..
and I will surely visit your post...
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@ Cloud Nine
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Cloud Nine.. So sweet of you..
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@ Jingle
ReplyDeletebeautiful, it could be love at first glance.
Thank you so much Ji for your blessings..
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@ Call Me Cate
ReplyDeleteBeautiful. I'm a big fan of haikus. This one is especially lovely.
Aww, thank you Cate.. So sweet of you..
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@ Henry Clemmons
ReplyDeletethank you so much for your encouraging words..
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@ Judith C Evans
ReplyDeleteAww..Thank you so much..
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@ Maniac
ReplyDeleteSiS.... This is what ppl call "short and sweet"
Aww.. thank you Maniac.. of course "Short and Sweet" hmm..
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@ Fiducia
ReplyDeleteThe way you swing your pen to paint certain words of poetic romance is
awe-inspiring.. Loved the six word saturday..how do you end up with such
vibrant themes?? Brilliant!
I don't have words.. Wordless... SiS.. Thanks a Zillion..
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@ Kalyan said...
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Kalyan.. Indeed pleasure to read your comment..
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@ beccagivens
ReplyDeleteThank you so much becca.. so sweet of you..
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@ meethimirchi
ReplyDeleteaww.. thank you..
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@ Andy
ReplyDeleteCongratulations on being featured in Review Tuesdays over at Jingle
Poetry!
Thank you so much Andy.. Happy Man..
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@ Amity
ReplyDeleteof course it never.. Thank you so much Amity.. It's been a long time since
you left your footprints here..
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@ mindlovemisery
ReplyDeleteAww.. Thank you..
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@ Fiducia
ReplyDeleteSure I will do that..
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@ Short Poems
ReplyDeleteAww.. thank you so much.. Pleasure to read your comment..
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