The living God, she
cares for you more than anyone
does, she is mother
Motherhood is priced
Of God, no man can afford
Or to lessen it
The pleasant music
ever composed is, the sweet
lullaby of mom
Cutest poem she is,
Never able to end, though
I write billion words
Neither painter’s brush
Nor the poet’s mighty pen can
describe a mother
Before the God's throne
One lamp is mother, burn
through eternity
Theme: Mother
Are you ready for The Haiku Challenge? The details are HERE, and the challenge enters Day 3 with this Haiku. Since I am in India, the challenge begins at 12AM IST and goes on until GMT-08 (i.e., the next day 01:30 AM IST), so all the time zones can participate in this challenge. Write a Haiku with theme as "Mother" and share it in the comment section of this post or in the Linky.
Happy Haiku Challenge to you all!
Haiku on!
PS: If you are a newbie, learn how to write a Haiku here. Leave your links also in the comment section with the help of this text.
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Brilliant SiS loved it :)
ReplyDeletequite lovely SiS I enjoyed it. I am afraid because of our time difference I am a day behind you so my #2 is entered for your #3. Thanks for hosting this!
ReplyDeletean adorable way of praising mother's love, which is celestial if it is true.
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I love the understanding of God as Mother. Beautiful haikus, SiS.
ReplyDeleteWoww!!!! Beautiful Touching Lines. Fabulous Poem Praising Mom :)
ReplyDeleteThey are fantastic! Great idea. If I wasn't already committed up to my eyeballs I'd have ago too. :O)
ReplyDeletebeautiful SiS, absolutely beautiful! :)
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed this one as well as learned a lot. I was under the impression that the 3 lines 5,7,5 were it and that I could not add to it. Thank you very much SIS, loved it :)
ReplyDeletebeautiful ...
ReplyDeleteAs others have said, brilliant.
ReplyDeletecan anything on Mother NOT be awesome ??
ReplyDeleteI too see God in Mother. This is beautiful. Lifted my heart.
ReplyDeletewhat a beautiful poem peened by u SIS! This prompt is so touching yet no words can ever suffice what our beloved mothers mean to us... :)
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@ Tweety
ReplyDeleteTweety, thanks much and happy to have you in the challenge..
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@ Amanda Moore
ReplyDeleteThanks Amanda, it is my pleasure to know that.. No issues, all the time zones can participate..
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@ trisha
ReplyDeleteof course it is, trisha and no words can suffice for a Mom..
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@ Victoria
ReplyDeleteThanks and it is my pleasure to have you here.. and yes Mother is the living God..
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@ Creativity!!
ReplyDeleteThanks Creativity, missed you in the spot and happy to have you here.. Why don't you try your hand at Haiku?
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@ Madeleine
ReplyDeleteOops! Missed you, try to link in on few days..
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@ Dishilicious
ReplyDeleteThanks much and happy happy happy to know that.. Pleasure is mine..
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@ lynnaima
ReplyDeleteLynnaima, Haiku structure is 5-7-5, but you can write as many Haikus as possible, if you wish.. thanks..
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@ meethimirchi
ReplyDeleteThanks much and of course it is..
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@ cloakedmonk
ReplyDeleteThanks, Pleasure to read your அம்மா..
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@ ladynimue
ReplyDeleteOf course it is always AWESOME...
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@ bodhirose
ReplyDeleteGlad to know that and happy to have you here..
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@ subtlescribbler
ReplyDeleteyou are billion percent right.. and thanks, happy man.. Pleasure to have you in the challenge..
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You have paid rich tributes to your lovely mother SIS!! You will remain blessed for this surely!!
ReplyDelete@ Nanka
ReplyDeleteThanks Nanka, ofcourse I love my mom more than anyone else in this world.. She is my God..
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i love each tribute you have written and feel the love and devotion you bestow so affectionately upon you mother.
ReplyDeletelove you haiku challenge too!!!
@ rebecca
ReplyDeleteGlad you loved it.. Happy to have you here.. If possible join the Haiku Challlenge..
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