It's time to say thanks to Jingle and the fellow "Thursday Poets Rally", Poets for nominating me for this wonderful award, "The Perfect Poet Award". Thank you so much poets for the sweet welcome for my poem, "Sweetened Waters". I love to nominate, Olivia for her sweet work... Here comes my Sweet Dish.
Tastes good, perhaps, an easy success
But, one that finds you not so soon,
After hard lessons of corrections and try
That instills a passion to prove a thing,
With a brave heart, enduring pains,
And the best wishes of dear and near;
One that is earnt this way,
With his choicest blessings!
That is True Success!
It does vanish in time, but leaves its trails;
Adds more meaning to the journey
Than boast of the momentary destination.
Invites real joy and content like no other
And lifts your life to another level!
Wish you such a delicious success
Believe me; it tastes sweeter than the old!
Published as a part of
Thursday Poets Rally, Week 28
I thank and Owe Jingle for the mentioning my blog in her Interview for Poets United, Thanks you so much Jingle. Do read the interview here
I thank and Owe Jingle for the mentioning my blog in her Interview for Poets United, Thanks you so much Jingle. Do read the interview here
PS: The poem - "Sweetened Waters", Humor - USB, Short Stories - True Love has been nominated for "The Celebrate Blogger of August Awards". You can see the nomination here, Do vote for me, my fellow bloggers, who had been nominated, if you are a blogger...
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"முகமறியா நண்பர்களின் கருத்துக்களே எனக்கு படிகற்கள்"
Perfect post....
ReplyDeleteIgnore my comment about the acceptance..
wonderful job!
:)
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@ Jingle
ReplyDeleteThank you so much for your sweet words..
--Someone Is Special--
I will mark you down as accepted...
ReplyDeleteI appreciate your tolerance,
Many things going on at the same time...I keep forgetting...
U R Super Kind...
Your poetry is grand.
Thank you so much Jingle..
ReplyDelete--Someone Is Special--
I am sure it does taste sweeter than the old, these are great words of encouragement. Good luck!
ReplyDeleteoh so lovely, SiS :) a good acceptance poem :D and well penned down too..
ReplyDeleteoh forgot..
ReplyDeletemy rally post is Here :)
Delicious Journey :P
ReplyDeleteThank for sharing
Happy Rally^^~
@ Bloggin'withAmanda
ReplyDeleteThank you so so much for those beautiful encouraging words and also for the wishes..
--Someone Is Special--
@ LEO
ReplyDeleteThank you so so much LEO, for your encouraging words.. Sure will visit you...
--Someone Is Special--
@ riikainfinityy.com
ReplyDeleteThank you so so much for your beautiful encouraging words..wish you the same...
--Someone Is Special--
Beautiful poem, I love the positivity. Very encouraging. Great work!
ReplyDeleteEncouraging and uplifting! thanks for sharing!
ReplyDeleteheyyyyy...lovely poem there :D
ReplyDeleteLike your page layout, your style of writing, your positive attitude and especially this poem, because it might as well be a life lesson to my children! Well done!
ReplyDeleteRachana.
Success, something we all aim for, but the achievement of it is rare; rare and special, as you have described in your poem.
ReplyDeletehope that you have some fun today.
ReplyDeleteHappy Thursday!
I really do like this thought. It seems like the "getting lost in the love of the journey."
ReplyDeleteYou look up years later and find you've traversed worlds..unexpectedly.
Very nice
@ deadpoet88
ReplyDeleteThanks for the sweet encouraging words from you..
Happy Rally..
--Someone Is Special--
@ Dennis
ReplyDeleteWelcome back!
Thanks for the sweet and wonderful encouraging words from you..
Happy Rally..
--Someone Is Special--
@ megzone
ReplyDeleteWelcome back, after a long time!
Thanks for the sweet words..
Happy Rally..
--Someone Is Special--
@ aconnectiontomyheart
ReplyDeleteWelcome to Few Miles!
You made my day with such sweet awesome words. Thank you so much.. Do keep coming to enjoy Few Miles!
Happy Rally, Rachana..
--Someone Is Special--
@ aconnectiontomyheart
ReplyDeleteWelcome back!!
Thanks for your sweet encouraging words!!!1
Happy Rally..
--Someone Is Special--
@ Jingle
ReplyDeleteThank you soooooo much Jingle.........
Happy Rally..
--Someone Is Special--
@ woih
ReplyDeleteWelcome to Few Miles!
Thank you so much for those sweet encouraging words! !
Do keep coming...
Happy Rally..
--Someone Is Special--
This is a lovely poem; especially love the affirmative message in the last two lines. They are sweet indeed!
ReplyDelete@ Christine
ReplyDeleteLoved your words.. Thank you so much...
--Someone Is Special--
What lovely words of encouragement! In a great poem, too!
ReplyDeletevery nice poem, much like the journey it describes it's a journey to read lol =] keep it up
ReplyDeleteCongratulations on your success!
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Indeed a positive and enjoyable read, thank you
ReplyDeleteAwesome poem.
ReplyDeleteI love the flow and the way you have with words.
Thanks for sharing,
Peace,
@ morganna
ReplyDeleteWelcome to Few Miles!
Thank you so much for your encouraging words..
--Someone Is Special--
@ luisydomonique
ReplyDeleteWelcome to Few Miles!
Thank you so much for your beautiful encouraging words..
--Someone Is Special--
@ mairmusic
ReplyDeleteWelcome to Few Miles!
Thank you so much..
--Someone Is Special--
@ abthomas
ReplyDeleteWelcome to Few Miles!
Thank you so much for your encouraging words..
--Someone Is Special--
@ notjeffery1
ReplyDeleteWelcome to Few Miles!
I am very happy to know that.. Thanks for your sweet words and blessings..
--Someone Is Special--
this was fun! :-) my favorite line: "it does vanish in time, but leaves its trails" indeed!
ReplyDeleteNice uplifting write. Bisous, Love and Light, Sender
ReplyDelete@ pdotberry
ReplyDeleteWelcome to Few Miles!
Thank you so much...
--Someone Is Special--
@ senderupwords
ReplyDeleteWelcome to Few Miles!
Thank you so much for those beautiful encouraging words..
--Someone Is Special--
this poem made me smile--it just has such a positive vibe :)
ReplyDeletethis poem is very well written. Enjoyed the read.
ReplyDeletehii
ReplyDeleteit is really nice :)
keep writing!
@ arspoetica
ReplyDeleteThank you so much...
Happy Rally...
--Someone Is Special--
@ mstevensson
ReplyDeleteWelcome to Few Miles!
Thank you so much...
Happy Rally...
--Someone Is Special--
@ AS
ReplyDeleteWelcome to Few Miles!
Thank you so much...
Happy Rally...
--Someone Is Special--
Wish you such a delicious success
ReplyDeleteBelieve me; it tastes sweeter than the old
brilliant... loved every word :)
I would readily agree that "Delicious Success" comes in after you have tasted the bitter experiences and loads of hard- work.. It comes with all the garnishing of Luck and Favor..
ReplyDeleteAll the very Best.. Happy Rally
Success is sweeter because its hard earned. The victory itself is momentary, but we are often left changed and makes the journey worth it.
ReplyDelete@ Anky0112
ReplyDeleteWelcome to Few Miles!
Thank you so so much...
--Someone Is Special--
@ oliviasmindlymatters
ReplyDeleteWelcome to Few Miles!
Thank you so so much for those sweet and encouraging words...
--Someone Is Special--
@ 83october
ReplyDeleteWelcome to Few Miles!
Thank you so so much for those sweet encouraging words...
--Someone Is Special--
So true. Real success takes time and overcoming obstacles. Well done!
ReplyDelete@ frayedges
ReplyDeleteWelcome to Few Miles!
Thank you so much...
--Someone Is Special--
Congrats. Success comes from within and with perserverance, doesn't it. Enjoy your weekend.
ReplyDeleteVictoria
Lovely uplifting poem....well done. heartspell
ReplyDelete@ Victoria
ReplyDeleteWelcome to Few Miles!
Thank you so much for your kind encouraging words..
--Someone Is Special--
@ heartspell
ReplyDeleteWelcome to Few Miles!
Thank you so much..
--Someone Is Special--
Greatly written. Keep it up!
ReplyDelete@ williewizzy
ReplyDeleteWelcome to Few Miles!
Thank you so much for those encouraging words..
--Someone Is Special--
great poem....and encouraging....'it tastes sweeter than the old!' great line. take care
ReplyDeleteloved it. i totally connected. :)
ReplyDelete@ 700miles
ReplyDeleteWelcome To Few Miles!
Thank you so much for those beautiful encouraging words..
--Someone Is Special--
@ D
ReplyDeleteWelcome To Few Miles!
Thank you so much for those sweet encouraging words..
--Someone Is Special--
How do you come up with such topics.. Makes me wonder. your words flow with such ease :)
ReplyDelete@ Zainab
ReplyDeleteYou made my day with such beautiful comments. Thank you so much..
The answer is the inspiration that I get from my fellow bloggers like you make me to pen down more like this..
--Someone Is Special--
Congrats on the award!
ReplyDeleteGood flow, well-writ, and quite uplifting! Good stuff.
@ Chris
ReplyDeleteWelcome to Few Miles!
Thank you so much for those sweet encouraging words and also for your wishes and congrats..
Happy Rally..
--Someone Is Special--
This made me hungry! Maybe its the undying college hunger i keep getting :/
ReplyDeletehaha nice job!
http://creativemotive.wordpress.com/2010/08/16/zephyr/
Enjoyed reading this poem - success is great thing after it has been achieved through a lot of perserverance and labor. Great job!
ReplyDelete@ owenjc8
ReplyDeleteWelcome to Few Miles
I am very happy to hear those from you. Thank you so much.. Do keep coming..
--Someone Is Special--
@ Anonymous
ReplyDeleteWelcome to Few Miles
I am very happy to know that you enjoyed reading this poem. Thank you so much.. Do keep coming..
--Someone Is Special--