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~ come on idiot, you are for me ~

bySomeone is Special
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Thanks a lot for all the sweet hearts who nominated me as Perfect Poet, Week 43.. ! Here is an acceptance Pi-Ku..

Imperfect
I
Without you dear



Published as a part of

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~ I love to nominate Jingle, Jamie and Ina for Perfect Poet Award ~

One Single Impression, Prompt 169: Rambling

Three Word Wednesday, Prompt : Damp, Incensed, Skit

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  1. Butterflies of timeMay 22, 2011 at 12:50 PM

    Love this poem almost as much as I hate cigars and their smoke. You commented so sweetly on mine while I was reading yours-we were on the same page almost.
    A sense of realization and longing pervades this poem making it alive and familiar.

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  2. Someone is SpecialMay 22, 2011 at 1:56 PM

    @ Butterflies of time

    Thank you.. It is my pleasure to recieve such a sweet comment from you..

    Someone is Special

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  3. Harry NicholsonMay 22, 2011 at 4:15 PM

    The line placement made me take notice.
    This is an interesting metaphor - I'll need to think about it.

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  4. Blasphemous AestheteMay 22, 2011 at 4:16 PM

    Interesting analogy, between two lovers and the cigarette and its smoke, and others.

    Nice read.

    :)
    Blasphemous Aesthete

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  5. AnonymousMay 22, 2011 at 4:51 PM

    Wonderful analogy :)
    Hope the fire comes back to the cigarettes once forever!
    Keep writing...

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  6. Vinay Leo R.May 22, 2011 at 5:54 PM

    Well, as The Mask would say, "Smokin'" :D Nice poem, SiS!

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  7. InaMay 22, 2011 at 6:21 PM

    Non smoker, but I loved the poem :)

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  8. JingleMay 22, 2011 at 6:30 PM

    Brilliant metaphor.

    love is like fire. when you lose it, you lose hope. welcome back.

    Thanks for the acceptance.

    let me know a poet you wish to nominate for week 45.

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  9. AnonymousMay 22, 2011 at 6:42 PM

    Lots of neat imagery and metaphors here. Thank you for sharing!

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  10. AnonymousMay 22, 2011 at 7:00 PM

    Beautiful. The use of the refrain was extremely effective. Loved it.
    The Lonely Recluse.

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  11. UnknownMay 22, 2011 at 7:21 PM

    Where there's love, there's fire,
    Where there's hope, there's desire,
    Where there's poetry,there's love,
    I think you included all of the above.

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  12. AnonymousMay 22, 2011 at 7:51 PM

    Brilliant! The interplay of frustration, want, and cigarette smoke is truly marvelous!

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  13. Rek SeshMay 22, 2011 at 9:08 PM

    beautiful words...
    dreams gone in smoke
    that only you could stoke.

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  14. AnonymousMay 22, 2011 at 9:29 PM

    While I don't smoke I definitely connected with the poem. Great metaphor

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  15. Ramesh SoodMay 22, 2011 at 10:47 PM

    Well done.. SiS.. loved it.. man..

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  16. AnonymousMay 22, 2011 at 11:13 PM

    Boy, SiS, this is a metaphor I never would have thought of, but you pulled it off.

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  17. AnonymousMay 22, 2011 at 11:17 PM

    Wow, such effective words. If I smoked I would quit after reading these. :)

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  18. HelenaMay 23, 2011 at 2:02 AM

    That was puffingly delightful!

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  19. Sheilagh LeeMay 23, 2011 at 2:23 AM

    Very well written

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  20. AnonymousMay 23, 2011 at 5:21 AM

    well written..
    i am slow- who is the idiot? :)

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  21. AnonymousMay 23, 2011 at 5:59 AM

    Nice use of the repeat to reaffirm a point. This one made me smile :)
    Enjoy the rally and thanks for the visit :)

    http://lynnaima.wordpress.com/2011/05/23/rest/

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  22. AnonymousMay 23, 2011 at 6:10 AM

    Your repeated refrain made me smile. Not too many people use "idiot" as an endearment!

    Very creative, SIS! xoxo

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  23. Rachel HoytMay 23, 2011 at 7:21 AM

    I think I've heard cigarettes speak to me like that before! :) This made me smile.

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  24. HA!fA ZUbA!RMay 23, 2011 at 8:59 AM

    An injurious Analogy !!!- I must sAY . . .. !ENJOyD THE INDIFFERENCE . .. !

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  25. AnonymousMay 23, 2011 at 10:03 AM

    Very clever, SiS!!

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  26. DefiantMay 23, 2011 at 6:02 PM

    Wow! never saw such poetry wer love is compared with cigrette...!! amazing.. :) +ve way of thinking :)

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  27. AnonymousMay 23, 2011 at 6:23 PM

    Never saw someone poem in the words of a cigarette...Nice theme, and nice choice of words..Loved it!

    'Come on Idiot, you are for me.' was my favorite!

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  28. Cloud NineMay 23, 2011 at 10:36 PM

    Great SiS...Hope atleast one person shuns the stub reading this post...

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  29. MikiMay 24, 2011 at 12:27 AM

    Fantastic poem!

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  30. AnonymousMay 24, 2011 at 9:09 PM

    Do hope that love isn't as dangerous as smoking! (:

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  31. MumLee May 24, 2011 at 10:09 PM

    Hey I am glad to give you 'stylish blogger award'. Here it is!

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  32. Coffee With Leonard CohenMay 26, 2011 at 7:44 AM

    Actually it kind of makes me want a cigarette.
    It's the destruction and pain in our relationships that we cherish after they're over.

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  33. AnonymousMay 26, 2011 at 4:48 PM

    When you have metaphored a 'you' character with a cigarette, there is no way of quitting, is there?

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  34. AnonymousMay 27, 2011 at 1:01 AM

    You had me at... "come on my idiot"!
    Loved this -- glad I stopped by!

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  35. MeiroMay 27, 2011 at 9:15 AM

    You put a smile on my face SIS.
    I like it.

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  36. Someone is SpecialMay 27, 2011 at 7:49 PM

    @ Harry Nicholson

    Glad you noted it and happy the metaphor came out well.. Thank you so much for your sweet words..

    Someone is Special

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  37. Someone is SpecialMay 27, 2011 at 7:50 PM

    @ Blasphemous Aesthete

    Welcome back, Blasphemous Aesthete!.. Glad to have you here and to read your sweet comments.. Thank you so much..

    Someone is Special

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  38. Someone is SpecialMay 27, 2011 at 7:50 PM

    @ chinmay28

    thank you so much and happy as the fire came back to cigar.. Hmm

    Someone is Special

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  39. Someone is SpecialMay 27, 2011 at 7:50 PM

    @ Leo

    Well, as The Mask would say, "Smokin'" :D Nice poem, SiS!.. it is na??? thank you so much Leo..

    Someone is Special

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  40. Someone is SpecialMay 27, 2011 at 7:50 PM

    @ Ina

    Glad you love the poem Ina and thank you so much for your encouraging words..

    Someone is Special

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  41. Someone is SpecialMay 27, 2011 at 7:50 PM

    @ Jingle

    Ji, thank you so much for the blessings and yeah I'm back after a long gap.. Hmm..

    Someone is Special

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  42. Someone is SpecialMay 27, 2011 at 7:51 PM

    @ birchtreepastor

    Thank you for reading and appreciating my work.. Thank you so much..

    Someone is Special

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  43. Someone is SpecialMay 27, 2011 at 7:51 PM

    @ lonelyrecluse

    Beautiful. The use of the refrain was extremely effective. Loved it. Glad you love it "The Lonely Recluse".. Happy Man...

    Someone is Special

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  44. Someone is SpecialMay 27, 2011 at 7:51 PM

    @ dan roberson

    Where there's love, there's fire,
    Where there's hope, there's desire,
    Where there's poetry,there's love,
    I think you included all of the above.

    Thank you thank you thank you so much for your sweet words..

    Someone is Special

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  45. Someone is SpecialMay 27, 2011 at 7:51 PM

    @ abthomas

    Brilliant! The interplay of frustration, want, and cigarette smoke is truly marvelous! Thank you so much AB..

    Someone is Special

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  46. Someone is SpecialMay 27, 2011 at 7:51 PM

    @ Rek

    Glad you felt the beauty and the fire is back..

    Someone is Special

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  47. Someone is SpecialMay 27, 2011 at 7:51 PM

    @ mindlovemisery

    Glad you connected the poem and Happy to have you here..

    Someone is Special

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  48. Someone is SpecialMay 27, 2011 at 7:52 PM

    @ Ramesh Sood

    Well done.. SiS.. loved it.. man..

    Thank you so much Rameshji.. I feel great to hear those encouraging words from you..

    Someone is Special

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  49. Someone is SpecialMay 27, 2011 at 7:52 PM

    @ teric

    Teri, I am very happy to read your words.. Happy Man..

    Someone is Special

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  50. Someone is SpecialMay 27, 2011 at 7:52 PM

    @ Lena

    That was puffingly delightful! Glad it came out well and you felt it puffingly delightful..

    Someone is Special

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  51. Someone is SpecialMay 27, 2011 at 7:53 PM

    @ Fear Not the Darkness but What lies Within

    Thank you so much.. and Glad to know that..

    Someone is Special

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  52. Someone is SpecialMay 27, 2011 at 7:53 PM

    @ amazingmetamorphosis

    Welcome abroad.. and thank you so much for your encouraging words..

    Someone is Special

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  53. Someone is SpecialMay 27, 2011 at 7:53 PM

    @ lynnaima

    Glad you enjoyed my rally post.. Thank you so much lynnaima..

    Someone is Special

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  54. Someone is SpecialMay 27, 2011 at 7:53 PM

    @ Trisha

    Trisha, glad to hear those words from you.. Thank you so much..

    Someone is Special

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  55. Someone is SpecialMay 27, 2011 at 7:53 PM

    @ Rachel Hoyt

    Glad to know that.. Happy to make you smile.. Thank you so much Rachel..

    Someone is Special

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  56. Someone is SpecialMay 27, 2011 at 7:53 PM

    @ HA!fA

    Glad you enjoyed the indifference.. Thank you so much for your encouraging words..

    Someone is Special

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  57. Someone is SpecialMay 27, 2011 at 7:54 PM

    @ beccagivens

    Glad to know that.. Thank you so much becca..

    Someone is Special

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  58. Someone is SpecialMay 27, 2011 at 7:54 PM

    @ ... Madhumathi ...

    Wow! never saw such poetry wer love is compared with cigrette...!! amazing.. :) +ve way of thinking :)

    Glad it came out very well and happy you love the comparison.. Thank you thank you thank you..

    Someone is Special

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  59. Someone is SpecialMay 27, 2011 at 7:54 PM

    @ Fiducia

    Never saw someone poem in the words of a cigarette...Nice theme, and nice choice of words..Loved it! 'Come on Idiot, you are for me.' was my favorite!

    Aww, I am already in cloud nine after reading the previous comment.. You made me fly higher than cloud 9.. Thank you so much for your encouraging words..

    Someone is Special

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  60. Someone is SpecialMay 27, 2011 at 7:54 PM

    @ Cloud Nine

    I too wish the same and happy to read your encouraging comment..

    Someone is Special

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  61. Someone is SpecialMay 27, 2011 at 7:54 PM

    @ Miki

    Miki, Welcome to Few Miles ! and Glad you felt it fantastic.. Thank you so much..

    Someone is Special

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  62. Someone is SpecialMay 27, 2011 at 7:55 PM

    @ mairmusic

    of course it is not.. Actually it is sweet and it made the who I am till now..

    Someone is Special

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  63. Someone is SpecialMay 27, 2011 at 7:55 PM

    @ Nishana

    Hey I am glad to give you 'stylish blogger award'. Here it is! Thank you so much Nishana.. Happy Man..

    Someone is Special

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  64. Someone is SpecialMay 27, 2011 at 7:55 PM

    @ Coffee With Leonard Cohen

    of course you are right.. it is the destruction that hurts a lot.. Thank you so much for stopping by..

    Someone is Special

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  65. Someone is SpecialMay 27, 2011 at 7:55 PM

    @ deep

    Hmmm, "So many cigarettes, in a non-smoker's tray." So that 'you' character will quit as it is a result of 'frustration'.. hmmm..

    and thank you so much for visiting Few Miles.. Hope you enjoyed your stay here..

    Someone is Special

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  66. Someone is SpecialMay 27, 2011 at 7:55 PM

    @ bsain

    You had me at... "come on my idiot"! Loved this -- glad I stopped by!

    Super glad you stopped by, because you are one of the reason for me to smile today..

    Someone is Special

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  67. Someone is SpecialMay 27, 2011 at 7:56 PM

    @ Meiro

    Glad you like it.. thank you so much..

    Someone is Special

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  68. UnknownMay 27, 2011 at 11:19 PM

    Check out our short story slam today,

    We love creativity, your input is valued.

    Cheers.
    Happy Friday!
    Hope to see you in!

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  69. UnknownMay 27, 2011 at 11:20 PM

    Check out our short story slam today,

    We love creativity, your input is valued.

    Cheers.
    Happy Friday!
    Hope to see you in!

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  70. Someone is SpecialMay 27, 2011 at 11:35 PM

    @ Ji..

    Ji, actually staying a bit away from blogging due to personal reasons.. Will come back soon for sure.. because I can't stay away from this place for a long time..

    Someone is Special

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  71. AnonymousMay 28, 2011 at 1:30 AM

    I like the imaginary of the person being a cigarette. Nice poem!

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  72. KalyanMay 28, 2011 at 8:15 AM

    Thats the way it should be...mad, crazy, forgiving, passionate without any knots and that only will give you an experience that is out of the world and satisfying for both...you words and line resonates with the beauty of sheer passion and un-bounding desire to get lost within yourselves.

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  73. bendedspoonMay 30, 2011 at 6:39 PM

    so creative and clever! another butt to wipe, cigarette's :)

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  74. Madeleine Begun KaneJune 2, 2011 at 3:19 AM

    Excellent take on smoking!

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  75. AnonymousJune 2, 2011 at 11:41 AM

    Awesome poem, I really like the repetition of that line. Also you make it sound as if you're in love with the cigarette and it is avoiding you. Excellently done!

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  76. Someone is SpecialJune 13, 2011 at 6:17 PM

    @ kagenohime

    I like the imaginary of the person being a cigarette. Nice poem!

    Aww, thank you, glad you like my imagination..

    Someone is Special

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  77. Someone is SpecialJune 13, 2011 at 6:18 PM

    @ Kalyan

    Thats the way it should be...mad, crazy, forgiving, passionate without

    any knots and that only will give you an experience that is out of the

    world and satisfying for both...you words and line resonates with the

    beauty of sheer passion and un-bounding desire to get lost within

    yourselves.

    I am wordless here.. Thank you for appreicating my passionate words.. Happy

    Man..

    Someone is Special

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  78. Someone is SpecialJune 13, 2011 at 6:18 PM

    @ bendedspoon

    Thank you so much bendedspoon.. Pleasure to read your comment..

    Someone is Special

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  79. Someone is SpecialJune 13, 2011 at 6:18 PM

    @ Madeleine Begun Kane

    Aww thank you so much...

    Someone is Special

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  80. Someone is SpecialJune 13, 2011 at 6:18 PM

    @ deadpoet88

    Awesome poem, I really like the repetition of that line. Also you make

    it sound as if you're in love with the cigarette and it is avoiding you.

    Excellently done!

    Aww, thank you so much deadpoet.. It is my pleasure to read your awesome

    comment.. Thank you thank you..

    Someone is Special

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  81. UnknownJune 24, 2011 at 12:16 AM

    Come on Idiot, you are for me.

    Ultimate, it make me light another classic.

    I think you enjoy writing about boozing and fagging stuff. Great!!

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  82. Someone is SpecialJune 24, 2011 at 10:52 PM

    @ atlasshrugged

    Come on Idiot, you are for me. Ultimate, it make me light another classic. I think you enjoy writing about boozing and fagging stuff. Great!!

    Well, I enjoy writing romance.. and this is a kind of romance..I am happy you like it.. Thanks for stopping by..

    Someone is Special

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  83. smiling soulAugust 1, 2011 at 11:54 PM

    natpu ku adayaalamaga...indha karuthu idhoo...:)

    punch line in every stanza is giving great strength to the poem...very beautiful description...

    just thought of commenting on this poem so scrolled scrolled & scrolled may be for a min i might have scrolled down :P...ohhh god how much comments u have got man!!:D

    keep smiling always :)

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  84. Someone is SpecialAugust 2, 2011 at 9:18 PM

    @ soumya

    Welcome to Few Miles.. Thangal varigauky nandri...

    Thank you thank you thank you so much for your sweet encouraging words. Do keep coming..

    Someone is Special

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  85. shwetaNovember 28, 2011 at 10:09 AM

    The winds blows on my face, I smell you.
    The dew drops on my lips, damp, I taste you.
    Wherever I see, I feel you.
    Come on Idiot, you are for me.





    awesome lines :)
    u r killer

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  86. Someone is SpecialNovember 29, 2011 at 1:26 AM

    @ shweta

    The winds blows on my face, I smell you.
    The dew drops on my lips, damp, I taste you.
    Wherever I see, I feel you.
    Come on Idiot, you are for me.





    awesome lines :)
    u r killer

    I am happy to be a killer in writing romance.. Happy to have you here..

    Someone is Special

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  87. SimranAugust 18, 2013 at 1:17 PM

    Truly fantastic composition, Special One :-)
    ''Come on idiot you are for me'' ... cute!! <3

    Cheers for the Poetic King :D

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    1. Someone is SpecialAugust 18, 2013 at 7:27 PM

      Thanks a lot Little One! :) At least one came to read this post :) Happy for sharing :)

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