First Night
Life has become beautiful from that night; the moment, he first hugged me and planted a kiss on my lips. His pounding heartbeat was aloud, as he whispered into my ears, I love you.
And I Blushed!
Entwined by our long-lasting love, we became one for the first time. Definitely, arranged marriage is a magic!
This post is a part of Write Over the Weekend, an initiative for Indian Bloggers by BlogAdda. What you feel about this love? WoW or not? Do let me know :)
Also submitted to G-Man's Friday Flash 55.

Yes, in a way :-)
ReplyDelete:) :) :)
DeleteI remember the anticipation and gratitude : )
ReplyDeleteGood.. :) :)
Deleteinteresting...arranged marriage has always befuddled me a bit and wondering if it could really work out...your short story adds magic to it, which i guess is certainly possible...
ReplyDeletemy 55
Thank you Brain. I will stop by your blog soon :)
DeleteI would not be so willing the first night I guess. not unless I really know the person well .. but yeah , first surrender is and should be celebrated special.
ReplyDeleteYou are absolutely right. First surrender is very special. And I am sure you will get to know the person soon :)
DeleteWell...if it works - great.
ReplyDeleteDepends :)
DeleteBeautiful! <3
ReplyDeleteEven I would do arranged marriage :) ;)
Good Little One :) Happy for you :) But still a lot years left for you :)
DeleteI can't wrap my mind around an arranged marriage, but perhaps as a parent with children "coming of age", perhaps I can rethink my perception :)
ReplyDeleteHa ha Ha :) Good one..
DeleteSIS....
ReplyDeleteVery intense writing My Friend
He got lucky and that arrangement!
Loved your Romantic 55
Thanks for playing and have a Kick Ass Week End
I think that He is Me G-Man.. :) Happy! Thank you :)
DeleteEventhough the words are romantics, its too warm.
ReplyDeleteIt is good to find a critic :)
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