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First Night

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Life has become beautiful from that night; the moment, he first hugged me and planted a kiss on my lips. His pounding heartbeat was loud, as he whispered into my ears, I love you.

And I Blushed!

Entwined by our long-lasting love, we became one for the first time. Definitely, arranged marriage is a magic!


This post is a part of Write Over the Weekend, an initiative for Indian Bloggers by BlogAdda. What do you feel about this love? WoW or not? Do let me know :)

Also submitted to G-Man's Friday Flash 55.



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  1. aativasJuly 19, 2013 at 5:11 PM

    Yes, in a way :-)

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  2. izzyJuly 19, 2013 at 5:44 PM

    I remember the anticipation and gratitude : )

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  3. Brian MillerJuly 19, 2013 at 5:45 PM

    interesting...arranged marriage has always befuddled me a bit and wondering if it could really work out...your short story adds magic to it, which i guess is certainly possible...

    my 55

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  4. PratibhaJuly 19, 2013 at 9:45 PM

    I would not be so willing the first night I guess. not unless I really know the person well .. but yeah , first surrender is and should be celebrated special.

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    1. Someone is SpecialAugust 16, 2013 at 11:20 PM

      You are absolutely right. First surrender is very special. And I am sure you will get to know the person soon :)

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  5. Other MaryJuly 19, 2013 at 9:50 PM

    Well...if it works - great.

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  6. SimranJuly 19, 2013 at 10:29 PM

    Beautiful! <3
    Even I would do arranged marriage :) ;)

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    1. Someone is SpecialAugust 16, 2013 at 11:21 PM

      Good Little One :) Happy for you :) But still a lot years left for you :)

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  7. MargaretJuly 19, 2013 at 10:54 PM

    I can't wrap my mind around an arranged marriage, but perhaps as a parent with children "coming of age", perhaps I can rethink my perception :)

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  8. g-manJuly 20, 2013 at 5:19 AM

    SIS....
    Very intense writing My Friend
    He got lucky and that arrangement!
    Loved your Romantic 55
    Thanks for playing and have a Kick Ass Week End

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    1. Someone is SpecialAugust 16, 2013 at 11:22 PM

      I think that He is Me G-Man.. :) Happy! Thank you :)

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  9. UnknownAugust 20, 2013 at 7:58 AM

    Eventhough the words are romantics, its too warm.

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