the blues on seeing
blue beauties flew away
ray of hope arise
ray of hope arise
grab the opportunity
prove you are the best
prove you are the best
across the horizon, and
always keep smiling!
Submitted to Haiku Heights and Haiku My Heart
The heavenly photo was clicked by Rachana Shakyawar of Humming Today, Thanks Creator!
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PS: I’ve dedicated a post, "my life... her shadow..." to my sweet mother as she taught what life is. Do stop by to know about my life.!
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"முகமறியா நண்பர்களின் கருத்துக்களே எனக்கு படிகற்கள்"
WOW, this is so beautiful. I truly enjoyed this one...:)
ReplyDeleteYou and Susie Clevenger know how to sing the blues away!
ReplyDeleteShadowy Blue Haiku
Beautiful heavenly photograph.. Rachana is indeed so very talented.. and your haiku..( my style, ha, ha,) so beautiful..
ReplyDeleteSeeing the photo I imagine myself flying and plucking a piece of cloud, breaking into small pieces to make a soft pillow and sleeping cool to float in my dreams with angels and fairies in the skies...
Wow!! RS:)
"the blues on seeing blue beauties flew away" this is so beautiful Saravana.I loved the way you related two different blues in such a lovely manner. and i loved the optimism in your haiku :)
ReplyDeletebeautiful!
and yes, the shot is AMAZING!!
The blues on seeing
ReplyDeleteblue beauty flew away
What a wonderful imagination!
the ray of beauty coming through your words :)
And the delightful image by Rachana added a charm to your words:)
Best best you always my Special One
Stay smiling you both... :)
i realllyyy love little inspiring lines.....
ReplyDeleteso for sure the last verse is my favorite!! :D :D
the pic. is beautiful one too ...beautiful combination!!!!
both complimenting! :D:D
@ Saru Singhal
ReplyDeleteWOW, this is so beautiful. I truly enjoyed this one...:)
Thank you so much Saru.. I'm happy.. flying...
@ Magical Mystical Teacher
ReplyDeleteThank you so much MMT. Happy to read you...
@ Ramesh Sood
ReplyDeleteBeautiful heavenly photograph.. Rachana is indeed so very talented.. and your haiku..( my style, ha, ha,) so beautiful..
Seeing the photo I imagine myself flying and plucking a piece of cloud, breaking into small pieces to make a soft pillow and sleeping cool to float in my dreams with angels and fairies in the skies...
Wow!! RS:)
She is indeed a talent person RS. thank you so much.. yeah yeah RS, happy to write in your style, but you know what.. I've tried this style in my early days also.. Happy, excited and I just love this way, your trademark style.. Happy!
@ N.S.Kirti
ReplyDelete"the blues on seeing blue beauties flew away" this is so beautiful Saravana.I loved the way you related two different blues in such a lovely manner. and i loved the optimism in your haiku :)
beautiful!
and yes, the shot is AMAZING!!
Kriti, welcome to Few Miles.. Happy and glad to read your encouraging words.. Flying Flying...
@ Simran
ReplyDeleteThe blues on seeing
blue beauty flew away
What a wonderful imagination!
the ray of beauty coming through your words :)
And the delightful image by Rachana added a charm to your words:)
Best best you always my Special One
Stay smiling you both... :)
Thank you so much Little One.. Happy to read your encouraging words..
Yes, it is a delightful click by our Rachana.. Happy and thank you so much Sim.. :-)
@ ashzzes
ReplyDeletei realllyyy love little inspiring lines.....
so for sure the last verse is my favorite!! :D :D
the pic. is beautiful one too ...beautiful combination!!!!
both complimenting! :D:D
Thank you so much aish.. Happy happy happy.. Flying..
@ Punam
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You have been tagged.
Thanks for tagging me Punam.. Happy...