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Haiku Heights meme is hosting a Haiku Challenge, "The Height of Haiku Challenge", simply write 30 Haikus in 30 Days based on the theme given. The theme for the day is 'MY CHOICE', so here I go...


I miss my heartbeat
from the moment I proposed
my love to my girl!

Because my heart beats
for my dream girl cute smile with
which I fell in love!

Numbers can’t define
the hours I dream of my girl
Love you my dream girl!




Also published as a part of Carry On Tuesday & Sensational Haiku Wednesday

PS: I was busy with my personal work for the past two weeks that kept me away from your beautiful writings. I will stop by fellow challengers and bloggers blog as soon as possible :-)

Tagged:
Saravanakumar Murugan
FROM THE AUTHOR'S DESK

Saravanakumar Murugan

Author & Storyteller · Someone is Special

Senior technology leader, writer, and photographer. What began in 2009 as a romantic journaling sanctuary on Few Miles has grown into published books (Shades of Life, Return), 55-word microfiction, and quiet stories that stay with people long after reading.

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  1. AnonymousSeptember 4, 2011 at 2:11 PM

    I get the feeling she is special? :)

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  2. Cloud NineSeptember 4, 2011 at 4:24 PM

    Haaaaaa! Dream girl!!! The very thought sends our heart on a dizzy trail:P

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  3. Cassiopeia RisesSeptember 4, 2011 at 8:10 PM

    Nice, very nice. She is a lucky girl.

    Melanie

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  4. SimranSeptember 4, 2011 at 8:30 PM

    And you're in love again :)

    ''Numbers can’t define
    the hours I dream of my girl''
    Very very cute :)

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  5. andy sewinaSeptember 4, 2011 at 9:43 PM

    You must love her very much!

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  6. Maxwell Mead Williams Robinson BarrySeptember 5, 2011 at 12:01 AM

    good for you.

    stay in love and be happy.

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  7. BikramSeptember 5, 2011 at 12:37 AM

    oooh someone is in love .. romantic romantic :) wah wah

    Bikram's

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  8. Gemma Mira Wiseman aka Pamela AdamsSeptember 5, 2011 at 3:54 AM

    So sweet and cute! The bliss of romance!

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  9. AnonymousSeptember 5, 2011 at 9:18 AM

    I think you're both lucky to have one another!

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  10. Vinay Leo R.September 5, 2011 at 8:09 PM

    back to your chosen genre of romance huh? :) well said.

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  11. AnandSeptember 5, 2011 at 10:24 PM

    nice one man... liked it :)

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  12. WyomingDivaSeptember 6, 2011 at 8:45 AM

    Beautiful - hope you always feel this way about her!

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  13. Laurie KolpSeptember 7, 2011 at 12:15 AM

    Sweet and uplifting!

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  14. KalyanSeptember 10, 2011 at 3:22 PM

    lovely lines...nicely crafted words for your special someone!

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  15. Sunil PadiyarSeptember 12, 2011 at 6:26 PM

    Lovely lines :)

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  16. Someone is SpecialOctober 8, 2011 at 1:11 AM

    @imnotaverse

    I get the feeling she is special? :)

    Hmm... sshhhhh... Welcome back to Few MileS.. Thanks for the smiles..

    Someone is Special

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  17. Someone is SpecialOctober 8, 2011 at 1:11 AM

    @ Cloud Nine

    Haaaaaa! Dream girl!!! The very thought sends our heart on a dizzy trail:P

    yeah yeah a lot na.. Hmmm.. Glad to reply to the comment.. It makes me happy...

    Someone is Special

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  18. Someone is SpecialOctober 8, 2011 at 1:11 AM

    @ Cassiopeia Rises

    Thank you so much Melanie and welcome back to Few MileS..

    Someone is Special

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  19. Someone is SpecialOctober 8, 2011 at 1:11 AM

    @ Simran

    And you're in love again :)

    ''Numbers can’t define
    the hours I dream of my girl''
    Very very cute :)

    Well, that is default na sim.. Hmm Thank you so so much for your sweet comment..

    Someone is Special

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  20. Someone is SpecialOctober 8, 2011 at 1:12 AM

    @ andy sewina

    You must love her very much!

    Hmmm... SmileS.. Happy to have you here..

    Someone is Special

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  21. Someone is SpecialOctober 8, 2011 at 1:12 AM

    @ Morning

    Thank you so much Ji.. Happy to have you here..

    Someone is Special

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  22. Someone is SpecialOctober 8, 2011 at 1:12 AM

    @ Bikramjit

    oooh someone is in love .. romantic romantic :) wah wah

    Aww.. That's default na. hmm.. Hoping to be happy...

    Someone is Special

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  23. Someone is SpecialOctober 8, 2011 at 1:12 AM

    @ Gemma Wiseman

    So sweet and cute! The bliss of romance!

    Thank you so much Gemma.. Happy to have you here..

    Someone is Special

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  24. Someone is SpecialOctober 8, 2011 at 1:12 AM

    @ iblogmoore (Amanda Moore)

    Wishing to be so.. Happpy to have you here Amanda.. Do keep coming..

    Someone is Special

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  25. Someone is SpecialOctober 8, 2011 at 1:12 AM

    @ Ashwini

    Ashwini, Welcome to Few Miles.. I am glad you felt it nice.. SmileS.

    Someone is Special

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  26. Someone is SpecialOctober 8, 2011 at 1:12 AM

    @ Leo

    back to your chosen genre of romance huh? :) well said.

    Well, I love to leo.. Happy to see your comment..

    Someone is Special

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  27. Someone is SpecialOctober 8, 2011 at 1:12 AM

    @ Anand

    Thank you so much Anand.. Welcome abroad..

    Someone is Special

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  28. Someone is SpecialOctober 8, 2011 at 1:13 AM

    @ WyomingDi

    Thank yo so much for your wishes.. I am very happy to have you here.. Welcome to Few MileS..

    Someone is Special

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  29. Someone is SpecialOctober 8, 2011 at 1:13 AM

    @ Laurie Kolp

    SmileS.. and love to you.. Welcome to Few Miles!

    Someone is Special

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  30. Someone is SpecialOctober 8, 2011 at 1:13 AM

    @ Kalyan

    lovely lines...nicely crafted words for your special someone!

    Glad you loved it Kalyan.. Happy to have you here..

    Someone is Special

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  31. Someone is SpecialOctober 8, 2011 at 1:13 AM

    @ Sunil Padiyar

    Sunil, thank you so so much man..

    Someone is Special

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  32. shwetaNovember 29, 2011 at 5:38 PM

    i like the girl in the pic .:)

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  33. Someone is SpecialNovember 30, 2011 at 5:48 PM

    @ shweta

    i like the girl in the pic .:)

    Even I like her a lot.. She is an actress..

    Someone is Special

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