He is the father
of billion hearts breathing free
independent air
an eye for an eye
will make the world go blind, his
whisper in silence
Happy Independence Day
Published as a part of
Haiku Heights, Prompt 56: Whisper
One Single Impression, Prompt 181: Silence
Carry on Tuesday, Prompt: 118
recuerda mi corazon - Haiku My Heart
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"முகமறியா நண்பர்களின் கருத்துக்களே எனக்கு படிகற்கள்"
SiS this is a lovely tribute to such a peaceful man and it made me smile.....
ReplyDeleteBeautiful poem...happy independence day!!
ReplyDeleteIt wasn't enoughh!
ReplyDeleteSIS you have excelled here and a great tribute to the father of our nation!! Loved the combination of the prompt with our own independence day celebrations!! Well done in every respect!! applause :)
ReplyDeleteKudos!!
great tribute to the father of peace.
ReplyDeleteGreat tribute. :)
ReplyDeletethat was splendid.
ReplyDeleteI wish you Happy Independence Day!
ReplyDeleteVery nice!
ReplyDeleteLovely words and wonderful image!
ReplyDeleteHappy Independence Day ~
ReplyDeleteHe is a great man ~
I just wish he was remembered more often by us than on a few select days.
ReplyDeleteCheers,
Blasphemous Aesthete
beautiful..........:)
ReplyDelete@ iblogmoore (Amanda Moore)
ReplyDeleteSiS this is a lovely tribute to such a peaceful man and it made me smile.....
SmileS.. Amanda..
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@ The Write Girl
ReplyDeleteBeautiful poem...happy independence day!!
Thank you so much and wish you the same..
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@ Whitesnake
ReplyDeleteIt wasn't enoughh!
Of course, it wasn't.. SmileS..
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@ Nanka
ReplyDeleteSIS you have excelled here and a great tribute to the father of our nation!! Loved the combination of the prompt with our own independence day celebrations!! Well done in every respect!! applause :) Kudos!!
Awe, thank you so much Nanka.. It is my pleasure to have you here..
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@ rebecca
ReplyDeletegreat tribute to the father of peace.
Thank you so much rebecca.. SmileS..
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@ Nara Malone
ReplyDeleteGreat tribute. :) Smiles..
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@ Live2cherish
ReplyDeleteawe, thank you so much ..
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@ beccagivens
ReplyDeleteThank you so much becca.. so sweet of you..
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@ Sunil Padiyar
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Sunil :-)
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@ WyomingDiva
ReplyDeleteLovely words and wonderful image!
welcome to Few Miles.. Thank you so much.. :-)
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@ Heaven
ReplyDeleteHappy Independence Day heaven and yeah he is a great man...
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@ Blasphemous Aesthete
ReplyDeleteI just wish he was remembered more often by us than on a few select days.
Agreed Anshul.. smileS..
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@ the critics
ReplyDeleteThe critics, thank you so much for being regular on my blog.. Smiles..
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Please share your poetry with Jingle Poetry at The Gooseberry Garden Today.
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random poems, Haikus, or theme fitting ones are all welcome!
Happy Writing!
@ Poetry Potluck
ReplyDeleteJi, surely will join in future weeks..
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