a dream she is
a moment it was
a bliss she is
a treasure it was
a sweet she is
a dessert it was
a flower she is
a bouquet it was
a journey she is
a kiss seals it
Sachin she says
‘I could not control my tears of joy’, he says
‘dream journey’
Thanks a lot for all the sweet hearts who nominated me as Perfect Poet, Week 40.. Happy Man ! Here is an acceptance Pi-Ku..
Perfect Poet
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Thanks for award
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"முகமறியா நண்பர்களின் கருத்துக்களே எனக்கு படிகற்கள்"
what a victory eh?
ReplyDeleteWhat a hopeless Romantic you are!
ReplyDeleteI sure hope there is someone 'Special' that appreciates you.
Excellent 55 My Friend.
Thanks for playing, and have a Kick Ass Week-End
wow..
ReplyDeletevery fancy and delightful words.
lovely 55.
Thanks for sharing with poets rally.
thanks for the nomination.
you rock.
awesome victory and awesome way to celebrate, your poetry!
ReplyDeleteSuch a delicate and wonderful expression. The use of present and past tense throughout created an insightful dance. Very nice ~ Rose
ReplyDeleteLovely !
ReplyDeleteJL&B
Beautiful post and congrats on the award SiS!
ReplyDeleteNicely done!
ReplyDeletesweet victory... lovely wordplay! :)
ReplyDeletehttp://pinklady-bing.blogspot.com/2011/04/remembrance.html
Had it been not for he name; it was a perfect romantic, loving piece.. that it still is.. :)
ReplyDeleteHugs x
Romantic and lovely, as always.
ReplyDeleteHug
Jai ho.Lovely !to have the cup back. I am too on cloud nine. Check out my post on our outstanding madness.
ReplyDeletehttp://harivarasanam.wordpress.com/2011/04/06/celebrations/
woohoo! its a gorgeoues piece my friend.. thanks for coming by..
ReplyDeleteWell done! I have not been here before...but WILL be back for more. I like romantic stuff--it helps to keep parts of the world smiling.
ReplyDeleteBTW: Re my '55' post on losing 14 pounds in a week. I wrote "SAD!--grin!"
That "grin" makes the phrase facetious. Which means I an joking!!! OK? I just HAD to explain that to you. I am NOT a sad Peep. Well, hardly ever--grin!
PEACE! to you, Someone Special!
Awesome structure. Ahh the victory... It somehow encourages me to work harder:)
ReplyDeleteWonderful!
ReplyDeleteCongrats :)
It's beautiful and so romantic. A very interesting format also.
ReplyDeletewonderfully penned ... and congrats!
ReplyDeletesweet rewards of life.
ReplyDeleteA ahppy, celebratory poem, SiS...and congrats on your award!
ReplyDeleteYou deserve all the accolades, SIS--you are a talented and very romantic writer.
ReplyDeleteMust be quite something to reach the end of a journey where you put your all into it, quite rewarding!!!! :)
ReplyDeletesweet glorious victory! congratulations! :)
ReplyDeleteHi SiS!
ReplyDeleteYou still got a hang-over over Sachin's victory, after your journey post, and here you are again!
Perfect words for victory!
Great poem! Wonderful tribute to India winning the world cup, it was a great match. s
ReplyDeleteNice poem clebrating the amazing victory,
ReplyDeletepermanent hangover, SiS? :-o :)
ReplyDeleteAwards for you, thanks for the support!
ReplyDeleteI remember reading this post and posting a comment but now i cant find :-s
ReplyDeleteAnyways lovely post saying all the little master wd have felt
Loved it :)
@ Brian Miller
ReplyDeleteYes Brian it is.. SmileS..
Someone is Special
@ G-Man
ReplyDeleteG-Man, I am happy, very happy and of course that someone 'Special' appreciates me whenever I do good and criticise when I go wrong and help me to overcome my grief when I am sad.. and thanks a lot G-Man..
Someone is Special
@ Jingle
ReplyDeleteGlad you loved it Ji, Happy Man and thanks for the blessings..
Someone is Special
@ Paulami
ReplyDeleteGlad to know that Paulami.. Welcome to Few Miles and thanks for your encouraging words..
Someone is Special
@ C Rose
ReplyDeleteGlad you loved the concept of present and past tense.. Happy Man.. and Welcome to Few Miles..
Someone is Special
@ JL Dodge
ReplyDeleteGlad you loved it.. Thanks for the encouraging words..
Someone is Special
@ Amanda Moore
ReplyDeleteAmanda, so sweet of you, your encouraging words help me to grow a lot.. Thanks for the support and Happy Man..
Someone is Special
@ Mama Zen
ReplyDeleteGlad to know that and thanks for your constant support and encouragement ..
Someone is Special
@ Bing (PinkLady)
ReplyDeleteThanks Bing, So sweet of you.. Glad to have you here....
Someone is Special
@ Olivia
ReplyDeleteYes, it is still is.. Hmmm thanks for the encouraging words Olivia.. So sweet of you..
Someone is Special
@ meirozavian
ReplyDeleteGlad you loved it, thanks for the encouraging comment and support.. Happy Man....
Someone is Special
@ Butterflies of time
ReplyDeleteEvery Indian should be on cloud nine.. I love your post Harsh.. Thanks a lot for your encouraging comments..
Someone is Special
@ fiveloaf
ReplyDeleteAwww.. thanks for the sweet comment.. Glad you felt so..
Someone is Special
@ Steve E
ReplyDeleteSteve, Welcome to Few Miles.. Glad to know that you too will love romantic stuff.. SmileS.. and thanks for posting your reply here.. So sweet of you..
Someone is Special
@ magdalenahermanstories
ReplyDeleteGlad it encourage you and thanks for the encouraging words..
Someone is Special
@ Simran
ReplyDeletethank you so much Simran.. So sweet of you.....
Someone is Special
@ teric
ReplyDeleteaww.. thanks for the encouraging comments.. So sweet of you..
Someone is Special
@ beccagivens
ReplyDeleteThank you so much becca for your wishes and encouraging comments..
Someone is Special
@ Monkey Man
ReplyDeleteyeah yeah.. very sweet Monkey Man.. Glad to have you here..
Someone is Special
@ liv2write2day
ReplyDeleteVictoria, so sweet of you, thank you so much for your wishes and encouraging words..
Someone is Special
@ bodhirose
ReplyDeleteAww.. thank you so much Gayle.. Happy Man and as always you are so supportive.. Thanks thanks..
Someone is Special
@ lynnaima
ReplyDeletethanks thanks thanks lynnaima..
Someone is Special
@ bendedspoon
ReplyDeletethank you so much for your wishes and encouraging words bendedspoon......
Someone is Special
@ Amity
ReplyDeleteabsolutely right.. hang-over is still not over.. Hmm... Thank you so much Amity..
Someone is Special
@ deadpoet88
ReplyDeletethank you so much and of course it is a wonderful match..
Someone is Special
@ The Fool
ReplyDeletethank you so much TF.. So sweet of you..
Someone is Special
@ Vinay
ReplyDeleteofcourse permanently Vinay and you know me better.. Thank you so much for your comments..
Someone is Special
@ Promising Poets Parking Lot
ReplyDeletethank you so much Ji for the awards.. So sweet of you and Hats of to your hardwork..
Someone is Special
@ Missy
ReplyDeleteMissy, Welcome to Few MileS.. and thank for your encouraging words.. Happy Man..
Someone is Special
@ Sparkling Gem
ReplyDeleteSG, even I wonder the same.. How would have got missed.. I am not sure.. Hmm thanks for commenting once again.. Sweet Sweet Sweet, you are so sweet..
Someone is Special