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Mesmerized

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I saw a girl through
spyhole, mesmerized by
her humility

I forgot this world
head still, I stood like a tree
May be this is love



Published as a part of

Haiku Heights, Prompt #29: Spyhole

One Single Impression, Prompt #154 Humility

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Comments

  1. Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis HallFebruary 8, 2011 at 12:44 AM

    cute..
    smart entry.

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  2. Someone is SpecialFebruary 8, 2011 at 9:21 AM

    @ Jingle

    Glad to know.. Thanks for all the smiles Ji..

    Someone is Special

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  3. NankaFebruary 8, 2011 at 9:38 PM

    Surely SIS, you must have been the one hiding behind that tree and peeping. You were so enamored and rooted that you grew into a tree?? LOL!! :D

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  4. The Write GirlFebruary 9, 2011 at 8:05 AM

    I like the innocence and sweetness in your poem. Lovely haikus.

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  5. ReflectionsFebruary 10, 2011 at 11:43 AM

    Innocent eyes spilling puppy love...

    wonderful!

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  6. AnonymousFebruary 10, 2011 at 6:33 PM

    I was not really diggin' it until the last line. It made the rest work perfectly. Thanks.

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  7. Vinay Leo R.February 11, 2011 at 10:04 AM

    sneaky start to romance SiS.. u were a naughty boy in childhood huh, peeping through spyholes? :D

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  8. Someone is SpecialMarch 19, 2011 at 12:29 AM

    @ Nanka

    Hmm maybe Nanka.. Thanks for the sweet words.. SmileS...

    Someone is Special

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  9. Someone is SpecialMarch 19, 2011 at 12:30 AM

    @ The Write Girl

    Thanks a lot The Write Girl.. SmileS..

    Someone is Special

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  10. Someone is SpecialMarch 19, 2011 at 12:31 AM

    yeah yeah. hmm thanks for the encouraging words..

    Someone is Special

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  11. Someone is SpecialMarch 19, 2011 at 12:32 AM

    @ Danny Earl Simmons

    Thanks and welcome to Few Miles.. Happy Man..

    Someone is Special

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  12. Someone is SpecialMarch 19, 2011 at 12:33 AM

    @ Leo

    hmm yeah yeah very much.. and Smiles Vinay..

    Someone is Special

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