I saw a girl through
spyhole, mesmerized by
her humility
I forgot this world
head still, I stood like a tree
May be this is love
Published as a part of
Haiku Heights, Prompt #29: Spyhole
One Single Impression, Prompt #154 Humility
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"முகமறியா நண்பர்களின் கருத்துக்களே எனக்கு படிகற்கள்"
cute..
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@ Jingle
ReplyDeleteGlad to know.. Thanks for all the smiles Ji..
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Surely SIS, you must have been the one hiding behind that tree and peeping. You were so enamored and rooted that you grew into a tree?? LOL!! :D
ReplyDeleteI like the innocence and sweetness in your poem. Lovely haikus.
ReplyDeleteInnocent eyes spilling puppy love...
ReplyDeletewonderful!
I was not really diggin' it until the last line. It made the rest work perfectly. Thanks.
ReplyDeletesneaky start to romance SiS.. u were a naughty boy in childhood huh, peeping through spyholes? :D
ReplyDelete@ Nanka
ReplyDeleteHmm maybe Nanka.. Thanks for the sweet words.. SmileS...
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@ The Write Girl
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot The Write Girl.. SmileS..
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yeah yeah. hmm thanks for the encouraging words..
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@ Danny Earl Simmons
ReplyDeleteThanks and welcome to Few Miles.. Happy Man..
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@ Leo
ReplyDeletehmm yeah yeah very much.. and Smiles Vinay..
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