Home sweet Home
I miss my room
Mom sweet Mom
I miss your hug
Dad sweet Dad
I miss your advice
Dog sweet Dog
I miss your licks
Friend’s sweet friends
I miss you all
Food sweet food
I miss my Mom’s food
Life Sweet Life
I miss all sweet life
Published as a part of
Poetry Potluck @ Jingle Poetry, Theme: Home,Temple & Santum
Sunday Scribblings, Prompt:#255 - Food
Carry on Tuesday, Prompt:#93
ABC Wednesday, F is for F Words
One Shot Wednesday @ One Stop Poetry
Image Source: Google
Poetry Potluck @ Jingle Poetry, Theme: Home,Temple & Santum
Sunday Scribblings, Prompt:#255 - Food
Carry on Tuesday, Prompt:#93
ABC Wednesday, F is for F Words
One Shot Wednesday @ One Stop Poetry
Image Source: Google
If you are here to link your Haiku for Day 23 of 'The Haiku Challenge' then please click the image to view the challenge post.
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"முகமறியா நண்பர்களின் கருத்துக்களே எனக்கு படிகற்கள்"
That was one sweet poem :)
ReplyDeletelove your entry,
ReplyDeletesweet and profound.
A++
This is so endearing, SIS. Love all this sweetness. xoxo
ReplyDeleteHomesickness is difficult to bear. This poem captures it well.
ReplyDeleteSweet and soothing.
ReplyDeleteSo much is taken for granted until we no longer have it. Well done!
ReplyDeleteA beautifully put sentiment - a truly great write
ReplyDeleteyou just made me miss home soooo much.
ReplyDeletewhat a sweet posting.. my potluck.. http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/06/04/metamorphosis/
ReplyDeletesoo true...everything was so sweet before...
ReplyDeletethanks for this...you reminded me of those sweet memories too :)
That's very sweet and I recognises all the things you miss too!
ReplyDeleteWell done.
http://jessicasjapes.wordpress.com/2011/02/21/home/
So sweet I smiled while reading :)
ReplyDeletea very endearing poem...smiles.
ReplyDeleteHi SiS!
ReplyDeleteIt was too bad for me I missed a lot of your haiku challenge...:(
And I was touched with this home sweet home poem of yours...
"When I was sick
I missed SiS' haiku
Challenge for this
beautiful month of
February"
"many a times I
try to go back
blogging but every
attempt gives me
failures and reason
i suddenly had to
be absent'!
"Home sweet home
To the blogging world
I fell in love with
with the words and pen"
this is cute SIS, loved this tender side of yours. thanks for sharing.
ReplyDeletemy poetry potluck post is in my poetry blog.
http://mydomainpvt.wordpress.com
trisha
its hard when we miss home so much....this was nice soft dedictaion for your home sickness..
ReplyDeletehere is my link:http://mypoetrywriting.blogspot.com/2011/02/africa-my-home.html
I assume F is for Friends, yes?
ReplyDeleteROG, ABC Wednesday team
"There is no place like home" -- this is very endearing tribute ...
ReplyDeletethank you for sharing ~~ becca~~
Sweet! Once the homesickness passes, you will see all the sweetness in your new home!
ReplyDeleteStrange feeling re-inventing a sense of home and friends! But it does happen! A lovely gentle poem!
ReplyDeleteVery nice poem. I followed your blog, please follow mine. Do visit my ABC Entry: F is for Fishing
ReplyDeleteso sweeet!
ReplyDeletehoping you can follow and link up if you haven't yet =)
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Hi S I S
ReplyDeletewell I could relate to this so much... though a little old for the same... but I have been travlling a lot so I know the feeling..
ॐ नमः शिवाय
Om Namah Shivaya
http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com/2011/02/whispers-tanka-and-search-for-being.html
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An F word also starts with F, that's true
ReplyDeleteGattina
ABC team
F is for Family and Friends and good Family Food too!! SIS you didn't put that, you had a good collection of F~Day words :)
ReplyDeleteHope you get home soon.
ReplyDeleteThis was really cute!
ReplyDeleteI loved it a lot
Aww.. I feel for you, SiS.. this was so heartfelt...
ReplyDeleteLovely..
@ Scribbling Girl
ReplyDeleteWhenever you visit my page you make me happy.. such a sweet girl you are.. Thanks SG..
Someone is Special
@ Jingle
ReplyDeleteGlad you loved Ji.. So sweet of you.. Always your blessings make me smile a lot..
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@ bodhirose
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot bodhirose.. SmileS..
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@ Lolamouse
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Lolamouse and of course it is worse..
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@ JAGDISH BALI
ReplyDeleteThanks Jagdish, so sweet of you..
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@ Gloria
ReplyDeleteThanks Gloria, SmileS.. Happy Man..
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@ abthomas
ReplyDeletethanks a lot abthomas.. Pleasure is mine.. and It comes right from my heart..
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@ sam
ReplyDeleteI too miss my home a lot..
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@ fiveloaf
ReplyDeletethanks a lot fiveloaf..
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@ Sumit Sarkar
ReplyDeleteSmileS bro very happy man.. and I can understand your feel too.........
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@ jessicasjapes
ReplyDeleteyou got it jessica, I miss them all.....
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@ bendedspoon
ReplyDeleteSmileS... Welcome to Few Miles..
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@ Brian Miller
ReplyDeleteAww, Brian, glad to see you back here.. Thanks * SmileS..
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@ Amity
ReplyDeleteMom, I missed your writings a lot. I love to host one soon just for you to write and I love
to read more of your writings..
Can't say how much I missed, because words can't suffice to express sweetship...
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@ trisha
ReplyDeleteGlad you loved trisha.. SmileS..
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@ Chim's World of Literature
ReplyDeleteyeah it is very hard Chim.. Welcome back to Few Miles..
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@ Roger Owen Green
ReplyDeleteF is for Friends, Family and all F
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@ beccagivens
ReplyDeleteof course there is no place like home.. thanks becca for your words..
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@ azfree
ReplyDeletetrue, anyhow life has to go on right aleza..
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@ Greyscale Territory
ReplyDeleteGemma, glad you loved it and yeah it is..
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@ Lulu Post
ReplyDeleteGlad you loved it and sure I will follow your blog.. SmileS..
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@ rjs mama
ReplyDeleteWow, so sweet of you, will follow you back for sure.. SmileS..
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@ Shashi
ReplyDeleteShashi, whenever you visit my page, you make me smile with your wonderful thoughts.. SmileS, and I can understand your feel..
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@ Gattina
ReplyDeleteThanks Gattina, welcome to Few Miles.. Thanks for the smiles..
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@ Nanka
ReplyDeleteThanks Nanka, so sweet of you..
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@ Joy
ReplyDeleteI too hope the same.. Welcome to Few Miles..
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@ aynsley7
ReplyDeleteGlad you loved it, thanks and SmileS..
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@ Kavita
ReplyDeleteThanks Kavi, SmileS and happy to have you here.. and I know you can understand..
Someone is Special